'She’s mine'- FF- Updated (Pg102) - Page 4

i just read both parts i must say hats off 👏 👏 👏 very well writtern i do hope you post next part soon!!!

sharan XXX

Episode 3

Saagar has this angry and determined look on his face, his eyes look fiercely. Vidya breaks down after slapping Saagar….

Vidya: Hum bhi kya sochne lage the….(puts the palm of her right hand on her forehead) Humne yeh kaise samaj liya ke aap badal gaye hai. Galti humari hai ke aaj tak (pauses) aaj tak humne aap se kuch nahin kaha, aap ke kisi bhi galat baat ka saamna nahin kiya. (holds her mouth and then lets go) Galti toh humari hai….

Vidya sits down on to the bed and puts her hands down.

Vidya: Sirf isliye kyon ki, hum aapko taqleef nahin dena chahte the. Hum nahin bardaasht kar sakte ke aap ko koi choth poche. Isliye…isliye humne aapki sab baat suni, aap ke chubne wale shabd bhi sune. Iss umeed mein ke shayad….shayad ek din aap mujhe usi izzat ke saath baat karege jaise ek patni ko milna chahiye.

Saagar softens down hearing Vidya's words.

Saagar: (repenting) Vidya…

Vidya gets up and stands in front of him with courage.

Vidya: (shakes her head) Ab aap ko kuch kehne ki zaroorat nahin hai. Aaj jo aapne kiya aur kaha, woh koi bhi pati apne patni ke saath nahin karta. Lekin hum yeh baat aapse kyon kar rahe hai….jiss insaan ne iss shaadi ki kabhi izzat nahin ki, apni patni ko kabhi uska sahin darja nahin diya….woh yeh sab baat kaise samjhega. Hum laakh gawaar sahin, lekin usse kahin zyada aapki soch…aapke vichaar gawaar hai….Saagar Pratap Singh!

Saagar is stunned and looks remorseful.

Saagar: Vidya…main…

Vidya: (puts her finger up) Ek minute, aaj humein bolne dijiye kyon ki aaj ke baad aap hamara chera bhi nahin dekhege.

Saagar is bewildered and in complete shock, his eyes become more tearful. He puts his hands on Vidya's arms but she nudges them off.

Saagar: Vidya…itni bhi bari baat- (Cut off by Vidya)

Vidya: (shouts) Yeh bari baat nahin hai? (changes tone slightly)Yeh bari baat nahin hai?

Saagar: Nahin…suno…yeh mera matlab-(puts his hand on his forehead, attempting to comprehend whats happening and what is being said)

Vidya: Saagar, aap jaante bhi hai ke pati aur patni ka rishta kya hota hai?

Saagar looks down at loss of words.

Vidya: Toh phir main yeh sab aapko kyon samjha rahi hu. Mera kya haq banta hai aapko kuch bhi kehna ka. Aapne yeh haq toh kisi aur ko pehle se hi de diya hai…

[Long pause as they both look in to each other's eyes]

Vidya starts walking away from Saagar but then something….infact some hand stops her… its Saagar. Vidya's back is still facing the side of Saagar's, his head is looking downwards.

Saagar: (sorrowful) Tumhe pura haq hai Vidya (Vidya cries more on hearing this). Pura haq hai.

Vidya leaves his hand and continues towards the door, as she grabs the handle…

Saagar: Tum jhoothi ho Vidya…

Vidya suddenly stops and remembers the line said by Saagar when he was mentally a child. Saagar moves towards Vidya's back and hesitantly (at first) holds on to her arms except this time gently. Vidya jerks a bit as Saagar quietly talks in to her ear….

Saagar: Vidya…tumhe pura haq hai mujhse yeh sab kehne ki. Pura haq hai… lekin please mujhe chor kar mat jao. (He looks side on and sniffs away his tears and Vidya holds on to her mouth, trying not to make her crying vocal)

Then Saagar lightly but firmly places his forehead on her bare shoulder, as he cries away. Vidya is frozen.

Saagar: I'm sorry Vidya….I'm sorry….(his voice goes quieter but the anxiety increases in his voice) sorry….sorry…sorry.

Vidya tries to control herself as Saagar's pain is becoming more evident on her shoulder.

Vidya: (slowly giving in) Aap humein jaane dijye…

Saagar continues to say sorry and gradually Vidya's hand lets go of the door handle. She clenches her fist but then Saagar's face moves forward and he softly kisses her left shoulder. Saagar moves his body closer to Vidya's as his face moves up further towards the neck, very tenderly he pecks her cold skin. Vidya, not in control of herself, unfolds her fist and steadily moves it up to scuffle Saagar's hair.

OMG! *REEMZ*!!! I LOVE THIS!! !PLEASE PLEASE HRRRRRY!! AND CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HURRRRRRYYY!

YOU ARE JUST TOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO GUD!

LOL Nabihah you get quite excited don't you! 😛 I'll try and do 2 episodes tomorrow. 😊

Originally posted by: *Reemz*

LOL Nabihah you get quite excited don't you! 😛 I'll try and do 2 episodes tomorrow. 😊

OH YA! ur writing mixed with SAGAR AND VIDYAS Chemistry!!!!!!!! i strt fallin off my chair and jumpin up and down!!!!

loll NABIHAH i'm falling out of my chair with yoouuuu!! 😆 😆
HAI Reemu, kya baat hai! Doing a wink wink scene next!?!? 😉

can i call u reemu too?: 😳 😳 ok reeemu...ur just tooooooooooooooooo gud!!!! i cant stop saying tht..i know ive said it a lot!! but i just cant stop! REEEMU! u r just great... here are a few more million claps..u deserve more 😳

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I feel the same way...wow...when I can feel their emotions...It is too good...Now I really wish they had a jumping up and down smiley...
*Two Updates tommorrow...If it is anything like the preview here..I can honestly say...Kal kab aayega...*

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WOW!!! reemz di that was... AWESOME!!!! hehehe...so cute, so wonderful, sensational, sensual... the part was fabulous!!!
i luv the way u write, its expressive and emotional... can't wait for the next part!! dont make us wait too long!!