SV SS: Echoes of Love = UPD PG 46 (16/10-09) - Page 11

Originally posted by: Manusha_LuvSD

I was in la la la land with that update..

Gonna hafta tie a string around your ankle to make sure we get you back from LaLaLa Land Manu! 😉

u kill me GG....superb update hun...and so long too

Thanks so much Manusha! 😳

OMG!! I AM SHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO SRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRY!!! whatever u say, i'll agree. amm really really really srry for not reading it yet. and how could i miss this???? i can't believe i didn't have time for it, it was ...............................wow!! just wow!!

Okay ... I'm officially "un-mad" at you now! 😆

ofcourse youre writing it, so itz way more than wow, but you get the pic. Amazing updates!!

Thank you so much meri choti behen! 😳

omg, i feel sooo bad for vidya, he doesn't really love her(though he ust loves her looks)

oh I don't know ... maybe you should re-read it. His feelings are there, just verra subtle. He is a bit knocked sideways ... it's take guys longer to "catch on" sometimes. 😆

wow, itni jaldi thora sa romance??😆😆😆 fantabulistinc job gg di!! out of this world. Thnx for starting this ss, it is mindblowing! . wow, me musta been daydreaming, it was shoooooooooooooooo good!

Awww ... thanks again Radhika! 😳😳😳

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OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMGGGGGGGGGG!! WOAH!! That was a big scene for me to take in!! OMG, woh chacha aur chachi.......wow, feel like smacking them!! they are soo evil!!

Well ... there usually is a villain right? So I made them mine! 😆😉😆

poor vidya has to go through so much pain.

I know ... she has to suffer, but hopefully, will be worth it in the end yaar? 😊

Sagar is kinda cute, but mean. He is just using her......clearly dones't have any intentions of marrying her!! I feel soo bad for vidya. But,really,raeally luved the cute romance scnee between them!! wah!! that was fabs!!

Sagar really isn't mean ... just verra confused. What his intentions are, I don't think even he knows .. yet! <grin>

how do u write this well?? i was soo sleepy but then snapped out of it reading this. U are sooo awesome!! i'd be first in line to buy and get a signed copy of your future book, which will happen soon cuz you are an amazing writer and u can't hide that type of talkent. You r a phenominal writer, luv it!! Awesome update, thnx for udpating, was in lala land for a loooooooooong time. Welllll my goodness ... what do I say to all that? ::::blushing::::: Shukriya meri pyaari choti behen! Bahut, bahut, bahut shukriya!!!!!!! 😳

And now taht dulhaan is over, these ff and ss are our only hope for chemistry, thnks for writing and revoking all those memories, even though the scenes didn't occur(they totally shoulda though)

I'm thrilled that you feel that way about EOL! 😊😊😊 As for "scenes didn't occur" - well, I really don't want to "re-hash" the show. Just kinda put my own choti "spin & stamp" on it. 😊😉😊

have a good night, sweet dreams!! luv ya!! thanks again for the *i become speechless after reading it update!

wonderful update, please do update fast!! It was great, can't wait to see what happens next.

Thank you Yashika! 😊😳😊

I have to update "M" (other SS). Then I will most likely come back to EOL <==> as it will probably be coming to the end soon.

GG you know I read your update really really slowly and then I pictured every scene and I took my time reading it... and it really makes me want more! When is your next update?

I just hate that stupid Chacha for hurting Vidya, but atleast Sagar has feelings for Vidya....

GG! What a short story, why didn't I know there were so many parts? (I know! It was supposed to be a long one page SS - as you can see that got thrown by the wayside pretty fast! 😆😳😆) I would sat down with some popcorn! But all is well bcz like you other fictions I loved this. After about an hour of reading I am finally able to critique it all (I get distracted easily).

At first just reading the title I thought oh this is will be super romantic! So I can't wait for that to settle in the future. Lets start with the characters;

Sagar, idk if he like this in the show or just in you story, but it seems as if he doesn't much care for her.

Partly the show, mostly my story. At the moment, he is more confused than anything. He just doesn't care for his Papa deciding he needs to get married and choosing his "Dulhann" for him. His feelings for Vidya are there. They are just subtle and buried under his anger. 😊

It kinda hurt me too imagine poor Vidya.

I know ... in the show and my story it seems she must suffer for love. 😔

Why are the uncle and aunt so mean? Poor girl!

There's usually a "villain" - they are mine! 😉

Great job with the description! I loved the cute little moment they shared and I hope to read more of them soon!

You know me ............ 😆

Great update overall like always! I was up all night last night and I was right aobut to head to bed, and thought reading your story might be a good bedtime story! Well, lets just say that it was great, but now I am wide awake. You are going to have me dream of SV! Ahhhh! LOL But amazing yaar, truly enjoyed it!

Thanks so much Dhruvi!! 😳😳😳 Really appreciated your taking the time to read EOL and comment! 😊😊😊

GG you know I read your update really really slowly and then I pictured every scene and I took my time reading it... and it really makes me want more! When is your next update? L😆L ... give a minute to catch my breath Bhumi! 😉 Besides, I don't know if you really want to rush it - EOL will be coming to an end soon. It was only meant to be a long one page SS. So it won't continue for much longer.

I just hate that stupid Chacha for hurting Vidya,

I know ... bad people often do hurtful hateful things ... but w/out giving too much away ... Chacha will get his comeuppance! 😉

but atleast Sagar has feelings for Vidya....

Finally - someone sees that! I was beginning to think I was being way way too subtle! 😆

He better not somehow say no because if he does I'm going to go where he lives and knock some sense into that boy. 🤣

I really love the way that you describe Sagar, I was actually lost in his eyes!

Awwww .. tanks Bhumi! But, then I think that jes happens naturally whenever you think about his eyes ... yaar? 😊

I just love SV's jodi! Yep, it is special! 😊

Sagar is soo possessive of her, yet he still is having doubts about marrying her.

He is still angry at his Papa for taking the decision away for him, and for choosing his "Dulhann" for him. Hopefully, he'll figure out how smart his Papa really is! 😉

I just hate that he's using her, he seems to care more about her body.

I don't think it's so much that Bhumi. As Sagar is a bit overwhelmed that he loses control so easily with Vidya. No other woman has been able to get to him like that - and she doesn't even have to try and he can't help but reach for her.

Partap needs to get himself together and realize that he loves her and he should marry her for the person inside.

L😆L ... well, he maybe a bit slow on the up take, but I don't think our Sagar will stay confused for too much longer. 😉

I think it's better that Vidya goes to Delhi , she can atleast find a way to survive there whether Sagar marries her or not, but with her chacha and chachi she will have more torture!

Good point ... and "pick up" Sonali! 😉