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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 11

Vidya POV

I was getting ready for the party that I and Arjun were going to, atleast trying to, Preity promised to come and help me. I am overwhelmed with how everything is turning out. Arjun and I are like inseparable, Suhana and Sagar are having problems although they make-out a lot especially when they spot me. I guess it's Suhana's way to make me jealous which fails miserably and Sagar's way of taunting me and trying to prove to me that Suhana is his Cinderella but he's only trying to prove to himself, or so it seems. He has been a bit of a pain and he occasionally puts me on the spot and tries to diss me off but that's only when Arjun is around and Preity says he's just jealous of the fact that Arjun's and my relationship is a whole lot stronger and is not based on a lie. However I can't help to feel a bit bad from him and the way he's got himself wrapped in a problem and when he finds out the truth about Suhana he's going to suffer more and then he'll break down or something and then come around. Hopefully that is soon, but why would I care after so much of the damage he caused, because I'm his Cinderella and he's still my prince and I care for him, he seems to be a genuine person who can't figure out from right to wrong but when he does he fixes it and something inside of me wants for him to be truthfully happy not his big ego getting in the way. I heard my door open and I snapped my head around to look at Preity. "I've got your dress and everything and I'm sure Arjun in fact every boy in this school won't be able to take their eyes off of you" she seemed ecstatic and I think whoever walked by her on her way here would have noticed too. She pulled out a beautiful dress of a soft silky gold colour it was long and reached the floor. It was absolutely beautiful something a celebrity would wear. "You are kidding me, I can't pull that off, it's too good for me" I looked at preity with big eyes that had a hint of doubt but all I could see in her eyes was confidence. "No it's the other way around, this is the dress for you and you have to wear it no other substitute" she answered. I looked back at the dress and bit my lip. I nodded my head as a yes to wear it and right away I was dragged away by Preity. I put the dress on and she did my make-up. I looked at myself in the mirror and I felt like a super model out of a magazine a celebrity on the red carpet. I looked quite nice. I hugged Preity and then the door opened again, hoping it to be Arjun I turned with the wind hitting my face. Instead it was Sagar who looked kind of shocked. Preity nudged me from the side and whispered so that only I could hear "told you no one is going to bother looking at anyone else but you" then she said out loud "I better get going, I have to get ready." She rushed out of the room and Sagar was still standing there. Looking at me his eyes travelled to look at mine. He kept looking at my eyes not taking them off not even blinking. It felt awkward having him look at me with his eyes locked to mine. Then the door opened again and it was Arjun. "You look stunning" he said as he stepped in. I walked over to him and he hugged me, I softly hugged back but the little butterflies that were in my stomach were gone. Am I started not to like Arjun because of Sagar. Can't be, but the way Sagar was looking at me made me feel different now about Arjun. I guess I never really liked Arjun, I'll have to tell him after the party so that the date could be cancelled. I looked back as I walked out the door at Sagar his eyes fell on mine again and I couldn't help but to feel bad about the whole Cinderella thing. I could have told him who I was and not gotten together but I couldn't help but to feel shy at the same time. Maybe I have a small crush on him.

C.C

Edited by loveisreal222 - 16 years ago
Saniiii thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
#52
Ohh My God.. fabulous update... loved it totallly.. please continue soooonn.. !!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#53
no dont make arjun and vidya break up, they are a good way for sagar to want vidya more.
loved the update. continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#54

Fianlly i was waiting for this, i thought of pming you but i figured you would update

fianlly vidya doesn't like arjun, and plus she is going to tell him, i also hope sagar recgonizes vidya execpt in a different dress!

plz continue!

