Tera Mera Milna- SV-PM-P.10-PG.5- RAPE!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Is it ok if i start a fan fic here and about Saagar and Vidya.... but i also want to add a couple Prem and Mukti.... so is it ok if i start it please....?

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Posted: 18 years ago
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i know about Saagar and Vidya.... but not sure about others 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Their in Kasauti Zindagi Kay, well they were in that serial.

Mukti is Tina Parekh and she also is in Kahanni Ghar Ghar Ki.
Prem is Manoj Bohra and he was the old Prem in Kasauti Zindagi Kay
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Posted: 18 years ago
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it's alrite by me..even though i dunno prem-mukti...i hav heard of them, saw them in picz and read ff's with them in as supportin cast 😉 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Parts 1-5

Part 1

Three girls were walking down the stairs, all three ran to there dad and huged him.

Mukti:Good Morning Papa.
Papa:Good morning beta
Neha+Vidya:Good morning papa
Papa:Good Morning, where is ur mom?
Vidya: she is getting the breakfast ready.
Neha:MAMA hurry up were getting late for school.
Mama:yes 1 minute.

There mom comes and gives them break fast and they eat quickly and leave for school.

Mukti was walking to her class when there they meet...

Part 2

Summary...

Deshmukh Family

Nakul (Emraan Hashmi) - Oldest in the family, he loves Mukti out of all of his sisters. He always wants to go new places.

Neha (Vidya Balan) - Second in Deshmukh family, she loves taking care of all her sisters and she loves bugging Adi.

Adi (Atif Aslam) - Third in the family and he always gets third in every thing, his dreams is to be a singer.

Mukti (Tina Hazra/Parekh) - Middle, but high class, she loves wearing Kameez Shalwar and everyone think she looks very beautiful in them.

and the youngest in the family...

Vidya (Vidya from Banoo Main Teri Dulhan) - She is the youngest and she want to marry someone who will actually love her, and she would love also, but she doesn't know where to find him.

Bajaj Family...

Sneha (Jennifer Winget) - Oldest, and loves to bug her 2 little brat brothers around.

Prem (Manoj Bohra) - he loves his sister the most but hates it when she bugs him. hes waiting for his true love, but he loves acting like hes all that.

Saagar (Sharad Malhotra(by the way he's better in this fanfic)- he and his brother love flirting with girls, especially the Indian type, he's also waiting for his true love, he also loves all of his siblings.

Part 2

Mukti: HEY what's ur problem!?
Prem: sorry,
Prem and Saagar: Olalla, what a hot chick!
Mukti: excuse me?
Prem: it's just that we love the way Indians dress.
Mukti: What is ur problem, if u don't behave ill tell my brother and he will definitely do something.
Vidya: Yeah so don't do anything bad.
Saagar: Oh so what's ur brother going to do aih?
Mukti: Nakul Bhaiya!!!

We see a very hot guy coming to the rescue

Nakul: Hey Mukti what's the matter?
Mukti: Bhaiya look at what these guys are doing, they're bugging me, please tell them not to, the old fashion way.
Nakul: Don't worry I will do my best.

Nakul takes both Prem and Saagar into the bathroom and when they come out...

Prem: We shouldn't have bothered them...
Saagar: Yeah, I don't think I'm going to do that ever again.

We see they're heads were wet and they were rapped in toilet paper.

Flash Back:

Prem:Ahhhh...(Nakul puts his head in the toilet)...Ahhhh
Nakul:Thats what people get for hurting MY sister!
Prem:please leave me....
Prems flash back ends and Saagars starts...
Saagar:I DIDNT DO IT PREM DID LEAVE ME ALONE(he puts his head in the toilet) AHHHHHHH
Nakul:same to u!
Saagars flash back ends.

