FF:Pyaar Ka Ehsaas Upd. Part 10 Page 23- June 23rd - Page 4

Originally posted by: svforever

Mindblowing update! Seriously! Haiiiiii......I can totally imagine Amar without a shirt......ahhhhhh.....now I'm losing myself in his eyes.....*snaps out of it* Okay, I'm back. sorry about that. But really, that was awesome. Amar and Divya rule man. Please update again. Please please please please pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeee! Bye! Luv ya!

Thank You Radika!! I agree, Amar without a shirt on would be amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ❤️ Him with a shirt on is hot but without would be even hotter!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by: kirancanada1

thanks for the part
muwaaa
i read it before but i couldn't comment
great uppy
continue soon
i have a gun!!!!!! (well not really but i have a playdough gun)
good enough
add a lot of besharm ness
love it
would also love it if divya actually dried him (my besharm side)
update soon
how about friday!!!!

Thank You Kiran!!!!❤️

You would never hurt me, because if you did you wouldn't get any updates. And you wouldn't want to hurt your sweet sister would you??

Well I wanted Divya to be a bit innocent too much besharmi isn't always good.

I'll update on Saturday

Originally posted by: Vidyaa

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Wonderful update Bhumika !

Fantastically written !👏👏

OMG , they both have no manners at all.....😆

Especially Divya....😲😆😆 Kuchh bhi bol deti hai...moo-phat hai.......😛😛😛

Cute update !

Wonderful !👏

Fantastic !!!👏

Great Job Done !⭐️

Thanks for updating !

Vidya😊

Thank You Vidya!!!!! If they both had manners they wouldn't be as besharam, and you can't say they don't have any manners or Divya would be drying Amar off by now(which would be totally sexy!!)!!!

Originally posted by: titly

hey Bhumi its a wonderful update......really its brilliant.......👏👏..u r an awesome writer dear...👍🏼
uff......Bhumi u r making me also Besharam............
Haila how much sexy he s luking without a shirt........😍😍😍...water droping from his Body........uffff........haila.....i lost in the besharam world...........Oh yeh Divya kya Ladki hai..................jo maanme hota hai bol deti hai.............but this s a very gud sign...

Thank You Titly!!!!!! I have the besharam effect on people, but I can be way more besharam, atleast Amar had a towel around his waist!

Originally posted by: theflyingdonkey

Hihihihihihi .. Gina is going .. bananas .. hihihihihi


OMG ... hihihihih

Great job bhumika dear !

Thank You Gina!!! OMG I love Bananas they are my favorite fruit!!

Originally posted by: Saniiii

Awesomeee update.. loved it very much... pleaseeee contt soooooonnn...

Thank You Laila!!!❤️

Originally posted by: Manusha_LuvSD

Hai hai..i can imagine how Divya felt when she saw that heavenly man infornt of her and that too with jus his towel on and wet hair..OMG i would have faint....really kya ladki hai...she is amazing...and sooooooo naughty...please get them marry fast.............ASAP.......

Manusha, don't you just wish Divyanka was like that and she spoke what was on her mind, then we would know about her and Sharad instantly! I don't think I would faint I would just keep staring and then when he put his clothes back on I would faint.

Originally posted by: sv_4eva

Mindblowing Update, Bumika!!!Fantastic work and keep it up!!!👏

Thank You Farhana!!!!!!😊

I know....heheheheh!😳😳

Part 3:

