**Najane kab hua-prt 5 updted! page 3!**

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey guys I'm starting a new FF and it is called 'NAJANE KAB HUA-YEH DIL TUMPE FIDA'

SAAGAR: a guy from a small town, middle class family, and not that poor he is caring sensible and knows how to live with others happily he has to go through a test in which consists of love, life, and honour…

VIDYA: a girl from a high class family, she has a lot of fame and name, she is a singer she is very stubborn, and immature and she is also highly rich one day she falls in love with a small town guy and then goes through many sorrows and then understands the real meaning of love and life…

Part 1

V's mom: vidya! utho hume concert keliye deri hojayegi

vidya:o mom please! No! Not today kal party mein zyaada drink karli thi aur ab sar mein bahot dard hai ab mujse nahi hoga I wont be able to sing properely please mom!

v's mom: c'mon vidya chalo utho warna you wont get this contract and they have called you urgently for your voice sample

vidya:but, mom do I have to?

v's mom:of course you have to dear ab chalo utho

vidya:ok mein abhi tayar hoke aati hoon aur sahana's coming na…

v's mom:yes beta sahana's coming

then vidya and her mom including her little sister sahana get ready and jump into the car

v's mom:ok vidya gaadi start karo wese bhi were already late

vidya:mom Im just doing so…

sahana:di mein aapke saath stage pe aasakti hoon kya?

vidya:ok baba lekin mere saath stage pe kyun ana hai its just a sample no ones gonna b there..

sahana:ok then in the concert maybe?

vidya:sure of course you're my little sister you got it k sis

sahana:k di!

They reach the studio and vidya gives a sample of her voice by singing

(Link to this song it may help to open up the song)-

http://ww.smashits.com/music/hindi-movie/play/songs/4493/Ins an/39235/Khwahish.html

Note- am only writing the female parts

'la la la la la…dil mein ek khaish hai..tum pyaar karo itna-x 2

kiya na ho jaha mein kabhi kisine kisise jitna dil mein ek khaish hai..tum pyaar karo itna…pehli wafa ka saawan banke mujpe baras jao…saason ki rasme dheere dheere jaan mein utharjao..mere sanam...mere sanam…itni farmayish hai tum pyaar karo itna..kiya na ho jaha mein kabhi kisine kisise jitna…dil mein ek khaish hei tum pyaar karo itna…'

im sorry I know this part was extremely short but its bcoz it was a simple introduction

index

part 1-page 1

part 2-page 2

part 3-page 2

part 4-page 3

part 5-page 3

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey cool start!!!! 👏 👏 👏
OMG!!! Vidya drinks 😲....
Anyways sounds interesting... Plzzzz continue soon..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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interesting ff...and what's this? vidya drinks? 😲 she's a rebel! 😆 cont. soon! 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
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ya she drinks bcuz she is a rich and famous girl 😉 and she goes to high class parties etc: u get me..right? 😉 anyways ill b continuing soon thnks 4 all the comments... 😆 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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heyS Great start i really like it<333
plZ continuE sOOOOOn<33333333
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey guys heres the next update thnks for all your comments!

Part 2

Recap-vidya introduction

Vidya: ok is the sample voicing over now?

Music director: yes ma'am you are the voice of this new film

Vidya: ok when shall I start the rehearsals?

Music director: from tomorrow onwards until 6 weeks I will give you a copy of the schedule ma'am

Vidya: from tomorrow! no you can't be serious right because I am very busy on top of that tomorrow is my central India concert and I will have to go to pune for that concert

V's mom: don't worry beta mein kuch Na kuch intezar karloongi

Vidya: tikhe mom

sagar's mom: sagar! tumhe office jaana heina

sagar:haan ma abhi atha hoon

s's mom:jaldi karo wese bhi late hochuke ho kab aana hei tumhare papa niche darwaze par khare hei

sagar:aya ma ek minute papa, lo agaya,chaliye na papa

s papa:chal aur chinu kaha hai

chinu:hum yaha hei papa chalo

s papa:haan bete chalo

they go to office…. and as you know that sagar is from a middle class family but he isn't poor they are quite rich not bad but not like millionaires(sagar is a photographer and he video's concerts-thts his profession)

vidya: sahana c'mon utho hume concert mein jaana hai na

sahana:kya?..o concert!!!!!sorry di mein bhul gayi

vidya:tikhe ab utho mujhe jaldi jaana hai practice keliye

warna gaane ka lines bhul jaoongi ok now get up ill see you downstairs ok sahana

sahana:yes okay!