Nakul:look at the ending of what u do...
Mukti:thank you bhaiya.
Vidya:yeah bhaiya, everyone know u love mukti the most of all of ur own sisters.
Prem:WAIT theres more people in ur family?
Saagar:Woh thats akward
Nakul: Do u have a problem?
Prem: No ok then ok then bye bye, come on bro.
Saagar: let's go Prem
Mukti: WAIT!
Saagar: now what?
Mukti: u 2 are brothers?
Prem: The whole school knows that!
Mukti: oh.
Vidya: And your names are?
Prem: Prem Bajaj
Saagar: Saagar Bajaj.
Prem: Now u know so let's go Saggie boy
Saagar(while leaving): I thought I told u not to call me that.
Prem: Sorry man I like it!

Mukti: They are pretty funny.
Vidya: he's pretty hot, that Saagar guy.
Nakul: Don't interfere with those guys ok.
Mukti and Vidya: Ok Bhaiya.

Mukti: Ok Main class keh liye chalti hoon(ok I'm leaving for class)
Vidya: Ok Di bye!

Mukti walks in her class.

Prem: YOU!
Mukti: YOU!


Part 3

Prem:YOU!
Mukti:You!

The teacher inturupts their you you and says: Good morning class, for starts i will be coosing ur seating partners.

Prem Felt happy for some reason that Mukti was in his class.

The teacher is done telling everyone who they have to sit with and unfortunatly Prem and Mukti dont sit near eachother.

Prem:(in him mind)why am i felling upset that mukti is sitting with some one else and not me. i dont know...

The teacher starts talking about school work...

In Vidya and Saagars class

Viya and Saagar are sitting beside eachother and are having fun with eachother.

after class Mukti is walking by when some people come up to her and take her books from her and throw them on the ground. they leave and then Mukti is going to pick them up when someone bends down infront of Mukti and starts helping her pick up her book when their hand comes Mukti looks up and its Prem.

Prem: sorry if u dont want my help but i felt like helping... you... helping you... yeah helping you.
Mukti:Ok thanks.
Prems about to leave when...
Mukti: hey do u want to be friends?
Prem:sure why not.
Prem and Mukti walk opposite ways.
Boht Prem and Mukti turn towards eachother at the same time not thinking they would be look too, but unfortunetly they did, so they just smiled and left for their friends.

While that happened Vidya and Saagar were watching this the whole time.

Saagar:Weird...
Vidya:what happened?
Saagar: Prem never does that with girls.
Vidya: what does that mean?
Saagar:i know exactly what that means.
he tells Vidya a plan

Part 4

Saagar tells Vidya a plan. And the plan was their going to make Prem and Mukti say that they love each other.

So after school at night Prem and Saagar went to the pub and Prem didn't drink that much unfortunately but Saagar drank so much he couldn't walk.

Prem took Saagar home and they went to Saagar's room.

Saagar: You know I think that Mukti girl is very nice.
Prem: What do you mean very nice, she's very very nice, sweet, pretty... opps! I shouldn't have said that.
Saagar: Its ok Prem u can say anything about some one u like in front of me.
Prem: I don't like her!
Saagar: come on Prem tell me, i know u like her so tell me!
Prem: I don't like her.
Saagar goes close to his face and says it again: Tell me u like her!
Prem: You've drunken too much, u don't know what ur saying!
Saagar: No I haven't, tell me u love her!

On the other hand

Vidya is saying the same things with Mukti.

Vidya: Tell me Mukti, I know u love him.
Mukti: No I don't!

On the other hand

Saagar: Now tell me u love her. TELL ME TELL ME!
Prem: FINE, I Love
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Mukti: I Love
/
Prem: Mukti!
/
Mukti: Prem!
/
Saagar: YEAH!!!!! And he kisses Prem.

Prem: Ewww why did u do that!?
Saagar: Cause im happy for my big brother. Now all u have to do is say this same thing u told me to Mukti tomorrow.
/
Vidya says the same thing to Mukti.
/
Prem: I don't know how to tell her though.
Saagar: let me tell u 1 thing, don't tell her when its too late!