Amar kisses Divya on the neck and Divya bites her lip and closes her eyes. Divya says, "Amar ji you're right it's love at first site. I'm really glad that I get to share the rest of my life with you. Nothing can ever make my love for you decrease, my love for you will only increase." Amar says, "I agree with you Divya, no matter what happens I will love you unconditionally." They have an intense eye-lock, and they move closer... and closer... and closer, and then they go in for a kiss, but before their lips touch they hear a knock at the door and both of them snap out of the eye-lock, and they act like nothing happend, because they don't want their family to know they were acting a bit besharam before the wedding. So Divya goes and sits on the bed, and Amar goes to open the door, at the door is Uma and she asks Amar, "Beta how long will you take to come downstairs, Divya's parents are waiting to meet their future son-in-law." Amar says, "Mom, just one more minute Divya and I were just talking a bit, we'll be down in one minute." Uma says, "OK beta, don't take too long." Uma leaves. Divya looks into Amar's eyes once again and she says, "I guess out kiss will have to wait Amar ji." Amar says, "Why can't we just kiss now? I mean it's the perfect mood, perfect setting and no one is around, so everything is just perfect." Amar goes in for the kiss, Divya giggles and then she runs away, and goes downstairs. Amar goes over to the picture of Divya and he says, "You are prettier, and sweeter in person, I love you!" Amar kisses the picture and he goes downstairs too, and he goes and touches, Indrajit and Vasundra's feet, for blessing. Indrajit says, "Jeete Raho... You look just like your dad when he was young. Amar Beta I am very glad that you have agreed to marrying Divya, I know you will keep her happy, and there is no one in this world I would trust more with my daughter than you. I think you are going to be a fantastic husband. Even Divya loves you a lot." Amar says, "Thank You Ji, I promise that I will always keep your daughter happy! I will be the best husband ever. Ji, I would like you get your premission to take Divya shopping, I went shopping for her before but I couldn't so I would like to take her with me" Indrajit says, "Sure Amar Beta how can I say no you are her husband and this is really good way for both of you to get to know eachother better. Go have fun enjoy! Everyone else agrees that they should go right?" Rajendra says, "Of course they should go this is the perfect way for both of them to get to be alone." Amar says, "Thank You so much! Divya come on." Amar takes his car keys out of his pocket and Divya comes next to Amar and Amar holds onto Divya's hand and they leave. Vasundra says, "Aww...That is so cute they are both holding hands. They make such a cute couple." Amar and Divya here this and they both blush a little. They get to the car and Amar goes over to Divya's side and opens the door for her and he makes sure that she is sitting comfotably and he closes her door, then he goes to his side of the car and he sits down. Divya says, "So Amar ji where are we going to go today?" Amar says, "Wherever you want to go. What do you want to buy. I will get you anything your heart desires." Divya says, "The only thing my heart desires is you, and I already have you. What more could I want? I actually do want one thing..." Amar says, "You're wish is my comand" Divya says, "Can we please go to the temple, I really want to pray to Shiv Ji and say Thank You for giving me such a sweet man like you." Amar says, "Of course Divya." Amar thinks, "Right across from the temple is a jewelry store while Divya is praying I can go to the jewelry store and get her an engagement ring and propose to her infront of Shiv Ji, I can get on one knee and everything." Divya says, "Thank You Amar ji." Amar says, "Divya what are you saying. You don't need to thank me, there is no Sorry or Thank You in Love." Divya says, "You're so filmy Amar ji. Well I think no Sorry at all in love, but you can say Thank You at times where it is neccessary. Like it was neccessary when I said it." Amar stops the car, because they are at the temple and he says to Divya, "Divya you should go pray to Shiv Ji and I will join you in a minute. I just remembered I hade to do something," Divya says, "OK ji come back soon I'll be waiting." Amar goes to the jewelry store and Divya goes to the temple. Amar says to the jewelry shop owner, "Bring me the best engagement ring you have, I will pay any price for it just please get it fast." The owner of the shop brings out the most beautiful diamond engagement ring ever and he tells Amar the price and Amar writes him a check. Amar take the ring and he puts it in his back pocket, he walks outside and he sees a crowd of people gathered in one spot, he walks over and he hears many people sayings, "OMG she got hit by a car someone call the police." Amar walks closer to the person that got hit by the car and he sees that it is Divya that got hit by the car. Amar pushes everyone aside and he goes to her and puts her head in his lap and holds onto her hand and he has tears coming out of his eyes. Amar says, "Divya you're allright. Nothing will happen to you. You will be Ok. Divya please get up...please...please....I need you, you have to survive." An ambulance comes and takes Divya to the hospital. Amar takes his car over to the hospital and on the way Amar tells his father what happend to Divya, and he tells them the hospital they have to come to. Amar finally makes it to the hospital he asks the receptionist where his Divya is, she points to the room and Amar goes and looks in the window of that room, he sees Divya just lying there not moving, she still had a slight smile on her face because she was always smiling. She looked really peaceful, one of the doctors comes out and says, "Mr. Amar. You're wife is alive, but right now she is unconcious, and we don't know how long it will take her to gain her conciousness." Amar starts to cry harder and his tears are dripping, off his face. The rest of the family comes and Vasundra comes over to Amar and she gives him a hug and says, "Amar don't worry Divya will be Okay. You don't have to cry." Amar says, "This is all my fault, I wanted to surprise Divya by getting her an engagement ring so I left her in the temple alone. I didn't know this would happen though." Indrajit says, "Amar no one is blaming you. Take deep breaths nothing will happen to Divya." The family stays there to comfort Amar, and Amar doesn't say a word all he does is think about Divya. The doctor says that it is time to go home if they want, but Amar says that he will stay because he can't leave Divya's side. Amar says, "I didn't even completely get to know her but it feels like I know everything about her. I can't leave her side." A week passes but Divya still doesn't get better and in that time Amar hasn't even shaved his beard, but on the 4th day Divya starts to move and she opens her eyes for the first time. Amar calls Divya's mom and Divya's dad, to tell them that Divya has started to move and then they come to the hospital. The doctor comes out and says, "You can all see her now she has gained conciousness and she is asking for her mommy and daddy." Amar goes into the hospital room and he kisses Divya on the cheek, Divya lets out a small scream. Amar says, "Divya, what is wrong why did you scream?" Divya says, "Who are you, I want my mommy and my daddy, and don't kiss me you haven't shaved in forever and your stubble is hurting me." Vasundra says, "Divya Beta, this is Amar your husband don't you remember him." Divya says, "I don't remember him, but I'm too young to have a husband. My head hurts, can we go get some chocolate and icecream." The doctor asks Amar to come outside because she has to tell him something. Amar goes into the hallway and the doctor says, "Divya is 24 years old but her brain tells her that she is 5 that accident caused Divya to become pagal. You have to take good care of her and if you give her the medications that I prescribed then it is possible that she can return to normal." Amar is shocked and he is crying.

Originally posted by: Manusha_LuvSD

Woooo..what a twist man....this is gonna be like the SV days now....love the update......please continue soon.

Thank You Manusha!! I'm going to try to make it just as cute as SV days.

Originally posted by: titly

nooooooo Bhumi...achcha khasa romance chal raha tha..but u ruined everything....but still it will go the way SV days....so i like it..................continue soon.......

I'm sorry for ruining it, I can make her get better ASAP but i really wanted to see Pagal Divya. I will try to make it as cute as possible.