Kuch pal...(FF) updated 6/2 - Page 2

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Posted: 18 years ago
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It's written so nicely Srav Di1 Loved how Sagar is already so fascinated by her! Can't wait till the next part!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 1


Vidya glanced behind her to make sure no one was following. She felt naughty meeting her husband in private this way. But she couldn't say no. He had sent strict orders through Bharat that she was to meet him at 9:00 PM sharp. Alone.

She entered the garden quietly. She heard footsteps behind her and was about to turn around. But a hand slipped over her eyes and a whisper in her ears, "heyyy..."

Shivers tingled up and down her spine as she turned around to look into her husband's eyes. His lips were curved in not quite a grin, but more than a smile...half smile...she would call it a half smile. He ran a finger down her cheek and whispered, "Vidya..." Oh, just the way he said her name made her go weak in the knees. She watched as he bent towards her...closing the distance between them...three inches...two inches...one inch...

Vidya awoke with a start. Rubbing her eyes, she looked around the bedroom. Hum sapne dekh rahe the? Blushing slightly, she whispered, "kaash yeh sach hota." 😳

*****

The morning after Sagar's recovery...

Vidya entered the hospital room hesitantly, not wanting to wake her husband up. But as soon as she stepped in, his eyes sprung open. Vidya gasped. Sagar smiled at her and said, "Don't worry...I was just pretending to be asleep."

Vidya blinked, "ji?" Sagar grinned and said, "Woh Bharat hai na...woh aake bahut bak bak kar raha tha...jaane ka naam hi nahi leta...isliye neend ki natak karna pada."

And then he winked at her.

Vidya gasped, and then blushed a deep shade of red. Yeh baar baar hume woh sapna kyon yaad aa raha hai?

Swallowing nervously, Vidya walked near his bed. She asked, "Ab aap kaise hai?"

Sagar stretched his arms and said, "bilkul theek hoon...ghar jaane ka mann kar raha hai...waise Vidya, tum kaha rehti ho?"

Vidya looked at him shocked. She fumbled for words, "woh...hum...aap..." lagta hai inhe pata nahi...

Sagar raised an eyebrow, looking at her expectantly. She finally muttered, "hum yehi paas mein rehte hai." Sagar smiled and nodded. They sat in silence that way for a few minutes, Sagar stretching, and Vidya trying her best not to stare at her husband. She couldn't help it. He just had that affect on women☺️



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Posted: 18 years ago
#13
gr8 part sravi di!!! 👏 👏 👏 after a longggggggggggg time 😆
i liked at the end how u wrote he just had tht effect on women... 😆 😆 😆 so true!!! 😳 😆 😆



-Ruchika
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Posted: 18 years ago
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That was gr8 Sraviji.... I really liked the way u described Vidya's sapna, it was soooooo sweeeettt!!
The way Vidya reacted when Sagar asked where she lives was also brilliant!! 👏
Plz continue soon....
Devika
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Posted: 18 years ago
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OMG! Sravi, that was just toooooooooooooo cute 😳 😳 i just felt like pinching both of their cheeks then.. Sagar's cuteness and Vidya is sho cute too... i love the update, do continue soon.. you write so well!! 😃 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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oh wow Sravi...that was tooo sizzaling and cute at the same time...Great job 👏 👏 ...Please try to continue soon....I'm eager to read on 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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😃 OMG That Was Great! Continue Soon Please!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#18
thanks so much for the lovely comments everyone!🤗They mean a lot
to
me 😳 Waise...Happy June 1st!!😃

Part 2


Vidya asked Maaji several times why exactly she was supposed to hide
her identity from her husband. She got the same reply each time, "Woh
abhi yeh sab keliye tayyar nahi hai!!" Vidya wanted to know what "yeh sab"
consisted of, but she was too scared to ask.

Finally getting the nerve, Vidya asked, "Lekin maaji, hum unhe kya
bataayengi ki hum yaha kyon hai?"

Maaji gave her a thoughtful look and replied, "Bahu...aaj se tum Sagar ke
pita ki acche dost ki beti ho, samjhi?"

Vidya nodded and said cheekily, "Ha...lekin aap bhool kar hume bahu
mat bulaiye inke samne!" (I can't imagine Vidya saying anything cheekily
😆 )

****

Sagar entered his room with a feeling of nostalgia. He has lived here his
entire life but it seemed as if a whole chunk of his recent life was missing.
The room was filled with toys and Sagar cringed at the thought of him
behaving like an 8 year old. Maaji followed him into the room and said,
"Sagar beta, sab kuch theek to hai na?"

Sagar nodded and said, "Ha ma...lekin kya mein yeh sab khilona ke saath
khelta tha?"

Sagar's mother was at a loss of words. She couldn't possibly tell him they
weren't his when they were lying around his room so obvious to the eye.
But at the same time, she couldn't admit to him that yes, he used to play
with such toys. Seeing her ambivalence, Sagar just nodded in
understanding and moved towards the window. He pushed the curtains to
one side and took a breath of fresh air. It felt good to be back home.

****

Vidya entered her husband's room silently. She stood by the door and
watched him sleep. Oh how she wished she could tell him. She missed
talking to him, laughing with him. Most of all she missed being his friend,
his angel...his wife.

Vidya was startled out of her thoughts when he shivered. She noticed the
window was open and quickly went and closed it shut. She walked near
his bed and looked down at him with a soft smile. Making sure not to
awaken him, she pulled the covers up and over him.

She softly drew her fingers through his hair, watching him still,
mesmerized by the innocence in his face. As she was about to walk away,
he caught her wrist. Gasping, she turned around. He had a soft smile
playing around his lips but his eyes were still closed. With a slight frown
on her face, she pried his fingers open from around her wrist and laid his
hand down on the bed. The skin still tingled where he had touched her.
She began walking away, and at the door, she turned around to look at
him one last time. Looking around her and making sure no one was
watching, Vidya pulled her wrist to her lips and kissed the spot where he
had touched her.

Little did she know that her husband was watching all this with a satisfied
smile on his face! 😉

The writing's a bit messy...didn't get a chance to read it before
posting...got to run to class 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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omg !! sravi...just read the whole story !! 👏 awesome...u write very well...loved the parts 👏 do continue soon...i am waiting eagarly !! 😳
Edited by *~sur~* - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#20
Haila! So sravi does Saagar remember VIdya in ur FF? 😃 Love it!! Great job!! 👏 👏

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