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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: soni595

lovely ammu! 👏 I love how Sagar slapped Harsh, it would be such a scene..aah if they actually show this in bmtd it would be so amazing...waiting eagerly for your next part.. 😳

Aww, thanks Soni ji !! 😃 yah, i know he had slapped him before so i was thinking whether or not i should repeat it, but the other choice was to punch him, and i didn't want to do that.... yet 😆 thankoo !

nish ji - great to see you here yaar, thankoo !! 😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
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already adore this fic! 😃 keep up the great work!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Harsh touched his cheek, looked at his fingers, and then smiled..... This was exactly what he had wanted to do, to spur some anger in Sagar, to make him jealous... "Arey Sagar Babu, aap itna pareshaan kyun ho..... ab dekhna... ki hum kya karoonga aur kab karoonga...."

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Sagar sat in the office seat, still boiling with anger after what had happened in the house. He slammed his fist on the desk, gritting his teeth.... even the thought of Harsh in his mind furiated him....

.... but as hard as he was trying to get the thoughts out of his mind, they just kept coming back in... He couldn't help but think if what Harsh said was actually true... but then he mentally kicked himself, angry that he would ever think of Vidya lying to him. But.... he knew he had to do one more thing, or his mind would never rest at peace... and that was to ask Vidya what the actual truth was...

"Kuch kaam nahin hai, why am I even here today ?" he said angrily.... Quickly packing up his briefcase, he rushed home early....

(in the house)

Sagar came inside the house quietly, not wanting to talk to anyone just yet, and went to his and Vidya's room, sitting on the bed and puttting his face in his hands... why was all of this happening with him ? Just when his life seemed to be getting back to normal, another new dilemma pops up... He loved Vidya too much to let go of her, and he knew how much she loved him.... but what was he going to do now ?

Suddenly, Vidya came into the room and Sagar immediately looked up, putting on a fake smile... but it didn't fool her... "Aap yahaan ? Kyun, kaam nahin tha office mein ? sab kuch theek hai nah ?" she asked worriedly...
Sagar tried putting on a weary smile, "Arey Vidya.... main office se jaldi nikal jaata hoon, aur tum bhi nah, khush nahin ho ?" Vidya immediately felt sorry, "Nahin.... humari matlab woh nahin hain... lekhin aapke chehre mein kuch theek hain laga isliye... itna pareshaan kyun lagra raha ho ?"

Sagar's eyes filled with tears and Vidya immediately went to his side, feeling his forehead and gently touching his shoulder.... "kya hua ? bataiyye nah, kuch gadbar nahin hain hai... humein bahut china ho rahi hain aapke liye.... aap aaraam kijiye..."
Sagar got up abruptly and turned away from Vidya, trying to hide his tears, although he knew she already saw them... and decided to ask her a question he never thought he would ask her..... "Vidya... ek baat mujhse batao... ki tum aur Harsh ka rishtaa kya hain ?" ..the words pained to leave his mouth... but he knew he would never rest until he got an answer....

That one had a lot more details, next one will too...... will try and speed up the story a bit😊 enjoy !!

Again, sorry for any mistakes !😊

Edited by ammmu - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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That was lovely ammu! I love the way Sagar tries to hide his pain, yet Vidya knows his hurt...it shows the understanding between them...awww...poor baby even the thought of Vidya loving Harsh in the past pains him so much...I hope Vidya didn't love Harsh or had any relationship with him!

Keep smiling...
Love
Soni
Edited by soni595 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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"Vidya... ek baat mujhse batao... ki tum aur Harsh ka rishtaa kya hain ?" ..the words pained to leave his mouth... but he knew he would never rest until he got an answer....

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Sagar turned around, he couldn't bear to look at Vidya's eyes, and she was shocked at him asking this question..... there was a long pause before Sagar said, "Maaf.... maaf karo Vidya.... lekhin mereliye... jawaab do." He finally decided to turn around, but turned to see that Vidya wasn't there... "Vidya ?? Vidya, kahaan ho tum !" He raised his voice a bit to see if she could hear him....

Vidya was standing outside by the balcony, her hair blowing against the wind and the leaves blowing across her sari... she hugged herself to keep warm, it was getting colder... but pushed those things at the back of the mind and thought... All of a sudden Sagar was asking her this question ? What had Harsh told him ?

