FF:Pyaar Ka Ehsaas Upd. Part 10 Page 23- June 23rd - Page 7

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Posted: 16 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: fire_woman

Bhumika! What a fun and interesting FF! 👍🏼

I jes love that Divya is so different than we usually expect. First she is totally besharam - "Amar starts to put on his clothes and Divya watches him. Oh lala! Then she is pagal and 5 - "shave before you kiss me" - so naughty and cute in another way. 😉
Credit to Amar - very mature and so sweet. Made his promise to Divya and is keeping it - no matter what happens because Divya is his love. 😊
I hope you keep Divya pagal for a bit. I want to see her being naughty and making Amar crazy with love and laughter. <grin>
Really loved it Bhumika! Can't wait for the next update - when you can of course. Thanks! 😊

{{PS I decided I would read just the first update only, as sort of a break from my writing an update for GC. But I got so caught up in your FF, that I just couldn't stop and had to read all the updates! 😆 }}
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: fire_woman

{{PS I decided I would read just the first update only, as sort of a break from my writing an update for GC. But I got so caught up in your FF, that I just couldn't stop and had to read all the updates! 😆 }} Aww!! That's really sweet!!!!! Thank You!!!! 🤗

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Awww Amar is cho chweet, fulfilling his promises !
And Divya .. hehe, no need to say anything about her, i think everything is out and clear.

Very nice job aloo jee, i love how the characters are in this ff and i luv the story too !

Hehe shave before u kiss me 😆

Terrific job !

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Bhumika...you started a FF!!! Jeez...I'm late...anyway...just read all your updates....please update sooooonnn!!!!!!!!!!!!
Haii...Divya is sooooo different....first of all..she's all besharam....and now...she's turned into a kid...awww...sweet...and Amar...uff...don't even get me started on him...I could go on all day..hehee...continue soon!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: theflyingdonkey

Awww Amar is cho chweet, fulfilling his promises !
And Divya .. hehe, no need to say anything about her, i think everything is out and clear.

Very nice job aloo jee, i love how the characters are in this ff and i luv the story too !

Hehe shave before u kiss me 😆

Terrific job !

Thank You Meri Pyaari si Gina!!!! Love you!!

Originally posted by: Suha_18

Bhumika...you started a FF!!! Jeez...I'm late...anyway...just read all your updates....please update sooooonnn!!!!!!!!!!!!

Haii...Divya is sooooo different....first of all..she's all besharam....and now...she's turned into a kid...awww...sweet...and Amar...uff...don't even get me started on him...I could go on all day..hehee...continue soon!!

Thank You Suhana!! Yup I started an FF, your not that late, it's only been like 2 weeks.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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LOved the part please update soon!!
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LOved the part please update soon!!

Thank You!! I'm about to post the update in like 2 hours.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Jaldi karo......i wanna go to bed but i wanna read it too...please hurry.........am sleepy.............
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 5:

