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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 5

The whole class is screaming loudly after listening the announcement and Mrs Desai is helpless trying to manage them but cudnt! The announcement on the mic was as below :

Hello ..Hello ... Attention everybody! I have an urgent announcement to make. We r going to have an inter college competition in just one week which will comprise of activities like singing, story writing, painting, dumb shots(where a leader acts on a movie and the team mates guess it) and many other.The format of the competition is going to be different as well. Details of the competition shud be checked on the notice board and the forms to be filled and given in the office.Since there are very few days left i had to make the announcement over here. And yeh if we have any winners from our college the principal has decided to throw a party😛

Vidya : wow omg! Kirti i m sure Sagar is going to participate in singing ... i m just going to faint...

Kirti : hehe Vidya ... u r so crazy😆 .... btw, r u thinking to participate in any of them ...

Vidya : ummm .. well no .. i cant sing ... paint ... but i think i shud participate .. i dont want to miss this golden chance of being with Sagar😉

Kirti : y dont u participate for story ? u read so many bks ... u can get ideas frm it 😃

Vidya : oh yeh thts right! wow u r my best friend .. muwaaah😊

Kirti : 😳 oh come on .... i think i shud try for painting ...what say ?😕

Vidya : yeh sure .. do it ... i m always there to help u buddy (she taps Kirti)😃

The bell rings and Vidya and Kirti runs to check the notice board for the details during recess ....

At the notice board the instructions :

The participants of the singers shud sing 2 types of songs :
* romantic
*pop/fast track
* the last 2 finalists will have the rapid fire round.

The participants of the story writing shud submit their stories 1 day before on the following topics :
*love story
*dream/ambition
*the last 2 finalists will have to write the story on the given topic on the spot.

The participants of dumb shots shud get their team mates b4 hand.

The participants of painting shud submit their painting 1 day b4 on the following topics:
*love
*dream/ambition
*the last 2 finalists will be given the topics on the spot.

Vidya : wooooow kool .... this is the best competition i have come across .... and Sagar is going to kill everybody with his romantic songs ......... 😍

Kirti : ok bas bas .. Ms Dreamy ... go n get the forms fr both of us .. i ll get the lunch ...

Vidya : hmm yeh ok ....

Vidya goes near the office to get the form

Vidya : bhaiyya zaraa 2 form dena competition ka

Just then someone comes besides her and asks for the same ... Vidya gets curious to knw who r all participating in the comp. and lks at the person with the corner of her eyes . What she saw is a young handsome dude dressed in black jeans, navy blue T shirt and black jacket above it.

Vidya :😛😳 Sagar! (she whispers) hes lkin so grt today ... 😍

Sagar: bhaiyya zaraa jaldi dena....

Vidya : wow he lks dashing even when he gets angry .. haaaaiiii😆

Sagar feels presence of Vidya and turns to see her ...

Vidya : hello 😊

Sagar: 😕 this is the same girl(he tells himself) ... HI 😕😊 (he tries to smile)

Vidya: omg omg ... i m going to faint! (she runs with the forms to Kirti) Kirtiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

Kirti :yeh whats up ?

Vidya : Sagar told me hiiiii .. i m going to faint over here right nw ...🤪

Kirti : shut up u crazy....

Sagar moves frm there and feels even more disturbed as to what happened ...

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At the Studio:

Divya rushes to the studio to see whats the prob.

Mr Bhatia : Oh here she comes! hello Ms Divya...meet this man .. he is Mr Oberoi ... THE MAN OF TV INDUSTRY ...

Divya : hello Mr Oberoi... nice 2 meet u😊

Mr Oberoi tries to see if Divya can do his job...

Divya : So whats the prob?

Mr Bhatia : well u will have to shoot for the advertisement of an icecream. u knw its summer😆 ... and we need to replace our model since shes is busy with her other shootings.... Mr Oberoi is the main producer and if he likes u he may even sign u for many other projects 😉

Divya : umm well ... what do i need to do ?

Mr Bhatia: first of all change this dress.. here take this

Divya was given a dress with a cap which lked like below:





When Divya wore and came out Mr Oberoi thought tht he has finally got his lady for his next project.

Mr Oberoi : PERFECT!

Mr Bhatia : Lets start the shooting ... take this ice cream.. (he gave divya a cone and gave her directions)

Divya took the cone took a bite from it then lick her lips saying yummm then keeping the cone near her cheeks said the below line:

You scream, I scream, We all scream for Ice cream ...
Then she gives a flying kiss to the audience "muwaaaaaaaaaah"

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😆😆😆 I tried something new. Did u all like it? Please leave comments and suggestions😊Thanks!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Wow! I loved it! 👏 👏 👏
Really like you FF!<3333
Cont soon!
😃
- Charri 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: charri7878

Wow! I loved it! 👏 👏 👏
Really like you FF!<3333
Cont soon!
😃
- Charri 😳



hey charri thanks a lot dear 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#74
Oh my God Affy! 😛
I totally loved this update.
Awesome idea with the ice-cream spot! That's amazing.

Oh and I love the idea with the competition. 😳

The dress is stunning too. I'll snatch it away from Divz. 😆 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Little Foot

Oh my God Affy! 😛
I totally loved this update.
Awesome idea with the ice-cream spot! That's amazing.

