[[FF]]~Kahin Pyar Na Hojaye.... UPD!-pg4

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Rushvi

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Posted: 18 years ago

#11

Aww..Gauri this seems cute...do continue with it..can't wait to read on 😊

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Gaurie

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Posted: 18 years ago

#12

Aww Thank you Meera! I hope that's just it, and they didn't get scared away by my writings 😛

Thank you Rushvi1 Will post next part soon!

So 3 commenters only?? Oh well... I'll live...

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Deena

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Posted: 18 years ago

#13

oh Gaurie! that was so gr8!i hope u update soon. well take care,

with regards,
|[>Deena|

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Ruchika

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Posted: 18 years ago

#14

aditi!!! u stole my spot again! 😆 😆 😆 jk...
gr8 start gaurie! 👏 👏 👏 very cute! 😳
does tushar HAVE to be in every ffu write??? 😆 😆 😆

-Ruchika

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Gaurie

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Posted: 18 years ago

#15

@Deena, Thank you!

@Ruchika, Thanks! Yes! Of course he has to! I'm going to be in this too 😉 Can you guess what role I'll play?? 😳 😆

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Gaurie

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Posted: 18 years ago

#16

Okay here's the next part... Though I must say I'm disapointed of the so little comments... Hopefully more to come soon! 😳 I love the title Kahin Pyar Na Hojaye because I was just singing the song and I realized it was exactly how... well, it was the feel of the story basically 😉 So here's Part One, full.

This is my story. My love story. I don't want to sound all filmy but I really did fall in love. My story started at the beginning of summer, not too long ago…

I love my mum. Well I know I love her love her, but right now, I really love her! She's letting me counsel! It took me a while to explain to her that I wouldn't be in any mortal danger and that it's just for 6 weeks and just because it's for girls and boys, doesn't mean my reputation will be smeared. It took a lot to convince her, but in the end, it all paid off!

Then I realized how much packing I had to do. I ran up to my room, taking two steps at a time, and opened my closet door. I'm such a slob! I had clothes on the bed, in a corner on the floor, and probably plenty more in the bathroom. I closed my eyes and wished my clothes packed. I opened them again. Nope, it didn't work. Just then, the door opened.

"You were leaving and you didn't think to even tell me?" he said. I spun around and smiled inspite of myself. I was supposed to be in a fight with him, again, and we weren't supposed to be talking, again, and we were going to make up soon, again.

"Tushar!" I ran up to him. He had on his hurt face. "What's wrong?"

"What do you mean what's wrong?" he sat down on my bed. I followed him and sat down beside him. "You're going and you didn't even think that maybe you should consider telling your best friend!"

I never even considered that Tushar could actually be hurt because of this. We always fought over stupid reasons and we always made up. We never actually got upset. "You know I wanted to be a counselor there, since we went there as kids." I didn't add that that was where we met for the first time, the two splashers in the kiddie pool.

"I didn't think your mum would let you go." Tushar said glumly.

"Yeah well. She did." I said. I gave him a quick hug and started packing again. We were in silence for about 2 minutes (he could never stay quiet) when he started to talk again.

"So what will you be teaching?" Tushar said, somewhat helping pack by folding the clothes, but then got frustrated and sat back down.

"Pool duty!" I practically screamed. I was waiting forever for him to ask! The pool was my second home. I could spend hours in the water, and Tushar knew it. He frequently called me a fish in human disguise. He knew how much I wanted Pool Duty too.

"Really?" He no longer looked upset. He came to me and gave me a big bear hug. "Congrats, yaar!"

"Thanks! Man, I wish you could come with me." I could feel tears bubbling inside. "Six weeks without you, how can I do it?" Tushar gave me a look and gave me another small hug.

"You never know. I might infiltrate the camp and come kidnap you!" I laughed. Even with all our arguments, Tushar and I were as thick as thieves, and nothing could break us apart. I was sure of it.

A/N :: Please Please PLEASE respond and comment!!! I'm like addicted! Please don't break my heart! Tell me how you like the title too!

Edited by Gaurie - 18 years ago

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Deena

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Posted: 18 years ago

#17

Yay, im 1st. One sec.

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wow Gaurie! That's awsome! Your soo good ar writing. Please update soon, and u have to update ur Tusshar and Mahi one 2! Please do continue. its gr8!😉take care,

with regards,
|[>Deena|

Edited by sakeena - 18 years ago

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Gaurie

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Posted: 18 years ago

#18

Thanks Deena! I know I have to update that one, I'm in such a writer's blcok! This one is kinda easier to do since it's SV and it's based on a true thing, I don't have to think up of so many ideas 😛

No more comments? 😕

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ADITI

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Posted: 18 years ago

#19

ohhh gaurie its awesome yaar looks as if day by day nd with evy part am getting addictive to ur fic...dis one was gr8 👏i liked de title tooo 😃 cont soon dis one nd da one of tush nd mahi!!!

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Gaurie

@Gaurie

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Posted: 18 years ago

#20

I know!! This one is so easy to write! That one is bugging me since I know you guys have bee missing it! I want to update this one, but only with a few more comments... 😉

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