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Posted: 18 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: harleensidhu1

wow that was incrdible.....just caught the last few parts......pls cont soon.



thanx a tonne! 😳🤗will continue tonight 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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plz comtinue soon i am so excited 4 da next part AND PLZ DONT LET SAGAR CRY 😭 😭 I FEEL SORRY 4 HIM 😭 😭 AND I LUB HIM 😳 😳 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: afreen13

plz comtinue soon i am so excited 4 da next part AND PLZ DONT LET SAGAR CRY 😭 😭 I FEEL SORRY 4 HIM 😭 😭 AND I LUB HIM 😳 😳 😳



lol yea i'm gonna continue tonight i hope..sorry everyone i couldn't update last night cuz i was on curfew 😆 if thats wut you'd call it.. but i really really want to so i will try tonight of posting the next part....and i won't let saagar cry anymore 😳😊 thanx for commenting and reading and liking my fanfic 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#54
this is just getting better and better.....why they were seprated is big ? so just waiting
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: angel.41



lol yea i'm gonna continue tonight i hope..sorry everyone i couldn't update last night cuz i was on curfew 😆 if thats wut you'd call it.. but i really really want to so i will try tonight of posting the next part....and i won't let saagar cry anymore 😳😊 thanx for commenting and reading and liking my fanfic 😳

awwwwwwww thanxx i am very happy and excited 2 no dat sagar is not going to cry anymore😳😳😳hopw u will be able to update da next part tonight i am dying to read da next part

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anki.

this is just getting better and better.....why they were seprated is big ? so just waiting



thanx 😳 you'll find out how and why they were seperatd soon 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#57
really nice update once again update soon 😳 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: asma1

really nice update once again update soon 😳 😊



yup 😳..it's on it's way....thanxx for commenting😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hello everyone! 🤗 🤗🤗I'm so sorry, I couldn't update last night or the night before...I got caught in some work last night and so I couldn't even log on even to update. I'm so sorry all...and even today in the morning I was so busy, I had to go shopping for my brother, and so I didn't get time at all. Sorry you guys....but to make up for it I'll try my best to make this part the best one so far...but of course after the previous one.😳 Hope you guys enjoy this part 😳

Part 7

That evening, it was very hard for Saagar to continue with any activities in his regular routine. What he'd just witnessed was all that kept playing again and again in his head. He remembered seeing a little girl in the baby carrier Tusshar was wearing, and sorta tried to identify the age of the little one. She didn't look more than about two months old. And then he realized the fact that him and Vidya were separated. And how long they were separated for too. Two months; though it was such a long time, it seemed like an eternity. And then, as if he was putting the pieces of the puzzle together, he realized something. Something that would change what his life was right now, forever, and in a good way. He pulled the brakes hard, as he realized what was happening. If that child was only two months, how could it be Vidya and Tusshar's child? The sad look that was on his face slowly transformed into a smile; a huge one. That means....That means she didn't marry Tusshar!! he said to himself, tears of joy beginning to come out. He covered his mouth, about to burst out and cry in happiness. That means...that little angel is my child? He began smiling so huge to himself...and eventually that smile turned into a laughter of happiness and joyfulness. What was I thinking? It was so stupid of me to even think she'd moved on! But nonetheless, that was my baby! She's my little angel! Oh my God...Saagar Pratap Singh has a little daughter! And he didn't even know! If Saagar was to explain how happy he was, he'd say he had no words for how he felt right now. Like come on, how would a father feel when he found out he had a little daughter...whom he hadn't even seen after she was born?! Aww man, he was so happy today. Every now and then he'd curse himself for misunderstanding her. When he reached home finally, he entered like he cared about nothing else. Twisting his keys around his index finger, whistling at the same time, he walked inside all happy. Everyone noticed his changed behaviour, something that they hadn't seen in a while now. They all decided to let him be right now, before his mood would get ticked off if they said something.

Saagar went up into his room, dropped his keys on the one-seater couch and dropped himself on the bed, with his arms wide open. "Wow...my little baby!" He said, all excited. "Aww man....I can't wait till I hold her!" "But wait, how am I going to do that?" Reality suddenly struck him, and he realized that even being so close, yet he was so far. How was he going to get to his daughter?? Think Saagar...Think!! And all of a sudden, as if lightning struck him out of nowhere. Sameer goes to the same school as Bharat. Perfect!! He went over to Bharat's room. At first, Bharat was surprised to see him, but calmed down seeing how happy he looked. After about half-an-hour or so, Saagar returned to his room. Saagar felt asleep that night impatient for what'll happen tomorrow. Aww man...I can't wait that long!!

The next morning, Saagar was up all early and he had that 100-Watt smile on his face again. He went over what he'd thought of last night, while brushing his hair looking in the mirror.

The plan that Saagar had cooked up involved Vidya, Tusshar, Bharat and Sameer to be there. And of course, Esha. So this is how it went. After school, Bharat was supposed to ask Vidya and Tusshar to take him shopping, since there was a birthday party on the weekend, and he had to pick some good clothes out. Now of course, they both would ask why he wasn't going with his family; not that they didn't want him with them. In reply, he'd tell them that everyone was really busy at home, and so he'd tell his parents he was going with one of his friend and his parents.