Next Day in college

Saagar: there she is go and tell her.
Prem: OK

Prem starts walking to Mukti, he sees her talking to her friends, her back is towards him, and he turns around
Prem: Ok I will say …um…
Saagar: GOOOOO GOOOO
Prem: OK, he turns around and goes up to Mukti which is now Vidya. (Mukti leaves and Vidya is standing in Mukti's spot.
Prem goes up to her and says: Mukti … he closes his eyes.
Vidya is thinking why someone said Mukti so she turns around and sees its Prem.
Prem: Mukti… I… love… you.
Prem: Opens his eyes and see Vidya standing in front of him.
Prem (in his mind) Oh s*** I told the wrong person. I hope she didn't hear.
Vidya(in her mind): I shouldn't let him know I heard.
Vidya: Why were your eyes closed?
Prem: Oh nothing… (In his mind) thank god she didn't hear.
Vidya: ok
Vidya starts walking away while says: im going to have to tell di this right away! She's going to be so happy!
Prem: Umm excuse me, but who's going to be happy?
Vidya: oh nothing and she runs away.
Prem: weird
Saagar: What happened Man?
Prem: I told her sister by accident. But it's a good thing she didn't hear.
Saagar: Oh it's ok the next time we see her you have to tell her ok!
Prem: why do you care when I tell her?
Saagar: never mind can I tell you a secret.
Prem: of course
Saagar: I like Vidya.
Prem: Are you serious?
Saagar: Yeah but you have to help me tell her.
Prem: Why?
Saagar: because im helping you with Mukti.
Prem: OK
Saagar: let's go.
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Vidya: Mukti! Mukti!
Mukti: What is it!?
Vidya: Guess what I found out.
Mukti: is it something about Prem?
Vidya: yeah and you'll like to hear it
Mukti: What! What?
Vidya: He likes you
Mukti: What?
Vidya: he also likes you, well he loves you
Mukti: Yea!
Vidya: But you have to tell him ok
Mukti: OK.

After school

Mukti: Umm Prem….
Prem: yeah?
Mukti: I need to tell you something
Prem: Wait I need to tell you something too
Mukti: You go first.
Prem: No you.
Mukti: NO You go first.
Prem: Ok, Mukti I lo…
Vidya: Mukti come on we have to go bhai and di are waiting for us in the car.
Mukti: Ok 1 sec.
Vidya: No we have to go he's getting late for is singing lessons.
Prem: is this your other brother?
Mukti: Yeah, his name is Adi, and don't worry he doesn't love me out of all our sister.
Prem: ok.
Nakul: Mukti! Let's go.
Mukti: Oh s*** I have to go if he sees me with you then he'll get mad ok the see ya bye!
Prem: Ok Bye.
Mukti: wait heres my phone number tell me what you had to say ok bye.

Bajaj house

Prerna: Prem we need to talk.
Prem: What now Mother India?
Prerna: I got a phone call yesterday, for your rishta.
Prem got soooo shocked.
Prerna: It's from the Deshmukh Family, with their daughter Vidya.
Prem got even more shocked.
Saagar heard this from out side of the room, and went into tears.

Part 5

Prem: What?
Prerna: Your rishta has been paaka with Deshmukh daughter, Vidya.
Prem starts to cry and leaves the room. Once he gets out of the room he see saagar crying too.
Prem: Saagar come on up stairs, to my room.
Saagar: looked up at his brother with red eyes.
He couldnt take it anymore. He huged his brother.
Saagar: Prem Bhai, the first time weve fallen in acual love its been ruined.
Prem:its ok we'll do something come with me.

Prems Room

Prem text Mukti.

Prem: Mukti i have to tell you something.
5 minutes later he got a reply.
Mukti: What is it? if its that important then meet me and the beach infront of your house right away, im there already.
Prem: Are you with Vidya?
Mukti: WHy do you care its not like you love her
Prem: Im saying this for my brother now i need an answer.
Mukti: SHes with me now hurry up.

