New SS: Mine...comment page 2

Hello all you dahlings!
It's been a long time since I wrote something here so I thought I might as well write a short story! This is my very first one on BMTD forum.

It's a soft romantic one. I hope you all will adore it! Please pm me if you have any problems with it, sorry if some things are…well, improper😕😆.

This SS is not a typical SV (it's a one shot)...just a little bit of fun- but obviously it's about them! Their personalities are the same, but their attitude, you might find, is now more open!

Please ignore any improper use of syntax or incorrect vocabulary. I am sick and tired.

Synopsis (riddle form): A golden angel descends a staircase to her doom. She searches for her saviour. Will they find one another?

❤️ always
Sweetu
p.s. let me make this clear, this is a ONE PART only SS.

He watched silently as his princess descended the staircase, her appearance met with an enthusiastic applause.

Their eyes met from a distance, and an electric current jolted through his muscular frame. He couldn't help but admire his wife, a lustful desire enveloping his mind.

The baby green chiffon sari she wore clung to her protectively, showing subtle hints of skin. The blouse was more revealing, the back bare and the fabric barely clinging together with two simple threads. Her hair was set loose, curling softly at the end, and on her neck she adorned a diamond necklace.

He relished in her sight.

Sagar wanted to touch her, hold her tight. Wisk her away from their guests, yet their curiosity would not lest her be. She was surrounded by a mob of people.

He could not reach her.

Sighing he turned away, downing his champagne, and walked towards his business associates. Tonight would be a long night.


It had been two long hours since she had last seen him.
She missed him, she needed him.

Vidya felt suffocated by the crowd that surrounded her, mostly women. Their jealousy was evident and their fake smiles even more so.

Rich snobs.

She suddenly just wanted to get away, no longer having the capacity to keep smiling and talking "like" them. Making an excuse she hurried away, intending to find Sagar, hoping to still see him chatting with his best friend, Dev.

Ten minutes of searching she spotted Dev, but no pathi. Feeling dejected she turned to check the gardens outside, willing against hope that he would be there.

She wanted him to hold her, feel his strong chest against her own.

Suddenly, two warm hands encircled her waste, her petite body being pulled backwards. She intended to scream in alarm, yet the gentle voice that rumbled softly stopped her.

It was him.

"Come here baby, I want to hold you" Sagar purred softly, his breathe fanning her ear.

She blushed, mortified at their open intimacy, what would their guests think? After all this was their 2 year anniversary party. Some level of decency was required, they couldn't behave like teenagers.

"Yeh…tum…apph…what are you doing?" she whispered, her voice barely audible.

He chuckled, kissing her softly on the neck, nuzzling her shoulder.
"Doing what I wanted to do two hours ago. It's not fair that those h*gs get you to themselves." his voice filled with jealousy

"Sagar…don't call them that" her tone intending to sound reprimanding but instead turning out amused.

"What? Why…that's what they are. I hate it when they show off. It's irritating." He confessed innocently "Must they wear make up, it makes them look old instead of young."

She laughed.

"No seriously. You think I am joking? I feel sorry for their husbands for having such over dressed h*gs! Why can't they be like you?"

Vidya turned to face him, her hand balancing against his chest. His eyes were intoxicating, filled with a promise for later…at night. Her cheek reddened her heartbeat increasing. Her stomach tightened, filling with a desire to kiss his jaw, the stubble only adding to his handsome appearance. The feeling intensified as he bent down.

Their lips brushed, and he took her in a passionate kiss, delving his tongue deep into her mouth.

She was an addiction to his soul, she helped him breathe. Without her he was nothing.

The couple went unnoticed amongst the crowd, their bodies hidden by a large stone pillar.

The hall that was immersed in nonsense chit chatter moments ago suddenly filled with music. A romantic slow song started up, and he pulled her closer, releasing her quivering lips from the caress.

"Dance with me baby. Let me hold you. I want to sway with you."

She obediently leant her head against his chest, allowing their fingers to entwine. Their bodies stuck in simple motion of swaying.

Vidya closed her eyes, enjoying the soft tingle of the music. He was her saviour, her prince charming. She felt his lips on her head, and she looked up.

"Beautiful" he murmured "My angel"

Tears formed in her eyes, the depth of his love evident in the way he looked at her. He made her feel she was the only one.

His hand reached out, his fingers curling at the end of her chin, tipping her head closer to his lips.

" Don't cry"

"I…I'm not"

He laughed, the rumble sending shivers through her spine "Happy anniversary baby…I love you"

Her tears fell.

"No crying…hush now" he whispered against her mouth, his lips capturing her soul in a killing kiss.

I love you too Sagar.

1st! Hey luvly story!! Cont. soon dear!!!

ohhh... sounds really goooood ... excellent descriptions ...and your use of vocabularly .. don't have any words left to say 😆 ... apart from that wonderful job 😃 😃

sooo cute...continue soon plz 👏

awwww super cute!!!!! n super romantic!!!!! if inly sagar would act lik tat in the show... hehehe 😳 great job!!!! 👏 👏 👏 ~niti~

Thank you a million time to the seven people who took the time to reply to my first ever short story here on BMTD. It really means a lot that you took the time.

Thank you: Chevi, patelzz, amrawazeer, LoveSharad, adventure_gurl, ramsha1990 and infiniti1215

I will be replying to your comments individually as well! Thank you once again, it really means a lot to me! 😳 😛 .

I would also like to thank my silent readers. I know you are there as well...I do hope that one day when and if i write another one you will post your comments! But thank you for reading. It means the world to me.

Lots of love and best wishes
Sweetu ❤️