(FF) Kyun Nahi Hua Pyar? NOTE Pg. 78!!!!! - Page 45

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Posted: 18 years ago
Hi Meera! Are you doing another one soon? Please do!
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Posted: 18 years ago
Hey noodles...I'm in baking class right now, so I'm working on my assignment, but on the side I'm writing a bit of my update too....I'll try to have it up in about 2 hours, when I have my actual spare! 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
Part 19

Recap: Sagar kisses Vidya, and she runs away, finally he catches up to her.


Sagar: mujhse bhaag kar tum kahaan jaogi? Tumhe main dhund hi longa...

Vidya: aap....yeh aap kya kar rahe hain? Hume choriye na…

Sagar: Hamesha saath rehne ke wada kiya hain na? Asse kaise chor du?

Vidya: aaj aap itni pyaari pyaari baatein kyun kar rahe hain?

Rahul and Maya come there

Rahul: kyunki aaj aapka pati bahot hi romantic mood mein hain...

Maya: kyunki Vidya ka birthday hain...

Vidya: aap dono mein sula hogayi?

Maya: sula?? (she looks at Sagar for help)

Sagar: she means you guys made up?

Maya nods: aap main aur Rahul dost hain...

Sagar: sirf dost?

Maya: shut up Sagar (she slaps his shoulder and goes upstairs to her room, after saying good night to everyone, as the party is almost over, and all the guests have left)

Rahul also says good night to everyone and goes towards his room downstairs.

Vidya: aab aap choriya na? Humko Sameer ko aur Bharat ko sulana bhi hain...

Sagar: uske baad?

Vidya: (confused) uske baad, hum sojayenge...

Sagar: nahin yaar Vidya, tum kamre mein sone aaogi?

Vidya: aur nahin to kya, cricket khelne?

Sagar: not a bad idea...tum aapni team saath mein leke aana...

Vidya: hum to mazak kar rahe the...

Sagar: main bhi mazak hi kar raha tha!

Vidya: oh...(She laughs and goes to Sameer and Bharat, and takes them up to their room)

Sagar: pagal hain....but I still love her!



Finally after Vidya put Sameer and Bharat both to sleep she came into her own bedroom, to find a soft instrumental theme playing from the stereo in their room, and there was a small table placed in the center of the room, with candles on top of it, and a single rose lying across one of the plates.

Vidya: yeh sab??

All of a sudden two hands creep across her waist, and she slighty turns and sees Sagar standing behind her.

Sagar: kuch mat bolo...maine yeh sab sirf hum dono ke liye kiya hain...

Vidya: lekin humne to khane kha liye hain...

Sagar: yeh dessert hain...

Vidya: lekin humne neeche cake bhi khaya tha

Sagar: (finally getting fed up) Vidya, yeh hum dono ke liye ek special dessert hain, aur tumhe khana hi parega…

Vidya: (smiles) humne maana kab kiya tha?

Sagar rolls his eyes and pulls out the chair for her to sit in, and then goes across and sits down.

Vidya: (quietly) aapne yeh sab khud kiya?

Sagar nods: sirf meri patni ke liye...

Vidya blushes even more

Sagar: yaar Vidya, tum embarrass bahot hi jaldi ho jati ho...

Vidya: embarrass?

Sagar: matlab tum sharma jati ho...

Vidya: agar aap hamesha assi baatein kahenge...to hum bahot sharma jayege...

Sagar: tumhari yaheen simple baatein hain Vidya, jo mujhe tumhari aur kheechti hain...

Vidya: please...aab bas bhi kijiye...

Sagar: ok.. tum yeh try karo, (he puts a peice of chocolate cheesecake on her plate, and hands her a fork)

Vidya looks at the fork in her hand and looks at him...

Sagar: oh main to bhul gaya, tumhe pata nahin hain, isko asse (he holds the fork in his right hand) Aab isme dalo, (he puts his own fork into the cheesecake) aab seedha aapne mu mein (instead of putting it in his own mouth, he puts it in Vidya's mouth)

Vidya: yeh...yeh bahot hi accha hain...kisne banaya?

Sagar: maine...

Vidya: aapne? Aap ko yeh sab aata hain?

Sagar nods: kabhi kabhi...phele jab main college mein tha, tab main aapna khaana khud banata tha...aur lekin aab to tum aagaye ho na? Mujhe koi jinta nahin!

Vidya: ji nahin…kabhi aap bhi khaana bana sakhte hain...

Sagar: theek hain, lekin ek shart par...

