FF: Woh Pal.. Upd: Page 16 (Aug 11 2008) - Page 2

Originally posted by: Nabihah

okay wow! seriously this is just amazing 👏 👏 😳 i love it!😃 please do continue fast-im eager to find out what the reason behind vidya's leaving is😳 and ooh when sagar will realize he has a cute little daughter--soo cute!😳

Originally posted by: harleensidhu1

that was great....pls conts soon....i am one of the silent readers.....but will comment from now on.....

Originally posted by: brownsuga

its realli realliii goood so anxious to find out why she left.....hopefully stuff like this happens on the showww.. it does seem to be turning over a new leaff.. :D

Originally posted by: ritzy2ritz

wow! that was amazing angel! pls cont soon! very well thought out ! i enjoyed it 😳

Originally posted by: sweet samie

nice fic i love it

Originally posted by: sania_12

nice fic i love it

Originally posted by: KHJL

wow!!!! tht was amazing 👏 👏 👏 ....must say u write very well hun 😊

awwwwwwww....luved the flashbac moments w/ sv being together....seems like they were really in luv 😳 .....i wonder what happened...

the parts w/ the lil' one was kute as well 😳 ....continue soon!!! 😛

Originally posted by: monkeylovvver92

update updat update
PLSSSS 😃
really like ure fan-fic.

O!!! MAYBE vidyas a ninja deep down under and when sagar finds out that hes married to a ninja [preferablly a purple ninja] he'll get mad cus ninjas get more attention than business tycoons. 😆
lol but seriouslly i love the way ure storys going

Originally posted by: angel.41

Hello everyone! I'm back with my second part, hope this one's as enjoyable as teh last one: Thanx Apra ji and Atohani ji for comments! 🤗 lol And those who read it but didn't really comment 😳 🤗 still Thanx a tonne!

Part 2

"Humara haath chodiye..." Vidya whispered behind Aniket's back. Saagar mischiviously shaked his head. "Achcha Saagar, ab hum - " Aniket said breaking apart from the hug, but his sentence stops as he sees Vidya's wrist caught by Saagar. "Guys!" he yelled in frustration. Saagar immediately let go of Vidya's wrist. "Woh...jijaji...woh...humara pallu...." trying to think of what excuse to make, "humara pallu....inki ghadi mein...." Vidya said too embarassed to say any more. "Hum chalte hain." And with that she quickly but embarassed ran out of their room. Two times in a row! She thought.

After a couple minutes, Saagar and Aniket walk down the stairs. "I'm leaving Vidya," Saagar yelled at the door. Vidya looked up and gave him a smile. But, just as Saagar was about to leave, Sameer came running up to him in time to say his goodbye. "Papa!" "Hey, sonny boy! Saagar said getting down on his knees. "Papa aaj shaam ko ghar jaldi aa jayenge, theek hain? Lekin to mummy se kehna ke tayyar rahein, we'll be going out tonight!" "Okay!" Sameer said in excitement. "Now give me a high-five!" and Sameer very enthusiastically gave him a hihg-five. Watching all this, a smile appeared on Vidya's face as she say Saagar and Sameer connecting once again, just like before. Saagar got up to leave, "Bye jaan! Hey, Sameer" he turned to look at his son, "Bhool na mat," and gave him a wink. Sameer gave his dad a thumbs up, and with that Saagar left for work.

"Bye," Vidya softly replied. Bye, that was one of the few words she'd learned so gar. Others included Okay, Fine, No, Yes, That's all, Please, Thank-you, and a few more. She had the perfect life, she thought. Her husband and his family were so loving. She recieved more respect that what she'd even dreamed of, life was just perfect. Until...

And she remember that incident, again. Her eyes began to get moist; remembering those bitter moments that just brought pain to her, nothing else. She grit her teeth giving it a second thought. Was it my fault? Am I really the one to blame? If it was my fault, would I still be hurt remembering those moments?

Vidya wasn't the only one feeling the pain. At the Singh household, Saagar was in the same situation. Day, night, the only thing he ever wished and prayed for was that Vidya and Sameer come back. He had become so stubborn, strict and so heartless without them. It was like he was a whole different person; just worse. He would realize the same thing everyday; how incomplete he was without them. "Chale Mr.Ocean?" Saagar was jerked out of his thoughts by Bharat pulling on his arm. "Come on, I'm getting late for school." Ready to leave, "Chalo." Saagar replies, wiping away a tear.

Saagar was on his way to dropping Bharat to school, Bharat sat on the front passenger seat, while Saagar took the driver's seat. (Well, obviously!😛) The first few minutes were absolute silence. Okay, this has to stop, Saagar thought. "So how's school?" Saagar said, breaking teh silence. "Fine," Bharat replied quietly. Saagar sighed, as he knew this was coming. He was beginning to get tired of this now. "Charat, tum mujhse baat kyun ni karte?" Saagar said, looking for an answer. "Every time this happens." But Bharat didn't really reply, but just kept staring out of the window quietly. Saagar once again sighed, and a sad look appeared on his face. A few minutes later, they arrived at school. Saagar stopped his car in front of Bharat's school, and Bharat opened the car door to get out. As it was raining, he opened up his umbrella and stepped outside, and shut the door. Saagar rolled down his window, and poked his head out. "I'll be here to pick you up after school!" Tow seonds later Bharat turned his head, and gave a soft smile. Satisfied, Saagar rolled back his window and backed out of the parking lot, a smile appearing on his face. "At least he smiled," he says, but realising what he just said, that smile dissapears. What's happened to me?! He thinks.