vidya:wat shall I wear

sahana: saree!

vidya:saree!par I don't like wearing sarees as you know

sahana:di aapke gaane ke saath saaree jayega bcuz your song is bole chudiyan, par mein ho saree hi pehen rahi hoon bcuz mujhe dance karna hai na

Vidya: ok but which colour?

sahana: um...... cream ya light blue other wise hot pink

vidya:I think hot pink

sahana:cool tho mein bhi hot pink pehen leti hoon k

vidya:ok nw lets go down pir aake jewellery matching karna heina

sahana:haan!lets go

they go downstairs finish breakfast and they both go to the studio for a dress rehearsal and vidya is looking soooooo pretty!!!!in a hot pink saree

music director:ok ma'am now ready 1, 2 and 3 go!

vidya(sings bole chudiyan)

'bole chudiyan, bole kangna, hay mein hogayi…teri sajna tere binjiyo nayyo lagta mein tho margayya….leja leja,,,dil lejja lejja,lejja soniye lejja lejja,lejja lejja haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa…'-then she finishes her song and rehearses a few more times and comes back home…

vidya:ma hum log agaye

v's mom:ok then tum logo ke reherals kese gayye

sahana:very good ab raat ko concert hai aur promotion bhi hona hei ek office

se naam kya tha ha! somiya business group the top office in town

vidya:ok ab chalo upar jewellery match karni nahi hei kya

sahana:oh yeah my fav part lets go

v's mom:jaoo mein un logo ko contact karke

sagar:papa aaj tho promotion hai singer ki tho aap iss file par sign kardenge thaake mein waha promotion kar sakoo

s's dad:haan beta chinu ko sath lekar jaana aur meine camera man se kehdiya hei ki wo studio poch jaye tikhe…

sagar:haan papa mein waha uss singer ki sign lene keliye jaoonga

sagar is doing vidyas promotion and he is the one launching her 2nd concert so they have never met before and this time they will meet and to know what happens next plz leave comments….priya

precap: sagar drops the pen and vidya and sagar are together about to pick it up and they bump their heads..ouch!!!

leave comments..priya😉

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Posted: 17 years ago
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thnx for da update....
plz countinue as soon as possible !

...Narmeen...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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nice update 😃 continue soon! 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thnk you for all comments...

Part 3

Recap- sagar is going to take the singer's (vidya's) sign on the contract but he doesn't know her yet

sagar:c'mon crew we have to leave now the singer has arrived in the studio

man:here sir aapka camera ready hai

sagar:thanks

They all reach the studio including sagar and vidya has her back turned towards the audience (she is only rehearsing so there is no audience)

music director: lights, camera, action!

sagar: fan pls!(he shoots some picz of vidya turning her back but he hasn't seen her face yet)

as the fan starts vidya's hair blows in the wind and sagar is taking pics coz he's a photographer…

vidya:(sings) bole chudiyan….

and as she turns around sagar sees her face and drops his camera opening his mouth staring at her

vidya:(to herself) ye mujhe eise kyun dekraha hai…

sagar:OMG! ye itni pyaari hai…

chinu:kya hua dada kaun pyaari hai

sagar snaps out of it

sagar:hmm..kya!

chinu: take pics dada

sagar:oh yeah!

