FF:Pyaar Ka Ehsaas Upd. Part 10 Page 23- June 23rd

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Amar Pratap Singh: 24 years old he lives in Banaras with his mom and dad. He just finished college and now he is working in his father's company. He's rich so he can get whatever he wants, but he's not a spoiled brat he likes everything to be simple. When Amar was young his dad promised one of his friends from college who is also rich, that on his daughter, Divya's, 24th birthday Amar and Divya will get married. Amar has only seen pictures of Divya and talked to her on the phone once and he has already fallen in love with her.


Divya Kapoor: 23 years old, she lives in Delhi. She always listens to her parents, because she loves them. Divya's dad promised Amar's dad that Amar and Divya would get married when they got older. Divya agreed to getting married to Amar and she thinks he is super hot, so she has no reason to be against the marriage.


Rajendra Singh: Amar's dad

Indrajit Kapoor: Divya's dad

Uma Singh: Amar's Mom

Vasundra Kapoor: Divya's Mom

Index:

Part 1: Page 1
Part 2: Page 4
Part 3: Page 5
Part 4: Page 7
Part 5: Page 10
Part 6: Page 12
Part 7: Page 14
Part 8: Page 17
Part 9: Page 20
Part 10: Page 23

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Part 1:
Divya's Thoughts: Next week's my birthday and I am really happy, not only because I'm going to be a year older, but also because turning 24 means that I'm going to get married to Amar ji. It's weird I haven't even met Amar ji I've only seen a picture of him, but I've already fallen in love with him, he has the most beautiful eyes ever and the most beautiful hair ever and everything about him is just perfect. I've talked to him on the phone before and to me his voice sounds like an angel's voice, OMG he's just so perfect. I finally get to meet Amar ji tommorow morning and I know it will be amazing. I can't fall asleep, I'm way too excited. I think me and Amar are meant to be together.
Amar's Thoughts: Tommorow is going to be the day that I meet Divya ji I hope she likes me, because I really like her. I think that it's really sweet of her to marry me because girls these days are so much different then they were before in my parent's time. I thought Divya ji would have a boyfriend by now, well I'm glad that she doesn't. I can't think of anything besides Divya, yesterday I was suppose to be doing a project for the company but I couldn't focus, I had written Divya ji's name a hundred times on a piece of paper. I even wrote a poem, which is weird because I never write poems, the poem went something like this:
We've never met eachother but it feels like I know everything about you
I hope you feel the same way about me too
I can tell so much about you just by looking into your beautiful eyes
I just hope that your eyes aren't telling me lies
You and I are going to share a life
I will be your husband and you will be my wife
Well those are the only 6 lines I can remember right now and they're pretty stupid, I'm obssessed with Divya and I haven't even met her, she's probably sleeping peacefully right now and all I can do is think about her.
Divya's Thoughts: What will Amar ji be thinking about right now, probably not me. What if he's only marrying me because his parents want him to and he doesn't love me. On the phone he didn't sound very interested in me, I was afraid to say much because I didn't want to sound like an idiot infront of him. Whenever I like someone I start to talk a lot, and I don't really listen to what I'm saying and I end up saying the wrong things, so I didn't want Amar ji to think that I was stupid even before we met. I was thinking, after we're married my name will be Divya Singh, that sounds really pretty, Mrs. Divya Singh that sounds better, Mrs. Divya Amar Pratap Singh, I love it! My name connected with Amar's name sounds so amazing, I hope our jodi is amazing too.
Amar's Thoughts: When will it be morning, right now it's only 11:30 PM, there is still 11 hours to meet Divya ji. Time goes so slow. What if Divya ji's only marrying me because her parents told her to, she seriously didn't sound very interested on the phone, she was being so reserved, from her picture she looks like she is the type of person that would talk on and on for hours non-stop. The reason I didn't talk much was because I didn't know if she was interested in me so I didn't want her to think I was a fool for telling her how much I love her. This love is so complicated. I really want to call her, but she'll be asleep by now. Well I'm about to be her husband so doesn't that give me a right to call her, and if she is sleeping then I will say that I acidentally dialed her number. If she does pick up then I will tell her that I love her, and ask her if she loves me back, and tell her she doesn't have to marry me if she doesn't want to, because I don't want to force her into being with me if she doesn't love me.
(Amar picks up his phone and he starts to Dial Divya's number.)
Divya's Thoughts: I think that I should call Amar ji, I really hope he's not sleeping, I want to ask him if he loves me too. If he doesn't love me then I don't want him to marry me, I don't want him to miserable, I love him so I want him to be happy.
(Divya picks up her home phone to call Amar, and right as she is about call Amar, her cell phone starts to ring.)
Divya's Thoughts: Who could it be this late at night. God people are so irratating, I'm trying to call my husband-to-be and someone else calls. This isn't even the right time to call someone it's 11:30 at night.
(Divya looks at the number and sees It's Amar's number and she starts to smile. She picks up the phone.)