Amar just lays there and stares at Divya's face and he thinks, "OMG she just looks so peaceful and so innocent. It's so weird how just one moment can change your life completely, one minute Divya and I are like any normal couple and we're about to get married and the next minute, I feel a bit helpless." Divya starts to open her eyes, and she just looks in Amar's eyes, Divya finally says, "Amar why do your eyes looks so sad." Amar says, "What do you mean Divya?" Divya says, "You're smiling from your mouth but your eyes aren't smiling." Amar says, "Divya I'm not sad, look I'm not crying and I'm smiling." Divya says, "Stupid, you don't have to have tears in your to be crying, I can tell your crying on the inside. I'm hungry Amar, can you please make me something to eat?" Amar says, "Let's go out to eat today." Divya says, "OK, I want some pani puri, or maybe some chinese food, or maybe a burger, or we could eat a dosa or maybe curry chawal. I think pani puri is the best though. Amar if I ask you something you won't get angry at me will you, because I don't want you to get angry at me, I don't like to make people angry." Amar says, "What did you want to say? I won't get angry I promise." Divya says, "When will you shave, just wondering." Amar says, "OK I will shave before we go to eat. You can hold your hunger till then right?" Divya says, "OK and I'll watch some TV, I haven't watched my cartoons in a long time." Amar goes to shave and Divya goes to watch cartoons on TV, but she accidently turns the TV to a scary movie. She is really mesmerized by the scary movie so she doesn't change the channel and she keeps watching but she's really scared, Amar comes in the room right at the scariest scene and he taps her on the shoulder to tell her that it's time to go, but Divya gets scared and she screams in Amar's face, and then she realizes that it is Amar and she goes and hugs him. Divya says, "Amar, I'm scared," Amar starts to pet Divya's head and says, "Divya there's nothing to be scared about it's only a movie." Divya says, "But what if the monsters come and get me?" Amar says, "I'm here with you to protect you and I won't let anyone hurt you, now come on and we can go get something to eat." Divya says, "Thank You Amar, I feel safer knowing that you'll be with me. Oh oops I'm not suppose to say Thank You because dosti main no sorry no Thank You. Is it OK if I hold your hand, it'll make me feel safer." Amar nods his head yes, and Divya holds onto his hand, really tight and says, "Well since I can't say thank you, I can still show you, that I want to say Thank You..." Divya kisses Amar on the cheek. Amar smiles. Amar opens up Divya's side of the car and Divya sits inside the car and Amar closes her side of the car and he goes to his side and sits, Amar and Divya drive to the Pani Puri place, and Amar gives Divya a bowl but Divya doesn't take, Amar says, "Divya why don't you want to take the bowl, I thought you wanted Pani Puri?' Divya says, "Of course I do but I thought that you would feed me? Like with the icecream, because the icecream tasted sweeter when you fed it to me." Amar says, "OK I will feed you, but this time try not to bite me." Divya says, "I think I probably might acidentally bite you, so let's have a Gol Guppa eating contest instead. What will the winner get?" Amar says, 'I don't know. How about the loser has to kiss the winner." Divya says, "I will win and you will have to kiss me." They start the contest and the whole time Amar is staring at Divya and there is water rolling down the side of her mouth, and she is smiling while eating. Amar thinks, "Aww she looks so sweet, she's just like a little kid. Is it bad that I'm tricking her into getting a kiss??" Divya says, "Amar I'm winning!! You've only eaten 10 and I've eaten 20. There is no way you can win, you will have to kiss me!" Amar says, "OK I lost I can't eat anymore, it's too spicy for me. I guess I will have to kiss you." Divya closes her eyes and she puts her cheek forward for Amar to kiss her, Amar kisses her and Divya opens her eyes and kisses him back. Divya says, "I didn't want you to be sad for losing so I thought if I kissed you then you wouldn't feel sad. Amar I'm still hungry. I don't want any of this food, can you go home and cook me something." Amar says, " You might not know this, but I'm a good cook so we can go home and chef Amar will make whatever you want to eat." Amar pays the gol guppa guy, and he takes Divya's hand and he opens the car door for her and Divya sits inside, and Amar closes her door and Amar goes and sits on his side. Divya asks, "Amar why do you always open my door and then wait for me to sit inside and then you sit down? I'm a big girl I can open my own door. I think you are way too sweet, you need to be a little more not sweet like me, I'm not sweet and people love me. Like you love me." Amar says, "I know you're a big girl but I like opening the door for you. Did you just say you're not sweet, you're the sweetest girl ever! I love you a lot." Divya says, "I know, who doesn't love me? I love you too Amar" Divya starts to look around in Amar's car and she sees a box on the floor, it's the ring that Amar got for Divya it fell out of his pocket, the day Divya went to the hospital. Divya sees a note inside she reads it it says, "Divya will you marry me? From, Amar" Divya says, "Yes I will, because in movies I've seen when a guy and a girl say I Love You, then they marry eachother, so I'll marry you." Amar sees that Divya has the ring in her hand and he thinks, "Shambhunath Ji thank you, I really wanted to marry Divya and I'm so happy that you made her find the ring." Amar stops the car and he takes the ring and he puts it on Divya's finger and he hugs her. Divya says, "Amar what do married people do?" Amar starts the car, and says, "Well married people promise to stay together forever, and give eachother love. Like you're mom and dad are married, and they give eachother love." Divya says, "I can do that, I like being with you and I love you because you always take me places and you always make me smile. So, when will we get married, it can't be tommorow because tommorow, my favorite show is on TV and I don't want to miss it." Amar says, "Divya we could get married the day after tommorow, you know what that is right??" Divya says, "That would be.......is it.....my Birthday??" Amar says, "Yes, so we could get married on your birthday. You're mom and dad won't be home, but we can have a small marriage and when they come home we can have a big marriage." Divya says, "Amar you will be my hubby and I will be your wifey! I can cook for you too, I know how to make Maggi, and I can make your morning tea, and then you can make the afternoon tea. This is going to be fun!"
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Guys is it possible to have an FF without a villian or without a problem? I don't want to stop AD cuteness, but I will have to add some kind of problem in their life.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow Bhumi........i really really loved it......i really thoroughly enjoyed it.....AD r sooooooooooooo sooooooooooooo cute couple.......so finally thye r getting married on the same day which was decided before....i really love the kissing part....n i also love Divya's sweet n innocent questions n the way Amar answered them......i m really impressed the way Amar described what marriage s......oh gosh m still in that atmosphere u made Bhumi....u r awesome.....u r fantastic........u r mindblowing......
keep up this good work......

oh yes darling i dnt mind if there s no vilian or no vamp............i really love this concept w/o any negetivity...me too wanna enjoy only AD's cuteness....dear u dnt have to add more spicy masala...coz AD's sweet cute romance aready made it soo much spicy........

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