Sagar takes pics as vidya sings…but still being lost in his own world

music director:cut! finished , have you taken the pics?

sagar:ya!

music director: Thanks…inki copy nikaldijiye ga

sagar makes double copies of them bcuz hes keeping the first lot and giving the other lot to the director

sagar:ji..wo.. muje aapki sign chaiye yaha

vidya:pen dijiye…

sagar:haan

sagar is passing the pen but hes jus staring at her at the same time and the he lets the pen fall outta his hand and it falls on the ground

they both try pick it up but bump their head at the same time

vidya, sagar: ouch!!!!

sagar, vidya:sorry(both laugh)

vidya:hmm ye lijiye sign kardiya

sagar: thnks….aap..your very pretty

vidya: (smiles)thanks

music director: ma'am

vidya:yes kya hua

music director: aapki rehearsals khatam hogaye hai now you may go home

vidya:thanks chal sahana

sahana:ok di

vidya:bye

sagar:bye…

vidya: wonder why I was getting such a weird feeling when I was next to that guy..uff anyways on with the work

And she ignores it

sagar:wah! kya thi wo ladki itni khusurat insan meine duniya mein kabhi nashi dekhi hai..anyways bk to work…

he also ingnores it

next day….(morning)

sagar has woken up and he opens his wardrobe to get out clothes and then suddenly all vidya's pics fall out he looks at them and smiles then puts them back in

vidya has woken up and she goes over to her wardrobe and then a pen falls out she smiles seeing it

vidya:arey ye pen tho uss photographer ki hai manna padega kitna cute ladka tha he looked so charming –smiles again)

chinu:dada aap kya dekrahe

sagar:(hides the pic) wo..chinu kuch nahi wo kuch kagzad aur kuch nahi

chinu:o..anyways dada aap keliye doosri contract hai singer ki

sagar:kaha se hai

chinu:wo koi central India wali concert jo ki pune hone wali hai aur saare famous singers arahe hai aur aapko unka photo session karna hai aap keliye liye randomly 5 singers select hue hai aur aapko unka photo session kara hoga

sagar:ok rakdo table par baad mein sign karloonga

chinu:acha dada jese aap tik samje mein yaha chod kar jaraha hoon

sagar:thnks chinu!

chinu:no prolem dada bye

sagar:bye

sahana:vidya di! aap iss pen ko eise kyun dekrahe hai

vidya:huh? wo kuch nahi sahana jaoo tum niche mein aati hoon

she outs the pen back in her wardrobe

sahana:di lekin mein aapko ye batane keliye ayi thi ki mom ne kaha hei ki aaj aapka photo session hai call ayatha director se..kaha ki aapko ye photo session ka contract sign karna padega

vidya: tikhe rakdo ill sign(she signs)ye lo ab niche jao mein arahi hoon

sahana:k di!

sagar:o fo subhe subhe hazaron papers sign karne padte hai god!

vidya:o fo har din ek na ek contract sign karna hi padta hai god!

v's mom: vidya tum agayi beta baitho, aaj pune wale concert ke rehearsals hei jaana padega tumhe jaldi nashta karlo ok

vidya:ok mom par pehle photo studio jana hoga photo session keliye

v's mom:haan tikhe

s's mom: sagar beta niche aake nashta karlo!

sagar:nahi ma samay nahi hai mujhe photo session keliye jaana hoga

s ma:tikhe par nashta tho karlo

sagar:ma pls aaj nahi anyways chalte hoon bye

s ma:ok beta bye

sagar:bye ma!

both sagar and vidya are going to the studio sagar they both reach there

vidya:aap!

sagar:aap!

vidya:haan meri photo sesson hei na

sagar:really o mera bhi

they both go to reception

vidya:hi I have a photo session today

lady:yes ma'am can you tell me your name pls

vidya: vidya, vidya sarel

sagar hears it

sagar(to himself) vidya…!

lady:ok ma'am you r session is in studio 3 with photographer sagar pratap singh

sagar:o thts me!

vidya: kya o.. k…chaliye

sagar:you first

vidya:thnks

precap:sagar tells vidya to turn around for one of the photos and as she does this she is abt to trip bcuz of her high heels and sagar catches her from behind…they stare into each others eyes….

thts all plz leave comments…priya

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Posted: 17 years ago
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thnx for the update....
plz countinue soon 😳

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