So, that's what happened. In the morning Bharat asked Vidya and Tusshar when the came to drop of Sameer, and they said it was no problem, and that they'd take him for sure. Now, part two of the plan. Saagar had told Bharat exactly what shop and what time, and even where exactly in the shop they were supposed to be. That way, Saagar could easily find them. The plan was successful until this point; and Saagar spotted Tusshar and Vidya he saw that Esha was in her stroller, and Vidya was driving it. "Ma, madat karo naa…mujhe yeh joote khareed ne hain.." Sameer called to him, trying to take a pair of shoes off one of the shelves which was high for him. Vidya saw him struggle, and worried that it might all just come tumbling down, told Tusshar to watch Esha as she goes and helps Sameer. Saagar saw all this, and thought to himself, all that's needed now is for Tusshar to move from there. He peaked from behind one of the statues as Bharat saw him, and signaled him to make Tusshar move from there. Bharat saw him signaling, and decided to go to a rack of clothes, pretending to find the one that looks good on him. "Tusshar bhaiya, bolo na, in me si konsa mujh par achcha lage ga?" Bharat asked Tusshar, trying to distract him and move away from Esha's stroller. "Errm, let's see." Tusshar went over to Bharat to help him out, leaving Esha's stroller there; but it wasn't really that far. But yes, it was far enough for Saagar to reach without him noticing.

Seeing that this was the right opportunity, Saagar tiptoed over to Esha's stroller, and noticed that she had a little toy-rattle in her hand. "Hey, my little angel…" he whispered, watching her move her legs and arms playfully. "Aww…you're so cute!" he said, touching her soft cheeks and tiny nose. "Can I pick you up? Can I?" whispering, in fear of being caught. He slowly picked her up from her stroller and held her in his arms. "Oh my God, you're so tiny…" noticing in fact how small she was in size. Well, no duh! She IS only two months old! He began playing with her right there, but soon realized that he'd get caught, and also saw Tusshar about to come. So he decided to quickly find a spot to hide, but in vain. Therefore, in a rush, he just decided to hide inside the clothes racks (like you know the round ones where there is space inside where you can hide) Tusshar walked towards Esha's stroller, but before he could get to it Bharat called him back asking for him to help look for the right size.

Meanwhile, inside the clothes rack, it was dark. It wasn't dark enough to scare Saagar, but it was dark enough to scare Esha, and Saagar wasn't too sure that Esha would react positively to this situation. "Don't worry baby…papa hain naa? Papa app ko kuch bhi hone nahin denge…theek hai? Papa aap se bohot pyaar karte hain…aap ko pata hain naa, pata hain naa?" He whispered tickling her nose with his. Then he made her sit in his lap, with his legs crossed. (Yes, yes, there IS that much space there..okie? 😆) "Lekin who kya hain na.." he continued holding her tiny hands. "aap ki mama nahin chahtee ke mein aap ke saath rahoon…bohot buri baat hain naa?" he said frowning, as if she'd understand. He could see her little face as she just kept staring at this man whose laps she was sitting in, who she'd never ever seen before, and on top of that it was dark in here! Her lips began to curve, an indication that she was about to cry. "Uh oh…no, no, no…please don't cry!" He picked her up and made her rest on his chest with her head on his shoulder, but it didn't work. Her crying had already begun.

Vidya, hearing Esha cry though she was far, rush towards Esha's stroller to see if she was okay. The panicked look on her face turned into worry and anxiousness when she saw that her stroller was empty, and Esha wasn't in it. "Tusshar, Tusshar Esha aap ke paas hain??" she asked hoping that Tusshar had her. Tusshar turned around and nope, he didn't have Esha with him. "Nahin, who toh stoller main - " "Stroller main nahin hain!" Vidya yelled, beginning to panic even more. They all spread out looking for her, and Vidya's worried look became worse, and tears began to pour out, screaming Esha's name. At this point, Esha was till crying, and Vidya was close to where Esha and Saagar were hiding. She followed the sound of her cry, and reached the clothes rack. Surprised and scared that Esha's crying was coming from here, she opened up the clothes, separating them to leave a gap in between, leaving herself shocked, and Saagar as well.

Vidya was shocked to see Esha was crying hopelessly in Saagar's arms, and when she'd moved the clothes Saagar was equally shocked, and also sad. Vidya bent down and took Esha in her arms, consoling her, and making her quiet down. Meanwhile, Saagar slowly made his way out of the clothes rack, frightened and upset. Tusshar with the stroller, Bharat and Sameer eventually arrived, looking equally shocked. Saagar stood there, embarrassed at what had just happened, but at the same time, he didn't know how he should've reacted. Vidya was at a loss of words, and wasn't sure what to feel: happy that he'd returned, sad that he made her worried and Esha cry, or disappointed that he could do such a dumb thing?


Okie dokie everyone...that was hopefully much better and much longer too 😳. Hope you guys enjoyed this part 😳
Edited by angel.41 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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loved it!
cont soon!
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