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Posted: 17 years ago

Aww...I;ll do the other one..the scenes...I have to go soon...so wont be able to do much on that one either.

EDITED**

Sry Ayesha...abhi sone jana hai...I'm pretty tired aur kuch sujh nahin raha...I'll do them both tomorrow..I promise girliee...I started updating again...only for u guys...u know that right?

Edited by eclipse_101 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Yes Annu...I know you started updating for us ppl...Acha don't worry..But promise tomorrow..I am also sleepy but i don't wanna go to sleep...I wanna work on my french project...But still plz update tom..
Good night.. 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago

*IMPORTANT NOTE*

A very, very sorry to all the readers of this FF. As most of you know I have another story thing going on...and with that, I won't find time to update this. I have decided to discontinue this FF till SSS is completed...that may take time and it may not, depending on my convinience. I hope you all understand. It's not finished and if possible, I will continue this FF...and try to end it sometime, but for now I shall leave it as it is.

I know my updates weren't frequent or anything, they were weekly updates. And I truly feel bad to kepp you guys waiting like this. But it's just not easy to continue two FFs, for me anyways.

This is I think my second message/note...I feel terrible as it is about this, as I truly enjoy updating as well. Really really sorry guys..but this way, maybe I can update that more frequently and then finish it, and come back to this.

Thanks for understanding,

Ananya

Edited by eclipse_101 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
i must say tht i cmpletely luvd your ff and it was jus soo nice but then i also understand hw hard it is to continiue 2 at the same time so ill wait for as long as it takes 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
Awww...Priya! Thanks...now I feel worse as I want to update but I don't think I can..
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Posted: 17 years ago
Omg!!! Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzzzzz Annu!!!! 😃 UPDATE I've been waiting soooooooooooooooooooo long... 😭
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Posted: 17 years ago

Ok ok fine...here I go:😳

Recap: Back in the bedroom, Vidya stood facing the window while Sagar sat on the bed humming a eautiful tune.

Sin burst into their room...leaving shocked expressions on both their faces.

Sindura was somewhat awe struck to see Sagar here. But she felt as though he would be here, for some reason. That didn't make a difference, anyhow.

Sin: Tum yahan kya kar rahe ho Sagar?

S: Di...woh...Vid..Vidya ne kaha ki woh mujhe dher saare toys degi...isiliye main yahan aaya tha...par..par

Sin: Par kya Sagar? Iska matlab hai ki jab tumse koi kuch bole ya kuch dena chahe, tum le lo ge? Ajnabee se baatein tak nahin kiya jaata hai aur tum!?

S: Par di, Vidya ajnabee nahin hai! Woh hamare ghar main ha isi liye main uspe trust kar sakta hoon!

Sin: Nahin Sagar. Tum abhi bhole ho..iske gandi chaalein nahin samajh paaoge.

The words pierced Sagar's heart...his own di couldn't possibly be so...so...wierd...her changed behaviour towards him and everyone else was so absurd. It was like this ever since his accident but he failed to understand why.

Sin: Ab baatein bahut hui. Tum chalo kamre main sone. Main abhi aati hoon.

Sagar nodded twice, and slowly got off the bed. He walked to the door to their room...and paused. Sin was turned around so he couldn't see...he gave Vidya a goodnight flying kiss and departed. Vidya smiled to herself.

Sin: Tum kyun has rahi ho? Mere bhai koi apni gandi jaal mein tum kabhi phasaa nahin paaogi. Ek din, main tumhe yahaan ke baahar ka rasta dikha ke rahoongi!

And with this, Sindura too, departed. Vidya stood alone by the window. There was a chill in the night air...she turned around and shut the window, and a tear rolled down her cheek.

Sagar walked back towards Sindura's room. He had just barely survived! Phew! Sindura di would be angry if she knew why he was actually there. But he'd handled the situation.

He just about entered the room when she said his name.

Sin: Sagar..

S: Abhi good night kiss nahin doonga. Mujhe bahut neend aa rahi hai. Vidya ne already meri aadhi raat barbaad kar di...ab main chala so..(interrupted)

Sin: Acha?! Tumne mujhe uthana zaroori nahin samjha!? Aur agar woh aayi thi, toh maine uski aawaj kyun nahin suni?

S: Woh...di...nahin...woh na...

Sin: (looking like a bull ready to charge) Aisi galti ke liye tumhe sazaa zaroor milegi. (She was slowly walking towards him...approaching him patiently...) Toh batao, kya pasand karoge...do tamaacha, ya phir belt waali punishment?

Sagar's eyes were now wide open...uh oh...he was a fully grown man...yet his punishment was phisical abuse...by a woman...thankfully...the world wasn't aware of that.

S: Nahin di...pleassseee di..pleasseee...mine kuch nahin kiya di..mujhe mat maro di..pleassssee...

Sin: Tumhe jhooth bolne aata hi nahin..(she was inches away from him.)

Sindura suddenly grabbed him by the arm and yanked him inside the room...she shut the door so nothing looked or seemed suspicious. She opened her closet..and pulled out one of Aniket's belts. A shiny leather belt it was...seemed to be brand new. But, she shut the closet door and put the belt on the sofa opposite her bed.

She then turned to Sagar....thrash!

S: Aaahhh!!! Nahin di!

She slapped him right acroos the face.

thrash! And again...across the other cheek..

Sagar fell on the floor with the thud to add to the effects, and began bawling loudly. His eyes then fell on the belt that lay on the sofa...uh oh!

*!~

That's it for now! It wasn't very long...but just got the story going a bit...It wasn't the complete update. I'll post the rest some other time!

After this whole update, this FF will be discontinued. For details on the note, see the top of page 20.

Annu

Edited by eclipse_101 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Awesome update... 😃 👏 👏
Grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr Sindoora 😡
plZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ CONTINUE SOON
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Posted: 17 years ago
so sweet! 😆 😆 😳 b sure to read minez 😳
pyaar ki nayi roop-
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=909586

najane kab hua ye dil yumpe fida-
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=912321

ishq hai tumse-
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=914196




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Posted: 17 years ago
Aww..thanks Priya! I read the first one...and its amazing...the sec and third I'll read later but I will for sure! 😃

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