FF:- Pyaar to hona hi tha-:part 3/pge 2

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hiya everyone!! im called luv angel and am a silent reder in this forum. But all of ur amazing FF inspired me to write one. Its my first so cut me some slack!😳

Part 1

Divya sat on her bed crying her eyes out still remembering all the good times with Amar. It had been exactly three month since she had returned from Banaras but Divya still couldnt forget Amar and evryday her love for him increased!

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'Amar, tu ka hain' Amars mum called. Amar appeared infront of his mum and she took his nazar off.

'Ma, im going, Divya, meri patni or tumhari bahu ko lani' Amars mum smiled and waved as Amar left from his house in Banaras.

(In my story Amar can speak english and is also educated)

So Amar left from his house while Divya stood at her window crying.

What will happen when tow lovers meet, to find out keep reading Pyaar to hona hi tha.

Plz comment-sorry about the hindi-i tried. Sorry its short if i get lots of comments ill update a lot quicker!

xxx

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afghangirl thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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nice start please continue soon. 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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great update, plZ continue soooon<<3
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Sweet start it looks good... 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Great start.. 👏 keep going like that.. cant wait for your next update.. 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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i like it. it sounds cool plz continue soon.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 2

Amar sat on the train thinking about all the good times he had with divya. Opposite him sat a man.

'Hi, tumhra naam khya hain?' asking Amar. But Amar was in a deap thought so didnt hear. The man repeated it agin and this time shacked him as well.Amar suddenly sat up and smiled.

'Sorry, era naam Amar hain or tumhara?'
'Vicky!, tum Dehli jar ri ho'
'Haan or tum'
'Mein be'
There convo carried on like this and by the end of the trip Amar and Vicky were very good friends and they also had one goal. To find their love.

Reaching Dehli, both got of the train and steped on the floor when Divya got up from her sofa and ran tot he window.thinking why she felt Amar was close she just left her room to take her mind of things.

Meanwhile at the train station Amar and Vicky decided to live together in a flat so both of them continued there journey.

Coming down from the srairs Sindoora had something planned which would KILL Divya. She had on purpose put some oil on the stairs so Divya would fall and hurt herself. Divya got closer and was about to step on the stair when..........


will cont soon.
plz comment xxx
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Posted: 17 years ago
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please countinue soon nice short update 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Nice update!
Sorry didn't got time to reply in your 1.part.
But it was good!
Cont soon!

- Charri 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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omg kepp going cant waittt

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