Okay guys...ermm that was a little long but I hope you guys like it!

But regardless, i still enjoyed ur post it was really great please dont think they were long...it was fabulous.....!!!👏

Originally posted by: angel.41

Hello everyone! 🤗 🤗🤗

Aww man, I just got an awesome idea in my mind and I was being so impatient!😳 So I decided to post it right now for you guys as a part. 😊 Here is Part 3, errm, hope you guys like it 😊 Thanx once again everyone! 🤗🤗🤗Go two posts above for your name😳 and thanxx for waing and the comments😳 they are highly highly appreciated 😊😊🤗🤗🤗

Part 3

A flood of memories overcame Saagar as he stood at the traffic light waiting for the light to turn green. Okay so, errm.. imagine that Saagar and Vidya's relationship was just like it was in the show: After Saagar got recovered, he'd totally forgotten Vidya and everything she ever did for him. But just like the show, he got to know her and eventually found out the fact that he was married to her: and received the shock of his life. And then, as all of us waited for their "Special Night" 😳. I'll be continuing from the morning after that night. Oh yes, and instead of being at the farmhouse or something, they are at home. Saagar was awaken by the sun's rays hitting his face, early in the morning. He slowly opened his eyes, to find Vidya sleeping next to him on the bed, peacefully. A smile appeared on his face, as he recollected last night's moment; how two souls that were made for each other finally became one. He admired her beauty, as her hair was let open and how she was sleeping so cutely and charmingly. He noticed a strand of her hair was in her face, and slowly took it and tuck it behind her ear. He then leaned over and placed a soft kiss on her cheek, and retreated back to his position. Having his left arm underneath his left cheek, he just lay there beside her watching his angel sleep soundly.

After a couple of minutes, Vidya slowly opened her eyes to find her husband staring at her with a smile on his face. She blushed and looked at her hand, which now had his hand on it. "Tum khush ho na, Vidya..." Saagar asked looking her in the eyes, "mere saath?" He needed to know that she was happy. "Hum bohot khush hain......aap ke saath." Vidya replied, all blushing at the same time. Saagar got closer, now their faces just a few inches apart, and noticed Vidya's face get redder and redder. "Vaada karo mujhse Vidya," he whispered. "Tum mujhe kabhi chor kar nahi jaogee..." Vidya, as much as she wanted, couldn't stop blushing and turning so red. She calmy, and slowly looked up to look him in his eyes, "Hum appse vaada karte hain, hum hamesha aap ke saath rahenge.." she replied. The small smile which was on Saagar's face now got even bigger and he hugged Vidya hoping of never letting go. "I love you, Vidya." he whispered. Now Vidya was as red as she could ever get, because she did understand what he was saying. "I...I lowe you thoo.." Vidya hesitantly replied. Saagar as much as he tried to control his laughter, gave out a little laugh at his wife's cuteness. "App hum par hass rahein hein?" Vidya said breaking apart from the hug. "Nahin toh!" replied Saagar, trying not to get his wife upset.

Vidya, now realising it was morning made her way out of bed, "Hume jaane dijiye, hume sabke liye naashta bhi bana na hein.." she protested for Saagar to let her go. But eventually Saagar let go of his grip on her, and she got up beginning to walk to the bathroom. "Kahan jaa rahee ho?" Saagar asked, lying on the bed with both his arms cross underneath his head. Vidya turned around and gave him a Duuuhhh! look saying, "Naha nein, aur kahaan?" She proceeded walking until she heard his voice again. "Mein bhi chaloon?!" Now Vidya turned around gasping ti see that he was now up and sitting on teh bed. "Chi! Hum khud jaate hein, koi zaroorat nahin, thenkoo!" And with that Vidya ran into the washroom blushing a little, before he did or said anything else. Saagar laughed as she ran inside, and throwed his pillow in the air, exclaiming, "Saagar Pratap Singh!! You have the best wife in the whole wide world!" Vidya opened the bathroom door, upon hearing the noise: "Aap ne kuch kaha?" "Nahin toh," Saagar replied, acting like nothing happened. Vidya with a slight hmm, went back into the washroom.

Honk Honk! "Yeah Yeah, I'm moving!" Saagar shouted at the people behind him honking at him. "God!" he said, frustrated and angry at himself for getting carried away again. He pressed his foot on the acceleration and continued his journey home: from dropping Bharat to school.

Okay guys, it's 1:21 AM right now and I've gotta go to sleep now, or else my dad'll come yell at me to go to sleep! 😆 Hope you guys liked this part! 😊