Vidya: woh kya?

Sagar: main sirf hum dono ke liye hi banaonga...

Vidya smiles...

Sagar: aur haan....humare baache ke liye bhi...

Vidya: Sameer bahot khush hoga iss se..

Sagar: main sirf Sameer ki baat nahin kar raha hoon...

Vidya: (blushes) aap...aap....

Sagar: Vidya, chalo na...

He offers her his hand, and she hesitantly takes it, and he leads her to their bed, and places her down, aur dheere dheere he takes off her earrings, and her necklace, and all the pins out of her hair, all while she is as red as a tamatar!


I'll stop now, while I get ahead…I'm not sure if I'll continue that scene or not…but I will continue the ff….I'm running late as usual, so no pm's!! Please do post comments though!!

Luv ya all loads,

Meera


Edited by indiandoll89 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
oooh...so now I understand what you were doing in your baking class! 😉 saagar...you liar...you should tell vidya that meera made it...not you! 😆

awesome part meera! 👏 👏 You know ever since yesterday, the mere mention of saagar/sharad makes me go into a frenzy or straight into dream land...so anything he says is heaven for me 😳 😆

loved the part where they both say "hum mazak kar rahe the"...I can so imagine it 😳

awww...saagar's such a sweet hubby! 😳 He bakes for her...or at least successfully steals what Meera bakes 😆

awesome part hun!! LOVED it 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: inavars

oooh...so now I understand what you were doing in your baking class! 😉 saagar...you liar...you should tell vidya that meera made it...not you! 😆 I actually did make a cheesecake yesterday....😳😳 I rather he not tell Vidya, she might be happy with him actually making dinner for the both of them...😳😳

awesome part meera! 👏 👏 You know ever since yesterday, the mere mention of saagar/sharad makes me go into a frenzy or straight into dream land...so anything he says is heaven for me 😳 😆 don't worry....you're def not the only one....I nearly died ever time I hear this name....😳😳 I watched an epi of BMTD yesterday after the interview and it was the one of him playing bb, and he looked soooo hot, and 😳

loved the part where they both say "hum mazak kar rahe the"...I can so imagine it 😳 I'm glad you liked it!!!

awww...saagar's such a sweet hubby! 😳 He bakes for her...or at least successfully steals what Meera bakes 😆 we'll say he actually baked it!😳

awesome part hun!! LOVED it 😳 i'm really really glad that you liked it!!!😳😳😳

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Posted: 18 years ago


I'm glad you do!😃😃😃
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Posted: 18 years ago

Currently taking Math test will comment soon 😃 ....Want to hold the spot of third 😉

EDIT: Omg Meera aaj tumne to muje maar hi dala ☺️...haiii such a hot scene you wrote...my god....I shouldn't read this in class it makes me blush soo much 😳....You have to continue the scene yaar😳.😊.and put alot of details..plz. do it...or just write it and PM it to me 😆..if you don't want to post it 😉...I am soo glad you are writing these hot scenes of SV now.....omg that was sooo cute about the whole chees cake and the fork.....😆...and when Sagar says "i still love her" aww..shooo sweet...😳....Continue soon and plz empty your mail box 😉..

Love always,

Rushvi 😳

Edited by rushvi99 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
Hey you used my word tamatar in it 😳 😆 Thanks 😉 😆

Meera kya iraada hai tumhara☺️☺️☺️ yaar you have made me speechless with this part!
I love it in every part Sagar says pagal ladki but I still love her, shoo cute 😆 Finally atleast in your ff we got to see some real romance ☺️☺️
Yummi chocolate cheesecake, mummy mujhe bhi chahiye 😕 😳 😆
Meera just forget your school I want the next part right NOW 😛 Don't 🤬 next part 😳

Fabulous part 😉
Keep it up 👍🏼
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Posted: 18 years ago
Really good Meera, I think if u carry on with this scen ur gonna have to put an age limit on it 😆 😆 .

Do u wanna take over the job of the BMTd creatives, coz u could teach them a thing or 2. Y won't the ubderstand we want these sorts of scenes.

Anyway, really good, can't wait 4 the next part.

Lucky Sagaar, being so close to Vidya. 😳 😳 . Nice cute scene with the cheescake and him teaching her how to use a fork. 😳 . I wanna teach her how to use a fork, 😆 .

Reall really good, seriously
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Posted: 18 years ago
meera that was really good, but i have to say dont continue the part! u know why, ull make all the girls go crazy 😆 other then that i loved the story! plz continue fast 😃

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