Divya: Hello
Amar: Hi, I'm so sorry if I woke you up, but I have to talk to you.
Divya: You aren't going to believe this, but I was just about to call you too.
Amar: This may sound weird but I was thinking about you all night, and even without meeting you I have started to love you. It just feels like I know everything that I need to know about you. Last time I talked to you on the phone it just seemed like you weren't interested in me and I don't want you to marry me if you don't want to. I want you to stay happy with me, I could never force you into marrying me.
Divya: Amar ji I was thinking about you too. I was about to call you and tell you the same thing. The last time that we talked on the phone I didn't want to say anything stupid, I really like you too and when I like people I start to say stupid things to them. Then I can't stop talking. I was afraid that if I kept talking I would say something stupid and then you would think I was stupid and then you wouldn't want to marry me.
Amar: Don't worry Divya ji you can talk as much as you want, or say the stupidest things you want to say, I won't love you any less, and of course I will marry you. I Love You A lot! I will always continue to love you no matter what happens.
Divya: Talking to you is so easy, and even though I like you a lot it's not hard to talk to you. Amar ji I can't go to sleep I am really excited to meet you for real, and I want to keep talking to you all night long.
Amar: I want to talk to you too Divya Ji. Why don't we keep talking all night long? No one's stopping us and we are about to be husband and wife so we have the right to talk to eachother.
Divya: Amar ji, I have a request for you, please just call me Divya not Divya ji, I think we know eachother enough to not have to be formal anymore.
Amar: I will start calling you Divya if you start calling me Amar not Amar Ji.
Divya: I think that Amar ji sounds so sexy, you know you're really sexy, that's one of the things that I love about you. If you're that sexy in the picture of you then you must be way more sexy in person. Oops you see what I mean, I start to say thing I'm not suppose to say infront of people I love, but you are really sexy.
Amar: Awww...Divya that's really sweet of you to say, I don't think it's stupid at all. Amar ji does sound pretty sexy.
Divya: I was so stupid to think that the only reason you were marrying me was because you had to. I feel really comfortable talking to you. I never thought I could love a guy as much as I love you, and we haven't even met before. I really love your voice it's so masculine and husky.
Amar: I really love your voice too you sound so feminine and so angelic. Divya your my beautiful angel!
Divya: Thank You Amar ji! Amar ji I think we should go to sleep now, it's really late now and the faster we fall asleep the faster morning will come and the faster we can be together for real.
Amar: Ok Divya. Bye. Love you Lots! Can't wait to see you!
Divya: Bye Amar ji, I love you too! I can't wait until we see eachother!
(Divya hugs her phone and she picks up the picture of Amar and kisses it. Amar hugs his phone and he kisses the picture of Divya)
Divya's thoughts: Shiv Ji you really have sent Amar ji just for me, I personally think we have great chemistry. I don't believe it though, I am just so comfortable talking with Amar ji, we meet tommorow and then one more week until our wedding, and then I can officially call myself Mrs. Divya Amar Pratap Singh. I can't believe I called Amar ji sexy he is super sexy, but I still haven't met him.
Amar's thoughts: Wow the girl I love, actually loves me back I am so happy. Talking to Divya made my whole day a thousand times better, hearing her voice just makes me smile. I think I'm the luckiest guy alive to get to marry such a beautiful and sweet girl.
(Amar and Divya fall asleep) (Divya wakes up at 8:00 because she has to catch the flight to Banaras, and the flight from Delhi to Banaras is about 1 hour and she takes about 2 hours to get ready, so she can get to banaras by 11:30.)
Divya thinks out loud: Should I put on a lot of makeup so that I look pretty and make a good impression on Amar ji the first time I see him. I think I shouldn't wear any make-up Amar ji is a simple guy and I think he would like it better if I didn't wear make-up.
Vasundra: Divya you look beautiful. I am so glad that you are marrying Amar, that's what me and your father have wanted. Amar is a very nice boy, and he will keep you very happy.
(Indrajit(Divya's dad) comes in)
Divya: I am very happy to be marrying Amar ji, and of course Papa, Amar ji was your choice and my Papa's choice is always the best.
(Divya hugs Indrajit)
Indrajit: I know you two will always stay happy together. I want the best for you Divya and Amar is the best husband a girl could ask for. Wow your calling him Amar ji you've never called anyone else ji before.
Divya: Well he's about to be my husband and of course I have to show him atleast some respect. Papa I'm ready, let's go or we'll miss the plane.
Indrajit: Divya we still have about half an hour more left you don't have to rush, we won't miss the plane. I'm so happy that I am going to see Rajendra after such a long time, and in one week you will be married, and you will leave us, but I won't be worried because I know that Rajendra will treat you like you're his own daughter and give you as much love as we give you.
Edited by *xoxo* - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Amazing start meri pyaari si aloo !
I love the story, concept and the characters ..
Haiii Amar ji is sexy 😆 Divya ji is a bit besharam 😆 Great match ! 😉

