FF: Hamesha Saath Rahoonga *Closed*

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Posted: 18 years ago
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I'm starting a new FF, I hope i can please you guys this time, something totally different and new, i like this style of writing better because i'm more comfortable with it. ๐Ÿ˜›

Enjoy !!

Btw, this is after Sagar is better, and for my FF, he has already accepted her. So it's kind of a fastforward from what's going on right now.... hope you all like it ๐Ÿ˜Š

"Chodiye mujhe..!!" Vidya struggled, sweat pouring across her neck, walking back towards the wall. He came slowly to her, an evil smile across his face, walking towards her, with nothing but a cunning look in his eyes.

"Chodiye.... hum aapse baat nahin karna chahti...." He cut her off, putting his hands over her lips, smiling even more widely. "Kya hua, Vidya rani.... tum humse acchi nahin lagti ? Arey, hum toh tumse bahut pyaar karte hain..... aao nah, mere saath..." He got closer, attempting to touch her cheek. "Nahin..!! Chodiye....." But she could find no more words, as she tried to muffle her talking.

Suddenly, a dark figure came into the room.....

"Chodo usse..!!" The figure ran to the man and Vidya, pulling his hand away from Vidya and slapping him right across the face.....

Harsh looked shocked, putting his hand on his face as if it burned him. Trying to be brave, he tried to look angry. But the figure was overwhelming, speaking loudly and angrily. Breathing hard, through gritted teeth, "Tumhare himmat..... tum yahaan kya karahe hai? Maine kaha tha nah... Agar tum iss kamre mein aaoge, toh main tumhe tappad maroonga aur iss ghar ko bahar nikal jaaonga... Tumhe kya lagta hai ?"

Harsh, trying not to look scared, "Hum jo bhi karte, humare marzi karte hain.... T- tum ko kya samajthi ho...."

But his words were cut off immediately. The man dragged Harsh out of the room and literally threw him out, slamming the door and turning around, to look at Vidya, who's face was a mixture of relief and worry. She was still breathing hard, tears brimming in her eyes and slowly pouring down her cheeks.....

Sagar walked slowly over to Vidya and took her hands, holding them tightly, but gently. "Vidya.... tum theek toh hai nah ? Mujhe maaf kardo... Mujhe nahin maloom tha ki Harsha iss kamre mein aaoge..."
But Vidya, still shaking, looked at Sagar right in the eyes. "Nahin... mat boliye yeh shabd... Humari ghalti thi, hum bhi nahii jaanthi thi ki woh..." But she couldn't speak anymore, her lips trembling, still in fear.

Sagar lightly kissed her forehead and took her from the wall, putting his arm around her and sat on the bed. He took her hands again, rubbing them softly, trying to relieve some of her pain. Still looking scared, Vidya looked into his eyes, and burst out crying. "Aap.... humare..... humare saath hamesha rahoge nah ? Kyunki...... hum aapko zaroorat hai....... Hum Harsh se bahut darr lagra ha hain...." Sagar shhed her with his fingers. "Yeh koi sawaal hai Vidya ? Of course main tumhare saath rahoongi... tum here sab kuch ho... mera zindagi, mera pyaar, sab kuch.... tum fikar mat karo.... main hamesha tumhare saath rahoonga."

Vidya suddenly stopped crying, her face still etched with lines of worry but feeling grateful at her husband giving so much care to her, and looked up into Sagar's eyes, full of love and concern. Opening her lips to speak, she suddenly let out a deep breath and fainted. Her eyes closed, Vidya's forehead slowly unwrinkled, and her head fell, resting softly on Sagar's chest....... he looked down, face fully of concern, at his wife sleeping... He knew he had to do something about Harsh.

Uff, that was kind of long but i tried to get some more details into it, I hope you all like it, wanted to make it SV as we were all sad because of today's episode..!! hope this cheered you all up ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Thanks everyone for helping me choose a title..!! Hopefully this one will serve the story well. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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indiandoll89 thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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This is awesome!!!!

i really really like it!!!

Please do continue soon ammmu ji!!!

Luv ya,

Meera ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: indiandoll89

This is awesome!!!!

i really really like it!!!

Please do continue soon ammmu ji!!!

Luv ya,

Meera ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Thankoo cho much Meera๐Ÿ˜ƒ basically, i've been wanting a scene where Sagar saves Vidya from something...... so I decided to make it like this๐Ÿ˜‰

Hope i didn't bore any of you... tried to go as fast as possible....

Edited by ammmu - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ awweeesome chapterrrrrrr ammmuji! Lol i'm trying to think of a title for you.....will post if i think of one ๐Ÿ˜Š Continue sooon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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I love thisss!! its soooo awesome!! your very talented..i loved the way u wrote it..the suspense ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜† and how sagar saved her..soooo adorable..about the title..umm..im gonna let u decide that..im horrible with titles ๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 18 years ago
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shockalot - Thankoo cho much..!! And please do drop the "ji" ๐Ÿ˜‰ thanks so much, will be waiting for your ideas for the title..!!

Nabhihah - Thanks so much yaar..!! i tried to make it suspenseful......?? Didn't work though, maybe with the Harsh part but i'm guessing all of you can figure out the figure was Sagar ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜† aww nahin yaar, am sure you will come up with something, you are cho creative..!! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 18 years ago
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I LOVED IT AMMUJI!!! ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ TUSI GREAT HO!!! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ . It did really cheer me up after today's episode. Please continue on with it...
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ammu that was beautiful! I love the way Sagar came in and dragged Harsh out, and then Sagar consoling and comforting her! ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ Do continue soon!

Title um...
Aap Ke Pyar Mein...
( I don't know, I guess something like that) i'm sure you can come with a better title..

Keep smiling...
Love
Soni
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thanks so much Rushvi ji, tussi bhi great ho ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜†

Awww, thanks so much Soni ji..... that's a really nice title..!! nahin, i can't come up with anything better, isliye i asked you all ๐Ÿ˜†

Will post the next one today !
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Oo Oo!!!! Dialogues seem very dhamakedaar!!! ๐Ÿ˜† And the description was so damn good, esp. near the beginning!! Can imagine it. ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘

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