Oh and I love the idea with the competition. 😳

The dress is stunning too. I'll snatch it away from Divz. 😆 😆



thanks mandy
lol .... mandy ...... try it out if divz gives it 2 u 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
#76
sorry i took so long to write a reply, school work and all.
that was great,loved how you used visuals to show us what you thought. Haii, i think i would be the same as vidya, but more cool in front saagar, you know, acting as if i dont care. Loved the photo shoot idea, that dress is o die for.
Your improving quite a bit,from the beginning of the story. Excellent!!! 😛 LOVE IT
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Posted: 17 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: salmalovesrk

sorry i took so long to write a reply, school work and all.
that was great,loved how you used visuals to show us what you thought. Haii, i think i would be the same as vidya, but more cool in front saagar, you know, acting as if i dont care. Loved the photo shoot idea, that dress is o die for.
Your improving quite a bit,from the beginning of the story. Excellent!!! 😛 LOVE IT



hey salma its ok ... and thanks for the comments ...
u knw what, i m gonna use those visuals quite often ... and abt improving i already have the story in mind so dnt knw .... anyway thanks a lot 😃😳😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#78
Part 6

At the studio :
As soon as Divya finishes her shoot, Mr Oberoi was stunned and surprised. He felt i havent come across a model who lks so beautiful and can act so well.Mr Bhatia was just abt to clap ... when...

Mr Oberoi : Mindblowing ... u r a superstar... 👏👏👏 u can reach heights my girl .... u dont have a place in this studio ... ur place is in the film industry ...

Divya was tired and was wiping herself when she stopped after listening to Mr Oberoi

Divya: FILM INDUSTRY 😲 ?

Mr Oberoi : yeh! will u work for my next film named DIL SE DOSTI ?

Divya cudnt think and was confused what to do ... she just asks Mr Bhatia

Mr Bhatia : take it Ms Divya .. Mr Oberoi is a very grt person .. he wont let u down ...

Mr Oberoi : if u r so confused then let me tell u the details of the film .... take this .. this is the script ... these r few co stars tht will be working with u ... (he hands divya few pictures)

Divya just glances at them as she was nt interested ... she started lking at the pictures when she came across a picture of a handsome guy...

Divya : whose this? is he in a film as well ?

Mr Oberoi : oh this is Mr.Tushar Kapoor ... he was a model as well and then after his shoot he accepted to do a film with me .. he is the male lead in the film ...

Divya : ooww(raised one of her eyebrow) .. she lks at the pics more precisely ...

Mr Oberoi : yes ... u r going to have a benefit of working with a new person ...u dont need to be nervous

Divya : (in her mind) nervous ?! who the hell wants to work ...?
(to Mr Oberoi) ummm ... well i m not interested in doing a big film ... i m ok with my modelling ...

Mr Oberoi : come on dear ... u can take time to think ... take suggestions ... then tell me ...

Divya : umm alright .. as u say ...

Divya leaves for home ...

At home :

Divya's mom: (trying to shout at her) where did u go this early morning ..

Divya : well i had to work for an advt .... Mr Bhatia had to replace the model urgently

mom: oh ok ... (asking her curiously) so did u gt any offers frm tv industry or may be film industry (she bcoms more excited) ..

Divya : yes i did frm a film industry

mom: (never expected the answer) WHAT?!

Divya : yes .. but i m nt interested a bit!

Mom : shut up ... did u refused it ?

Divya : yes i did .. but they still gave me a chance ...

mom : oh grt ... come on ... call them and tell them yes right away (forcing her)

Divya : uff no mom ...

Mom: dare u refuse me! do it just nw ..

Divya : okies ... 😔

Divya finally calls Mr Bhatia and agrees to do the movie just for the sake of her mom..........

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5 days later :
At Vidya's house in her room :

Vidya to herself : umm so i need to start writing the 2 stories nw .. need to submit it tomorrow ... ok let me start a love story ...

She thinks deep of what she read b4 and started writing a love story titled 'A Beautiful Love Story' ... she glances thru her novels to get good ideas frm them ...

Vidya : aah .. muwaah Vidya u r so talented😃😳 this lks a beautiful love story .. a story between Sagar and Vidya 😆 (she just jks) ok nw this is going to be difficult ... a story abt a dream .. 😕 well my dream is to become a model ..something related to fashioning ...but a story on it?

She gets up and tries to see any magazine which can give her any ideas ... she lks at her wardrobe which ws full of different kinds of bks and magazine like a library..

Vidya : (glancing thru few magazines) ok this is Filmi Take , Star Tales , Teen Models ... yeh this will help me ...

As she reads those names .. she remembers something ....

Vidya: omg ... Kirti had given me tht bag .. where is it .. i have still nt opened it ...

She tries to search each n every corner of her wardrobe ..but cudnt find it anywhere!

Vidya : omg ... where is it gone ? i need to call Kirti and ask her what was inside it

She calls Kirti

Kirti : hey Vidya ... hru doing ? hw come u call me so late?

Vidya : Kirti ... a problem ... a real big one ..

Kirti : oh Vidya .. dont be so upset ..tell me whats it ?

Vidya : i m nt able to find the bag u gave me ... what was inside it .. was it a magazine as i assumed ..

Kirti : oh omg .. well there were some big posters of photo shoot of a model ... i really dont knw who was it ... let me ask my sister ..she gave it to me and i passed it 2 u

Vidya : ok do it fast .... i ll hang on ..

After a while ...

Kirti : Vidya, Di told me there were photo shoot pics of Divya Nanda, shes a model ... well find it out later .. dont get upset .. nw do ur story well ....

Vidya : yeh ok thanks ... did u complete with ur paintings ..

Kirti : not really ... will take time ...

Vidya : ok u take care and seeya

Later Vidya thinks of a title 'My Dream, my fathers nightmare'
and writes a story on it.

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Precap : the day of competition and new entry (Sagar's Girlfriend)

Hope u all like it .. please leave comments.. thanks😊



talkativetaurus thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: narmz

that was awesome.... 👏



thanks narmeen 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Great update!
Love the way you have 2 love story's in one!
Cont soon!
- Charri 😛

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