How could she tell Sagar........ that there used to be a relationship between her and Harsh... but it was one-sided... that is, Harsh loved Vidya, but she couldn't stand the sight of him... But still, she regretted everyday that there was someone else who loved her... it sickened her to think, what if she was actually with Harsh ? But no... she wasn't, and that was the point, she's with the one loves - Sagar...
Vidya felt terribly guilty and didn't know how to put into words how she would tell Sagar about the truth.... but what was there to be afraid about ? She never loved Harsh, and that was the main thing Sagar wanted to know.... Vidya clasped her fists firmly and stood up tall in the blowing wind... "haan.... hum Harsh se nahin pyaar karte.... aur kabhi nahin karoongi.... hum sirf Sagar se pyaar karte hain."

Sagar walked frantically around the house, shouting "Vidya" at the top of his lungs, seriously getting worried about where she was.... he finally went outside to see Vidya's fists clamped together, and was almost scared to go to her, what if she was really hurt by his words ? But no.... she was his wife, and he had to talk to her....

He put his hand on her shoulder gently and turned her around, looking into her eyes......

Too many details again..... ahhh !! Sholly again, but this time i promise i will have a lot more dialogues next episode, this one again was a thinking one.... enjoy😃

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: soni595

That was lovely ammu! I love the way Sagar tries to hide his pain, yet Vidya knows his hurt...it shows the understanding between them...awww...poor baby even the thought of Vidya loving Harsh in the past pains him so much...I hope Vidya didn't love Harsh or had any relationship with him!

Keep smiling...
Love
Soni

Thanks Soni ji..!! Aww, yahhh........ don't worry, Vidya will not love Harsh... something else will happen.... suspence will continue😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
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oh wow just read the whole thing so far!
awesome job!
oh man i hop sagar understands her
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Posted: 18 years ago
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He put his hand on her shoulder gently and turned her around, looking into her eyes......

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"....Vidya ?" He said tentatively into her eyes, not sure of what her reaction should be..... Vidya's eyes filled up with tears, and she put her arms around his neck and hugged him tightly.... Surprised at what was going on, Sagar slowly put his hands on her waist and hugged her back.......

"Ummm.... tumne kamre ko kyun chaligayi ?" he said slowly, and Vidya let go of him gently and wiped her tears, turning around from him... She knew what she had to say and was going to say it now...

"Humein maaf kijiye Sagar.... Hum toh sirf paanch minute sochne keliye chahti thi, isliye hum yahaan hain.... Humse kuch baat karni hai aapko....." and without waiting for Sagar to say something, she talked about Harsh...

Vidya told Sagar of this one-sided relationship between the two of them.... "Humne Harsh ko kabhi pyaar nahin kiya. Woh sirf humein pyaar karte the..... aur.... humein lagta hain woh abhi humse...... py-pyaar karte hain..." Sagar immediately boiled with anger. His forehead wrinkled and clamped his fists... how he would give anything right now to go and kill Harsh this very instant.... but he let Vidya go on with her story.....
She told him that suddenly she felt scared and even more uncomfortable by his presence because he was trying to separate her from Sagar..... and at this, she turned around, looking into Sagar's eyes, which still looked angry, and touched his right cheek lovingly with her hand.... "Hum aapko nahin cheena chahti hoon. Hum sirf aapko pyaar karti hoon... sirf aap........" but Sagar cut her off and took her hand from his cheek and helt it tightly....

"Vidya... main jaanta hoon ki tum sirf mujhse pyaar karti ho... lekhin.... mujhe Harsh iss ghar ko rehne keliye accha nahin lagta.... woh kyun yahaampar hain ? Agar main ek baar usko chehre to dekho, toh... patha nahin ki main kya karoonga...." His grip on Vidya's hand went even tighter, and she winced with pain... he suddenly let go gently, feeling guilty that he let his anger get to him.... "ohh.. sorry... maaf karo" Vidya just shook her head and smiled, her eyes brimming with tears again....

Sagar gently kissed her forehead and took her waist, bringing him closer to her.... she once again put her arms around his neck, but this time, she was not crying.... and they both hugged each other for what it seemed like eternity, the strong wind blowing across their faces, their love never breaking...... "hum saath saath hain".....

You can treat this as a special update for V day if you'd like !😉 Hope you all liked it, i'm not great at writing....... romance ?? 😕😆 so yah, but hope it was fine and once again Happy V day to everyone !! 😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: jigna_07

oh wow just read the whole thing so far!
awesome job!
oh man i hop sagar understands her

Thanks so much !! just wait and see😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Absolutly wonderful..... 👏 👏 I love your details plz keep the details they help with the imagination 😃

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