Can't wait to read the next part !
Continue soon, very soon.
Great job 👍🏼
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Awesomee start.. Loved the first part.. :D .. pleaseeee contt very soooon..
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Great ff. Loved it alot and
also loved the charcters update asap!!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Nice..Divya Ji is indeed naughty......hehehehe......u want a name..for this FF..
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Originally posted by: theflyingdonkey

Amazing start meri pyaari si aloo !
I love the story, concept and the characters ..
Haiii Amar ji is sexy Divya ji is a bit besharam Great match !

Can't wait to read the next part !
Continue soon, very soon.
Great job

Thank You Meri Pyaari❤️ Si Gina!!!!
I will update soon!

Originally posted by: Saniiii

Awesomee start.. Loved the first part.. :D .. pleaseeee contt very soooon..

Thank You!!!😊

Originally posted by: kookie_29

Great ff. Loved it alot and
also loved the charcters update asap!!

Thank You!!! ❤️

Originally posted by: Manusha_LuvSD

Nice..Divya Ji is indeed naughty......hehehehe......u want a name..for this FF..

Thank You! Don't you just wish the real Divya would be more besharam.
Yea, need to think of a title, do you have any ideas??
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Posted: 16 years ago
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How about Pyaar Ki Ehsaas....i dont know if they spelling is right cause i dony know hindi..but i think it mean the feeling of love or something like that...
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Originally posted by: Manusha_LuvSD

How about Pyaar Ki Ehsaas....i dont know if they spelling is right cause i dony know hindi..but i think it mean the feeling of love or something like that...


wow MaNU PERFECT TITLE FOR THIS STORY..............OHHH NOW U CNT CLAIM THAT U DNT KNOW hINDI.....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Bhumi.............its awesome...........plz update soon........
well Manusha suggested the perfect title for it............
n Amar ji sounds really very Sexy...............n our Divya ji well she s so naughty n Besharam man................but i wont blame her her Amar ji s really very sexy............but she s not less from anyone......n yeah Amar ji s absolutely r8.her voice s sooooo Angelatic.n m sure when they both see eachother their love will increase.............
hahaha....for now i can say one line for themmmmmmmmmm..........
Bin Dekhe hai aisi bechaini tauba....
hai Rabba Dekha to Jane kya hoga...

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