FF:Three Birds with One Stone- April 19 pg 80 - Page 52

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: SVlover

OMG Radhika 😆😆 You don't need to be THAT happy. It makes me feel guilty about not updating for soooo long. 😆 The update will be up sometime tomorrow. 😊

😃😃 yay!! plz pm me when u do!! thanks!! cant wait!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
A little recap since it's been, oh, about..... three months since the last update 😆😆:

Radha sees a man and runs away from the park she was at. She takes a bus, ends up at Central Park, and just about cries her eyes out.

Now this update is all because of Radhika and Ravjot. If they hadn't pressurized me to write anymore then maybe this FF would be long gone 😆 So thank you guys! Love ya!

Part 35

Radha

The setting sun across the horizon turned the sky into a tye-dye of pinks, reds, and oranges. It seemed like the vision of an artist. The perfect view.

I didn't know how long I'd been staring up at the clouds. I was guessing it had been a while because dusk was approaching. Wiping my eyes, I slowly stood up from the ground. My knees were a bit shaky, but I managed to walk downhill to the sidewalk of the park. I was looking at the ground as I moved along so I didn't realize when I bumped into someone.

"I'm sorry," I said, looking up to see who it was.

"Radha? Radha! Oh, my God! Where have you bee
n?" Utterly surprised, I stared up at Rohan. The anger and worry in his eyes confused me. But then I realized that he must have been searching for me. I had been away from campus for so long that the others must have noticed my absence, hence, this unexpected meeting with Rohan. But what was more visible than the concern in his face was the relief. It seemed as if he had found a new life or something.

Before I could speak, he pulled me into his arms and I recieved the most painful rib-crushing hug ever. "I found you!" He said. "I finally found you! Gosh, I'm so happy, Radha. You have no idea." He pulled away from me only to gaze into my eyes with such an affection that- Oh my goodness. He was staring at me with affection. Why was staring at me like that? That didn't make me feel quite comfortable. I searched his eyes for something other than what I saw. Perhaps I had made a mistake. It couldn't be what I thought it was...

The happiness on his face slowly changed back to concern. "Were you crying, Radz? What happened?" He put his hand on my cheek. And there was that uneasy feeling again. I turned away from him, but he held my hand and stood in front of me once more.

He repeatedly asked me what was wrong, why I looked so sad, and why I left without telling anyone. How could I tell him that I had no answers to his questions? Maybe I did have some answers, but I just couldn't find it in me to speak, for if I spoke, my world would come crashing down again. I didn't want to think about what happened or who I saw because admitting it would make me feel like there was no escape from this problem. The harsh reality would once more unfold itself before me. And this time I had no strength to bear its burden.

But what added to the pain was what I saw in Rohan's eyes today. I hadn't seen it a long time. I didn't want to see it. It brought back the past, the dark past that was unfortunately a part of my life.

All these thoughts were enough to cause the tears to spill over again for what seemed like the hundredth time today. All I saw before my vision blurred was the confusion and distress on Rohan's face and the love, yes love, in his eyes.

"I'm tired..." I cried. "I'm tired of... everything." My shoulders shook with my grief-filled sobs. I permitted the unbearable pain to take over me. I allowed the depression of two years to wash over me like the waves of the ocean. But most of all, I let the regret I felt for this boy in front of me who was now wrapping his arms around my body fill my heart because he had no idea, whatsoever, as to what a sad fate he had decided to put his heart in.

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Now don't throw shoes at me. I know it wasn't the longest update ever, but it's going somewhere. And, yes, I know I'm the worst writer ever, but I seriously had no idea where this story was going. But now I think I'm getting the hang of it.

Ariba 😛

Edited by SVlover - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
WOW!!
I almost cried! Ariba..superb as usual!!
Please don't vanish again and let us know about this mystery guy and the event that took place two years ago..Why is she that sad? The pain nearly crushed my heart...
I am glad Rohan is there and RR are going to be a couple..I think they are going to rock! They have amazing chemistry...awkwardness of first love, cuteness of admission and realization through pain and suffering...I love these two...
wonderfully written...Bravooooo
Off topic, where have you been? Missed you...
Edited by Isha - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Thank u so much for the update Ariba.......its so wonderful....
Please don't missing again....we missed u..
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: SVlover


Now this update is all because of Radhika and Ravjot. If they hadn't pressurized me to write anymore then maybe this FF would be long gone 😆 So thank you guys! Love ya! luv ya too!!



Now don't throw shoes at me. I know it wasn't the longest update ever, but it's going somewhere. And, yes, I know I'm the worst writer ever, but I seriously had no idea where this story was goingyoure not the worst writer!! me loves your ff!! . But now I think I'm getting the hang of it. good, so update soon, youre gonna kill me with suspense!!!!! luved it, grreat potrayal of feeling, bye!!


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Posted: 16 years ago
Ariba!! You're back after aagggeeess!!!
Missed you and your FF soooo much.....and the update made me cry...how do you write so well?? Aaww...what's the secret?? I'm glad that Rohan's there to look after Radha...please continue soon!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
Ariba diiiiiiiiiiiiii!!!!!
Long time no see!! Where have you been??? Missed you!
Well I haven't read the update yet.....will edit after.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Aww you write so beautifully Ariba!! Especially the ending - Rohan not knowing what a sad fate he put his heart in! Poor Radha...I really want to know what this past is. Longer parts longer parts longer parts...!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
update when u have time plz Ariba di, can't wait till the next update!! and plz dont take the anti-update pill!! (that was suppossed to be a joke, but if u felt offended, i am verry srry)
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Posted: 16 years ago
THanks so much for updating! I am so happy you updated! Awwwwwwwwww......what happened with Radha? Please continue soon! bye! Luv ya! Oh yeah......HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY!
Radika😊

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