FF[pyaar ishq aur mohabbat] part 12pg 24 - Page 5

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Posted: 17 years ago
#41
Ok Tamz OMG lolz
I never read ds FF of your b4
WOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW What gr8 2 parts omg i love it lolz.
First part how youve described it huh sagar and Vidya hmmmmm lolz.
So Sagar rules all the girls hearts in college 2 lolz. I guess yours too lolz.
What an awesome i just loved it how you described her scarf fallin ove her face and Sagar holding her from falling 😳 How sweet
Now update the nxt part ASAP LOLZ i cnt w8 2 read it
All the Claps that priya gave and theese 2 lolz:
👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#42
aww thnk you soo much<<3
u dnt no how gud i feel ryt now dat so many people liked it, i was scared dat not many people wud like it<<3
but i guess i waas rong<3
thnXX again <333
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Posted: 17 years ago
#43
So sweet 😳
Love it 😊 Great 😉 you are such a good writer. 👏
Keep it up 😊
Thanks for dedicating to me 😃
Con soon
Edited by sayara - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#44
heyy i just caught up
nice FF (please a bigger font 😆 )
sagar and vidya are soo cute 😳

please cont. soon

SA 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#45

NOte: hEY GUYS I NO I HAVENT BEEN ABLE TO UPDATE dis F 4 a long time, but i promise u, tomorrow will be de day where u will find an update to dis FF and a very sweet one indeed<<3

Love, Tahmina aka TamZ😛

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Posted: 17 years ago
#46

chapter 3

hey guys thnXX 4 liking dis FF so far, i apprecite all de love im getting.

Vidya and Shlau were now at home with their mother. Vidya was at the window sill with the light summer breeze in her hair. She smiled pleasantly but was interrupted by Shalu with a tap on her shoulder.

Sha- Vidya woh ladka kon tha jisse tu baath karithi?

V- ooo woh......koi kaas nahin jus main girni waali thi tub woh mujhe bachaaya. Aur kuch nahin.

Sha-oo maine tho socha tha ki......she slightly laughs. Vidya wide-eyed, slapped her back slightly and started chasing her around the room.

Meanwhile............

In sagars bedroom, Sagar was in his rocking chair rocking back and forth thinking about Vidya. He remained there sitting with his eyes closed deep in thought. He kept imagining Vidyas face in his thoughts and the very frst time he met her. As he was smilin, Chinu came in and spotted him with his cte smile on his face.

C- arreey dada, aap aakhen band karke muskuraa kyun rahi hai? Sagar iopened his eyes immediately.

S- uuuhhh,, main bas...uhh.....sorithi.

C- hahah thik hai, choot muth blye, aap kiski yaadon main thi ab? Sagar did not answer but yet again saw Vidyas face in his thoughts and sighed.

S- koi nahin...Chinu looked at him weirdly.

C[thinks] yeh dadaa mujhse kya chuparehe? Kahi dadaa pagal tho nahi hogaya? CHinu giggled and left from the room.

The next day at school.................

Sagar and his frends were playing basketball. Sagar was in his tanktop with his denim jeans on adding a headban on his forehead.[SO HOT] He was busy playing when he sighted Vidya walking around the court in her light pink churridaar. her hair was straight down past her shoulers in a nicely layered cut. Sagar kept staring at her and did not remember he was supposed to amke a shot in the basket.

Tusshhhar- yaar, sagar kaha hai tu yaar, game yaha hai aur tu vaha?...

S- uhh...oo srry maine tho...he puts his hand behind his head. Anywayzz yaar, main zara paani peekar aathi hoon. he goes towards his bag to get water from his water bottle. He opens his water bottle but sees that there is no water. He then goes to the water fountain but cant seem to get water cuZ it is broken. He is dieing of thirst when sudenly a hand brings a ater bottle in front of his face. He looks up and ses that its Vidya looking staright at him with a beautiful smile.

V- yeh lo tumhare liya paani lekar aaya hoon. Maine dekha ki tumhare paas paani nahin tha tho isliye[she looked down] main lekar aayi. Sagar was amased at the way her words flowed and her beauty so mesmerizing.

S- thanks, vaise im Sagar. He lets out his hand.

V- im Vidya, she shakes his hand. Tumne mujhe us din girne se bachaiyi isliye maine socha ki kyu na hun tumhare liye ko ehsaan kare?

S- He goes close to her.- Us din maine koi ehsaan nahin kiya, bas sumjho ki maine ek dost ko bachaaya. Vidya smiled and laughed.

V- tho tum basketbal bhi kelthe ho?

S- ya, meri favorite sport ahi.

V- hmm,....mere bhi. Sagar was utterly shocked hearing tat.

S-kya? tum basket ball kelthi ho?

V- haa, bachpan mainbohoth keltha tha, baraa mazaa hai.

S- wow, im inmpressed. Vidya laughs and looks at him satisfyingly. Both were getting to know eachother.

Precap- SV sitting i the park getting to know eachother. Vidya feels something in her ehart.

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Posted: 17 years ago
#47
Meeee firsttt..wowwww that was sooo awomsommeee👏 TamZ..and thanxx for taking your time to update for us..
Plsssssssss cont soonn
--Nelly
Edited by Nelly34 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#48
Tammy... I loved it!<3333
Mindblowing update!
Don't know why, but I always love your FF! 😆 😳
Cont soon!

- Charri 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#49
Amazing Tamz superb👏 👏 👏
Totally love it 😳
Con soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#50
tamz!!!woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooow what an update thnks soo much 4 it i was diyng 4 it since ages wooooooow!!!!i luvd it tamz!! 👏 i swear i rilly cant get eough of ur FF's thyre sooooo uff ooo good sis!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😃 continue sooooooon pls!!!!jaise sagar ko pyaas lagi hai paani keliye waise mujhe bhi tumhare update kkeliye pyaas lagi hai 😆 😆 once again a biiiiiiiiig round of applaise 4 u tamz!! 👏

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