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Posted: 16 years ago
#55
when you gonna update? update soon, its interesting
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Posted: 16 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: Tariii

no dont make arjun and vidya break up, they are a good way for sagar to want vidya more.

loved the update. continue soon

never thought about it that way, yeah loveisreal222 could you do that, it would be cooler
Edited by still_smiling - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#57

Awesome update Di...l'm very sure that Vidya must've looked stunning...please continue soon!!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Heres the next chapet. I didn;t like it much, but yeah,
Part 12

I enjoyed my evening with Arjun a lot but my mind kept wondering to tell him about my feelings and what I want after all he deserves to at least know, what I'm feeling inside. I sat at the table with the Arjun all by ourselves. Everyone was dancing and having fun while I was playing with my thumbs. " Hey do you want to go now, for our date, its a bit boring here and crowded" he asked. I nodded and he took my hand. He led me outside to the car and stopped me before getting in. "Did I forget to tell you that you look gorgeous" he said. I nodded and giggled. "About the 100th time you did" He opened the passenger seat door. I sat in and gave a slight smile at him. He must really like me and if I tell him it'd break his heart. The car ride was decent, we had conversations about our life and I told him about my mom, and about my life growing up. He talked about his family and his goals. We got along fine. Maybe I do like him a bit a bit less than Sagar but I know we'll never be. I wonder what Sagar is doing at the moment.

With Sagar

Sagar POV

Suhana and me were making out in the dorm lounge, after another fight of ours. We hardly talk, all we do is make-out and I hate that. It's like she's not interested in talking to me or whatever. I let my thoughts go as Suhana's phone started ringing. "I better get this" she hurriedly walked into the hall. She seems so different from my Cinderella. But one thing is that if she is my Cinderella why do I have to "be" with her. She's just a girl from that night. But what if she's not even my Cinderella, what if Vidya was right. I mean I had a real connection with my Cinderella but there's nothing here. The curiosity inside of me began to grow. I got up and quietly walked by to the hall Suhana was. She didn't notice me and kept talking on the phone loud enough for me to hear. "Yeah he's real dumb, can't believe Sagar bought the fact I'm his Cinderella. But don't worry Steve me and you tonight for sure. Did you make sure Arjun got the plan, he knows what to do with Vidya right. I don't want anything to mess up. He gets her drunk and ditches her than you guys can do whatever you like with her." My hands shook in disbelief. "Suhana" I yelled so that she could hear. She snapped her head back and gasped. Her phone fell on the ground. "You liar" I walked towards her angrily. I grabbed her arm roughly. " You liar, I can't believe you" she didn't look as scared but she mumbled something that I could hear. "But you did believe me and not that stupid Vidya, who was your actual Cinderella" I couldn't stand it so I slapped her. I ran out of the dorm fast, to my car. Thoughts submerging in my head. Is she alright. I can't believe that she's my Cinderella, it all makes sense now. Why did I have to yell at her, wait why didn't she want me too know. I just hope she's okay enough. After this that Arjun boy, Steve and Suhana are going to get rusticated and that's for sure. That's a promise.

Vidya POV

"Come on" Arjun said handing me some beer. "I don't drink' I said for the seventh time. "Oh come on it won't hurt" he kept insisting. He put it to my mouth but I snapped it away. "No I won't" He smiled at me. "Okay don't drink it, what about juice" he asked. Finally some sense. "Yes please" I answered. "Waitor" he called out loud. But no one came. "I'll go up and order instead" so he went and left. He came back with the juice in his hands. "Thank you" I said taking the juice into my hands. I gulped it down.

No POV

Vidya kept asking for more until she lost he senses and started talking about cows. Arjun took her outside the restaurant to the street. "Close your eyes, I'll bring you a cow" she closed her eyes smiling. Arjun ran off into the dark leaving behind a clueless Vidya.

Pre-cap: Vidya: My name is Bebo!!!

Sagar: what?!

Vidya: yes, yes, yes!

End of chapter

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Posted: 16 years ago
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OMG that wasgret

sagar finds out and he will go with vidya

now vidya won't feel guilty and will go wid sagar!

plz continue soon!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow..what a twist...i never thought Arjun character will end up like this...hope vidya is ok..

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