(FF) Change @ Twilight (Epilogue Pg. 123)

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Meera

@indiandoll89

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Posted: 17 years ago

#811

Originally posted by: muqualp
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meera awesome part yaar! he told her! holy C! wow! but she took it very calmly...hehe niceee

cant wait to see what happenss!

Thanks Muqs!😳😳😳 I'm glad you liked it!😛

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Meera

@indiandoll89

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Posted: 17 years ago

#812

Part 32

"You wouldn't." Sharad says glaring at her.

"Tell us what?" Shaili asks.

"I'm telling them," Neha says, sitting down comfortably.

"Wait—I'll tell them. Although I don't feel comfortable saying it all with these guys here." Sharad says.

All the girls immediately turn and look at their respective guys, who get the message and go to the end of the hall.

"Spill it all." Simran says.

"I'm a vampire." Sharad says blatantly.

For a few seconds, there's complete silence then Shaili speaks.

"Oh whatever," she turns to Neha. "That joke won't work again."

"It's not a joke this time Shaili." Neha tells Shaili.

"What?" she mouths. "You—can't—how is that—even possible?"

"A vampire? You can't be Sharad." Maya says.

"And why not?" He retorts.

"Vampires are supposed—to be—like dark—and they only come out at night—and they have to like suck blood or whatever." Simran says. "He's just trying to pull like the prank of the century on us, whatever I'm not falling for it!"

"If it was the prank of the century as you call it Simran, would I be able to know what you're thinking?" Sharad calmly asks her.

"How—can—you?" Maya just asks him stunned.

"It's one of his 'talents.'" Neha explains.

"I don't know what to say." Shaili says.

"Right now, that's not my main concern. I need to know where Maya got that bracelet from." Sharad says turning his attention back to her.

Nishi and Rushvi

"Are you feeling a bit lonely or is it just me?" Rushvi asks Nishi, as she flips channels on the TV.

"Nope, I'm feeling it too." Nishi admits. "I didn't think they'd all be out for so long."

"You think we should call them and check what's up with them?" Rushvi suggests.

"I think we should." Nishi says, right as the door opens. "You guys are going to live 100 years! We were just thinking about you guys."

"Uh huh—" Simran responds, not really thinking.

"What's going on guys?" Rushvi asks. "Something wrong?"

"You all look like you just found out someone died." Nishi says.

"Kinda." Maya comments.

"What? Explain!" Rushvi says.

The girls tell Rushvi and Nishi everything that Sharad admitted to them.

"So, what did you tell him Maya?" Rushvi asks.

"I took him aside, and told him the truth." Maya says.

"Which is?" Nishi asks.

Maya smiles. "You all will just have to wait and watch!"

I know it was pretty short! I just hope you guys all liked it! Please do leave comments! If I do feel up to it, there will be another update tonight!

Luv ya all loads,

Meera

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Nishi

@Isha

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Posted: 17 years ago

#813

Meera darling...you are naughty..how can you do this to us? How can you end there? Who will pay for my false nails???

COOOLLLL...I am loving every bit of it...

Maya to chupa rustom nikli..she has so many secrets...where did she get that box? Uff you have to continue soon...please at least one more part before June 3rd...

You are such an amazing writer Meera...👏

Edited by Isha - 17 years ago

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Meera

@indiandoll89

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Posted: 17 years ago

#814

Originally posted by: Isha

Meera darling...you are naughty..how can you do this to us? How can you end there? Who will pay for my false nails??? Sorry nishi! but ooo I'll pay for your false nails! I want some now too!😆

COOOLLLL...I am loving every bit of it...Awww I'm glad you did!😛

Maya to chupa rustom nikli..she has so many secrets...where did she get that box? Uff you have to continue soon...please at least one more part before June 3rd... Yup....and...there will be a final two more parts till this ff is over and I promise it'll be before you leave!😳 I need your amazing amazing comments on them!😛

You are such an amazing writer Meera...👏 Thanks Nishi, but I'm no match at all to you! I just read your entire SS again, and reading it all together, makes it so much more emotional!😳

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Nishi

@Isha

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Posted: 17 years ago

#815

^^^ You are such a sweet heart..you reread the whole thing again? Even after I made you cry like a baby in most of the parts 😆 That really means a lot...please let me know if there is any inconsistency in time...

Lets go nails shopping together... 😆 😆 😆

I would love to read the parts before I leave..that would be awesome but hey no pressure...I am coming back soon and can read later too... 🤗

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Meera

@indiandoll89

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Posted: 17 years ago

#816

Originally posted by: Isha
^^^ You are such a sweet heart..you reread the whole thing again? Even after I made you cry like a baby in most of the parts 😆 That really means a lot...please let me know if there is any inconsistency in time... Yeah, it's so special nishi, no one's written a ff about me like that!😳 Makes me happy!😉 and Nishi, there will never be any inconsistency in your writing!😛 EVER!😉

Lets go nails shopping together... 😆 😆 😆 works for me!😉😆

I would love to read the parts before I leave..that would be awesome but hey no pressure...I am coming back soon and can read later too... 🤗 I know, it's not pressure though, I'm taking a break from my other ff, not the bmtd one, and so I'll have enough time to type the big one tonight, I'll call it the eventful one, and then the 'epilogue' type one after that! 😛

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eclipse_101

@eclipse_101

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Posted: 17 years ago

#817

How many updates was that?! I can't believe I beared missing them.

I love how they found out, and the way you wrote it all, it was great... 👏 but...I don't want it ending soon. Please continue for a l'il while longer.. 😳

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muqualp

@muqualp

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Posted: 17 years ago

#818

missy i hate cliff hangers... of all ppl should know! btw gr8 part- now all of them know---i was not expecting that haha, u really surprised me!! now cont soon so we can see what happens!!!!!!!!!!!

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91118

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Posted: 17 years ago

#819

Oh, it was the whole jewelry set? Wow, good job Meera! I didn't even notice the connection. Ooh, this is getting really interesting!

Now all the girls know! I wonder what truth Maya told him...and who is our real Bella? 😛

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Meera

@indiandoll89

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Posted: 17 years ago

#820

Originally posted by: eclipse_101
How many updates was that?! I can't believe I beared missing them.

I love how they found out, and the way you wrote it all, it was great... 👏 but...I don't want it ending soon. Please continue for a l'il while longer.. 😳

Sorry Annu! And awwww I'm glad you liked it!😛 and I promise the next two parts will be nice and long before June 3rd!😉