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jigna_07

@jigna_07

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Posted: 18 years ago

#21

awwww
that was so cute
now please contine soon 😊

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Sania

@sania_12

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Posted: 18 years ago

#22

Awww it was cute!
I hope you continue soon. 😉

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MaGiCiAn

@angel.41

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Posted: 18 years ago

#23

Hello everyone! 🤗 🤗 🤗 A big hug for all my readers! Thank you everyone for posting such lovely comments! 😳 They really are very appreciated. 😳 Just like the lots of you, me neither: I couldn't wait to post the next part...oh man 😳 I'm so crazy 😆 I can't wait to read something I wrote myself 😆 I am so anxious like all of ya to read this part 😆 . So here it goes: Hope you guys enjoy it 😳

Part 4

"Ma," Sameer said coming up to his mom. "Mein Esha ke saath kheloon?" he asked. Vidya gladly put on a smile, and first instructed him to sit down with his legs crossed. "Lijiye," she said, placing Esha in Sameer's lap. "Gardan se pakar naa." She told him. Vidya smiled, watching as Sameer tickled her and she laughed, and then as he held her little hand saying her hand was so small. Furthermore, patting her little nose in yet another exclamation. They both looked ever so cute, and hoped to God to keep all evil from them, and to always keep them happy. Just then, a man walked into the room to find the three sitting on the bed. "Uh, Vidya, neecha khana lag gaya hain. Sameer, chalo, it's time for dinner!" he said, telling them to come downstairs to eat.
"Ji Tusshar, hum abhi aate hain." Vidya replied. She took Esha from Sameer, and proceeded headed to the door. "Lao, mein le leta hoon." Tusshar said, indicating that he'll take Esha. Vidya smiled, and handed Esha over to him, who headed downstairs after Vidya and Sameer. "Esha!" he said rubbing his head in her tummy holding her up high, causing her to laugh. Vidya turned to see her play with Tusshar so happily, and smiled a bit, and proceeded downstairs.

Once downstairs, Tusshar placed Esha in her little car seat, "Ab tum yahan betho, hum bad mein khelinge!" making Esha give out a little laugh waving her little arms and legs up in the air. Tusshar then went over to the dining table, and took a seat beside Sameer. Vidya proceeded to serve everyone; Tusshar, Sameer, and then herself. She served everyone, and then took a seat herself and served herself. "Aaj app ka kam kaisa raha?" Vidya asked, after breaking the silence of a few minutes. "Awesome." Tusshar replied, putting a morsel of food in his mouth. Then realising what he said, laughed and said "Mera matlab bohot acha." The next few minutes, were also silent, but once again broken by someone's voice. "Ma, pata hain, aaj school mein kya huwa?" Sameer told his mother enthusiastically. "Kya huwa?" Vidya replied, taking some food out in his plate. "Mera jo dost hain naa, Raj," he said. "Haan, toh?" Sameer started laughing as he narrated his tale. "Usne teacher ka chalk le liya! Aur phir, teacher itne gusse hiu, itne gusse hui!" He laughed all the way saying this, and then trying to imitate the teachers reaction, said, "Kisne kiya ye sab!" Vidya and Tusshar both laughed as he told his story.

After dinner, Tusshar helped Vidya put away the dishes, passing her the dishes one by one from the table to the sink. He passed her the bowl which had the rice in it, and while Vidya took it, their fingers touched, causing the both to stop and look at each other. They both had an eye locking session, as a soft smile crept on Tusshar's face. Beginning to feel uncomfortable, Vidya let go, and turned around without saying anything or smiling. The smile fade off from Tusshar's face, and suddenly turned into an upset expression as he placed the bowl on the countertop.

**At the Singh Household**

Dinner was being served here too. The only difference was that there was no commotion, or the laugher of little kids. Just the noise of spoons and plates, and people chewing quietly. After dinner, everyone retreated to their rooms without saying a word. Sindoora and Aniket to thier room, Shalu and Chinu to their room, Bharat to his room, and Maa ji to her room. The only one left in the main room was Saagar, and he too, followed to his room. Feeling guilty all the way up the stairs, he closed the door behind him in slight frustration. He sat down on the side of his bed, with his head buried in his hands, thinking about what he thought about every single day. Vidya...Sameer...His life... He saw a picture in a frame of the three resting on the side-table, and picked it up and brought it close to his face. Tears began welling up in his eyes as he stared at the photo, and he didn't make an effort to stop them either, he just let them pour out. "Please....." he said, sobbing with the picture close to him. "Lot jao......" he said, now crying intensely with the picture close to his chest.

Okay guys...ermm I would say that this one was a little long...but I know you guys would probably wish for more 😆 Hope you guys enjoy this part😳.

