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Posted: 17 years ago
#91
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AMAZING!!!!I thought u'd never continue...But It was FANTASTIC...I jsut loved it...
Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update as soon as possible... 😃
Ayesha 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#92
thanks a tonne, Ayesha! I am glad u liked it...the update will be coming wuite soon...tomorrow porbably!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#93

Sorry guys. No matter how much I say I'll update ASAP...I never get to doing it. I am really very sorry.

Well...here's the latest update.


Precap: Sin gasps as Vidya turns up at their chaukhat. With a beautiful black saree bordered with gold. Her face lights up as she examines the house and the faces who she met in Banaras.
~*~

SM:
Vidya! Vidya...meri bachhi! (She runs towards V taking her into an intense embrace) Kaisi ho beta? Hame maaf kar dena...hum...hum...tum hamare ghar ki ulhann toh ban gayi...par ek dulhann ka darja tumhe ham nahin d paaye..

V: Aap kaisi baatein kar rahin hain maa! Maafi toh hame..

Sin interrupts her...

Sin:
Teri itni jurrat! Tumne jo hamare papa ke saath kiya uske baad tumhari himmat kaise hui, is ghar kei dehleez par paaon rakhne ki?!

SM: Sindoora! Yeh kya anaap shanaap..

S: Maa....aap log bahut patar patar bolte ho...main chala sone...gudnight sab log! (he yawns and runs upstairs.)

Sin:
Sahi toh keh rahi hoon main! Aur aap...aap beech main na hi bolein toh behtar hai. Zaroor apne papa ko uksaya hoga...ise is ghar ki dlhann banane ke liye...ab bhogiye apni karni ka phal!

Uma's brother: Sindoora...tumhe Vidya ke bare main aisa bolne ka koi haqq nahin hai!

Sin: acha...toh a aap mujhe..sindura singh ko sikhayenge ki kise kiske baare main kya bolna chahiye!

Uma's brother: Main nahin...kanoon kehta hai aisa...

Sin: Aap kya baqwaas kar rahe hain?! Kanoon kahaan se aagaya beech main! huh! Aise bol rahe hain jaise Vidyais puri jaaydaat ki maalqin hai!

Uma's brother: Sahi farmaya tumne. (A puzzled Sin turns to look at him.) Thakur saheb ke mutaabiq...Singh parivaar ki puri jaaydaat ki maalqin...ab Vidya Sagar Pratap Singh hai.

Sindoora's fists clenched so tightly, her knuckles turned white.

Sin:
Yeh kya bol rahe hain aap. Aisa ho hi nahin sakta. YEh...yeh ladki...lagti kya hai hamari?

SM: Yeh chhoti thakuraain hai, Sindoora. Yeh Vidya Sagar Pratap Singh hai, aur yeh is parivaar ki dlhann hai.

Sin: (now screaming) Khaakh Dulhann hai!!! Papa puri jaaydaat iske naam kar rahe hain...jise woh sahi tarah se jaante bhi nahin. Ghar main hum sab unka business aur property sambhaalte hain...aur phal mila kise!? ISE??? IS "DULHANN" KO??

SM: Tumhare papa ko, sahi galat main farkh karna bahut achhi tarah se aata tha. Vidya se behtar Dulhann hame mil hi nahin sakti thi! Bhaisaheb, aap Vidya se sign karwaaiye...property ke kaagzaat par.

Uma's brother nodded, and quickly walked over to the dining table, where a whole bunch of folders were kept. He returned with a small stack of papers, which supposedly were the property papers.

Uma's brother:
Yeh kaagazaat sign kardo, Vidya.

V: Par..hum kaise...abhi abhi toh hum yahan...aur phir hame...

SM remembers the day when they discovered that V was unpadh...

V:
ji woh...hame angootha lagana hoga...

Sin, Mahua, Chandra, and Karthik begin to laugh.

Sin:
Tum...padh likh nahin sakti?? Hahahaha!!Tum ek angootha chhaap ho! (She straightens up.) Aur aap log aisi gawaardehaati..anpadh ke naam jaaydaat de rahe hain..

UB:Padhne likhne se aadmi bada nahin ho jata...uske sanskaar sabse jada maayne rakhte hain. Lo Vidya, ispe apna angootha laga do.

Apparently embarrassed, Vidya puts he angootha on the pages, leaving an angry Sindoora to bore her glares into her.

Precap: S entangles V's saree to his chair.

That was all for now guys! will continue soon for sure...and this time, I MEAN IT! 😛

Annu

Edited by eclipse_101 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#94
yeah I hope Vidya learns to read soon, so she can show them who is boss! 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#95
tht was a very cute update...Hope next time Vidya is supposed to sign sumthin, it'll be for real! 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 i think you noe were i'm goin...plz conitnue soon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#96
Thank you Ramsha, Sonali, Afzeel, and Dimple! thank you so much...Ur comments keep me going. 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#97
thnx for da update ..... ! plz cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#98
aww...thanks Asma and Narmz...will do for sure... 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Recap: Apparently embarrassed, Vidya puts her angootha on the pages, leaving an angry Sindoora to bore her glares into her.