Prem and Saagar got out side in 5 minutes
Prem: Mukti...
Mukti turns around and see Prem and Saagar both with red eyes, cring.
Mukti: What happened Prem.
Prem: My mom...
Saagar: Prem remember i told you not to tell her when its too late... its TOO late now.
Prem: Mukti I love you...
Mukti just stared at him for like 5 minutes.
She started crying and broke down... she huged him.
Mukti: Its too late Prem... Its too late. We cant do anything now.
The song Maan Ke Laagan from Paap starts.
O Laagi Tum Se Man Ki Lagan
Lagan Laagi Tum Se Man Ki Lagan
Lagan Laagi Tum Se Man Ki Lagan
Lagan Laagi Tum Se Man Ki Lagan

Gali-Gali Ghoome Dil Tujhe Dhoondhe...

Prem takes Muktis hand off of him...
Prem: You didnt answer me...
Prem: Do you love me?
Mukti: Ofcorse i love you. I LOVE YOU PREM!!!
She screamed so louded her voice echoed.

Prerna heard this and quickly runs to the window.
She see none other then Prem and Saagar with Mukti and Vidya out side.

Mukti hugs Prem again.
The song Maan Ke Laagan starts again.
...Gali-Gali Ghoome Dil Tujhe Dhoondhe
Tere Bin Tarase Nayan
Lagan Laagi Tum Se Man Ki Lagan
Lagan Laagi Tum Se Man Ki Lagan

Aa Ja O Meri Jaan
Mere Dil Ka Jahaan
Maange Teri Khabar
Dhoondhe Tera Nishaan
Laagi Tum Se Man Ki Lagan
Lagan Laagi Tum Se Man Ki Lagan...

Prerna sees Mukti huging Prem and she gets shocked.

Saagar: Vidya ...
Vidya looks at him.
Saagar: i...i..i love... i love you.
Vidya couldnt beleive what he said.
Vidya also hugs him and says: I love you too.

The Next Morning at Bajaj house...

Prerna: Prem!!! Saagar!!! come down here we need to talk!!!
Saagar gets there first then Prem
Prem n Saagar: Yes mom, yes dad?
Prerna: is what i saw last night true or not?
Prem and Saagar get shocked.
Prem: What do u mean mom?
Prerna: You know exactly whaat im mean.
Saagar: I .... Prem Bhai you tell.
Prem: I dont want to get Married to Vidya...
Mr. Bajaj: What is this rubbish? her life will be ruined.
Prem: No her life wont be ruined.
Mr.Bajaj: What do you mean?
Saagar: I love her and want to marry her.
Prerna smiles.
Prerna: Paar Prem if you dont love...
Prem: NO NO NO...
Prerna: sorry... like Vidya then who do u like....
Prem: NO NO NO love.
Prerna: who do you love?
Prem: Her name is ... Mu... Mukt...
Saagar: her name is Mukti.
Saagar: Vidya and Mukti are sisters.
Prerna: then its a good thing we can celebrate both your weddings on the same day.
Prem and Saagars sad faces turn in to bright light smiles.
they both scream: YEAH!!!!!

thats where im ending to today.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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aww thats such a cute lil FF 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow!!!!....what an update 👏 ...the bathroom scene was hilarious....lol...prem n sagar wrapped w/ toilet papaer....lmao....really what an image 😆

awwwww....luved all the parts....n luv the fact how things are moving along at a fast pace😊....yipeeeee😛....both SV n PM....declared their luv to each other 😳 ....n now they r actually going to marry at the same tym.... 😛

all the parts were gr8 👏 ....n very interesting....continue soon...can't wait to read what will happen next..... 😃 😛

Edited by KHJL - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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oh yeah that is good! 😃 but dont you think they fell in love too quickly? 😕 but anyway I loved it coz I like both Sagar and Vidya and Prem and Mukhti! they are soo cute together! 😳 PLZZ CONT SOON!! 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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I will update asap

i hope you guys will like my fan fic 😕 ... when its going on 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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WOW!! I LOVE IT!!! I WANNA MORE ..PLEASE COUNTIUE!! 😃

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