Edited by angel.41 - 17 years ago

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Uzma

@asma1

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Posted: 18 years ago

#24

that was nice, it made me for cry 😭 😭 for sagar hes so lonely! i wish vidya comes back to sagar

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Ritika

@ritzy2ritz

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Posted: 18 years ago

#25

i loved loved loved it !! 😭 made me sad 😳 but geat job 👏 👏 o 👏 ne 👏 q 👏 u 👏 👏 es 👏 ti 👏 o 👏 n 👏 , is tushar married to v 😭

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LiSa

@KHJL

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Posted: 18 years ago

#26

just read both parts 3 n 4...n they were awesome...in fact superb... 👏

awwwwwwwww 😳 .....poor sagar....OMG....our baby was crying 😭 ...i wonder wat happened tht cuzed sagar n vidya to seperate.. 😭 ....poor sagar is totally broken apart w/ out vidya .....hope vidya cums bak to our baby soon 😳 ....mayb tushar will help it happen.... 😉

hey hun....just wondering....is esha sagar n vidya's daughter???? (lol...was kinda confused due to tushar being in the scene aswell...hehe😳) if yes!!!.....then awwww 😳 ....thtz so kute 😳 😳 ....poor sagar i bet he doesn't know bout his lil' gurl yet...(can't wait till he finds out) 😛 ..really interesting ff hun... 😊 😛

btw....i know i said this before 😳 ....but i just have to ...HAVE TO....say this again 😳 😳 ...u write very WELL hun 👏 👏 👏 ....luv the way ur story is flowing...too good... 😊

can't wait for the next part 😳 ....continue soon!!! 😃

later!!! 😛

LiSa

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Ankita

@Anki.

Explorer

Posted: 18 years ago

#27

I just read all your parts and must say they are mind-blowing ..keep it up....it's just sooo sweet and adorable...even thought it's a sad in times but still too good 👏 👏 👏

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Nabihah

@Nabihah

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Posted: 18 years ago

#28

That part was amazing-but i hope Tush and Vidya arent the couple in the FF-SV is the couple rite? anyways i really like ur storyline-Esha seems so cute 😛 😊

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MaGiCiAn

@angel.41

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Posted: 18 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: nakitatt
👏 that was awesome!!!keep writing!!! 😃 👏

thanks 😳😳 i plan to update tonight 😊

Originally posted by: asma1
that was nice, it made me for cry 😭 😭 for sagar hes so lonely! i wish vidya comes back to sagar

thanks..aww, i didn't mean for you to cry 😕😛 and yes, Vidya will come back to him 😊

Originally posted by: ritzy2ritz
i loved loved loved it !! 😭 made me sad 😳 but geat job 👏 👏 o 👏 ne 👏 q 👏 u 👏 👏 es 👏 ti 👏 o 👏 n 👏 , is tushar married to v 😭

thank you 😳 lol as far as your question goes 😆 everyone (or mostly everyone) have been asking "Are Tushar and Vidya married???" your question will be answered soon, and with an explanation 😛

Originally posted by: KHJL
just read both parts 3 n 4...n they were awesome...in fact superb... 👏 thanks😳

awwwwwwwww 😳 .....poor sagar....OMG....our baby was crying 😭 ...i wonder wat happened tht cuzed sagar n vidya to seperate.. 😭 ....poor sagar is totally broken apart w/ out vidya .....hope vidya cums bak to our baby soon 😳 ....mayb tushar will help it happen.... 😉 maybeeee😲 😉😉

hey hun....just wondering....is esha sagar n vidya's daughter???? lol you'll find out in the next few parts (lol...was kinda confused due to tushar being in the scene aswell...hehe😳) if yes!!!.....then awwww 😳 ....thtz so kute 😳 😳 ....poor sagar i bet he doesn't know bout his lil' gurl yet...(can't wait till he finds out) 😛 ..really interesting ff hun... 😊 😛 thanks😳

btw....i know i said this before 😳 ....but i just have to ...HAVE TO....say this again 😳 😳 ...u write very WELL hun 👏 👏 👏 ....luv the way ur story is flowing...too good... 😊 thanks😆

can't wait for the next part 😳 ....continue soon!!! 😃

later!!! 😛

LiSa

will continue soon (tonight😊) 😳

Originally posted by: Anki.
I just read all your parts and must say they are mind-blowing ..keep it up....it's just sooo sweet and adorable...even thought it's a sad in times but still too good 👏 👏 👏

thanx a bunch 😳

Originally posted by: Nabihah
That part was amazing-but i hope Tush and Vidya arent the couple in the FF-SV is the couple rite? anyways i really like ur storyline-Esha seems so cute 😛 😊

lol everyone's asking the same question 😆 you'll find out soon 😆 thanx for reading and commenting😳

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mema

@tahani

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Posted: 18 years ago

#30

dude your an amzing writer.. but i must ask plz proceed becz i've starteeed to imagine how great this relationship is.. by the way what is the secret and whose tushar....

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