*~!~*Latest Update*~!~*



SM took the papers with the signatures and gave them to UB. (UB is Uma's {SM's} brother.) He walked over to the dinner table and put the papers away. Meanwhile, SM started walking back to her room. Eventually, the entrance of the Singh mansion cleared up. But Vidya, unsure of where to go stood there...waiting for someone to come and tellher where she should go. They wouldn't just leave her stranded there, obviously.

It was a while till SM returned. She was holding an "aarti ki thaali. Vidya never noticed her though, as she was busy admiring her new sasuraal.

SM: Dulhann, tum aaj apne sasuraal main pravesh kar rahi ho...

V: (turns around and realizes what SM meant) Par maa, yeh sab...

SM: Bidhi hai, beta. Sab nayi Dulhann ke saath aisa hota hai. (with a chuckle) Mujhe bhi jhelna pada tha.

V: Maa, maine kab kaha mujhe jhelna pad raha hai...

SM and Vidya broke into a laugh.

SM: Mahua! Chandra! Apni bhabhi kepravesh ke liye sab saamaan lao!

*~!~*Continued*~!~*

Mahua and Chandra appear in the doorway with a kalash in their hands, as well as an aalta platter.

They placed it in front of Vidya and waited for her to perform the rituals.

But V, unsure of what to do or what was going on stared blankly at the three of them. Maaji stepped in to help and gave Vidya quick instructions. She followed them carefully till all the rituals were over and done with.

SM: Aao Dulhann, hum tumhe tumhare kamre tak chod aate hain.

Chandra: Par chhoti maa, Sagar so raha hai...

SM: Use Sindura ke room main shift kar do...aur phir use wapas bhej dena.

Mahua and Chandra: Ji chhoti maa.

SM took Vidya to her room. Unfortunately, because of their sudden appearance, the room couldn't have been decorated. This got SM worried..but the suhaag raat was the first marriage night, and it was already held back in Banaras...she chilled out a little.

SM: Tum aaraam karo beta. Hum baad main Sagar ko bhej denge.

Vidya quietly nodded and SM departed with a smile. Vidya shut the bedroom door but didn't lock it, so he could enter whenever he were to do so.

*~*

*At night*

She could feel a restlessness...a sudden longing and impatience...it was unknown...that feeling, but it wouldn't let her sleep. She got out of bed, and walked over to the window. Surprisingly, it was open, and there was just a pleasant breeze brushing though her. This night oddly reminded her of their suhaag raat...how he crept up on her and held her by the waist..

Her thoughts were interrupted by the creaking of their bedroom door.

Vidya was unsure of who it was.

Karthik jeejaji ho sakte hain, ya phir Sindura didi...ya phir...

And she didn't need to think anymore. As the head peered through the door, a lovely crooked smile cast upon his face, a gush of relief swept through her.

He shut the door and luckily remembered to lock it. He turnd around with what seemed to be the most heart warming smile she's ever seen...

S: Yeh di bhi na..uff...unhe laga ki mai so gaya...par tumhare khayaal main khoya tha, neend kaise aati.

This made V blush crimson. He was now walking slowly towards her. Taking graceful strides...she felt embarrassed...nervous...and scared at the same time.

His arms were held out and he was walking closer and closer to her...and unaware of what she was doing, she took a couple steps back...

...and was suddenly seated upon the sofa that stood in front of the window.

He too, got himself seated, but he seemed impatient. He held her face with one arm, and the haila..the warmth was soothing.

She then realized what just happened and quickly got up. Sagar seemed to look worried.

S: Kya hua, Vidya? Maine tumhe dara toh nahin diya na?

V: Huh? Naa...nahin...nahin toh...hum bas...

Sagar felt a bit relaxed and stood up as well. Then he gently wrapped his am around her waist, her back facing him. He rested his head upon her shoulders, and waited. When he felt she was comfortable with the situation, he allowed a gentle brush.

She jerked, as though a spine tingling wind gushed through her...

She was dissing herself for reacting so immaturely...from the bottom of her heart, she wished this pal never ended...

Sagar on the other hand, seemed to not have reacted at all...a whole different scene was playing in his mind and as the silence continued, he decided to grab her saree's pallu and tied it around the sofa..

It was a while before she realized he hadn't responded verbally, to her sudden reactions...what was he doing? She was too scared to turn around but surely, he was upto something. She got the courage, and turned...to find him seated comfortably on the sofa...she was surprised by the look on his face. Her mouth had fallen open, so she took a moment to shut it and then began walking back to their bed, for some stupid reason.

But, with her third step, she realized she was spun around and trapped within her own saree...she couldn't keep her balance and fell right on top of him...

Precap: Sindura was searching the whole house...and then bursts into their room, as she had realized S was not on her bed...

Sry for the spelling mistakes!

Annu 😊



Edited by eclipse_101 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
i liked it...cant wait for sv update=))

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