FF SV Ishq-E-Dil Part16/Pg29 September 1 - Page 20

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Posted: 16 years ago
im in love..........................with this FF!!!!
virmaan-virika thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
is amrit the guy from sabki laadli bebo?!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: theflyingdonkey

Awww you updated !!! And that too on my birthday heheheh .. Sooo sweet of u gullbadan jee ..

Uffff yeh Neira bhi nah .. Just want to punch her .. And Sagar , grrrr .. Feel bad for Vidya. But uh oh another trouble coming ahead: Amrit .. oh well i hope sagar gets to his senses.

Really good & exiting update gullbadan jee .. update soon !!
luv ya....

i didn't noticE😆

amrit is not bad!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! he's my hottie😉 (jks)

thank you i'll continue soon!

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: bmtd_ks

im in love..........................with this FF!!!!

thanks so much, although this ff is not that gud!😃

Originally posted by: bmtd_ks

is amrit the guy from sabki laadli bebo?!

nope, you'll find out who he is in the next update😉

but i got the name from my friend😉

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Posted: 16 years ago
HII KIRAN
I FEEL BAD 4 VIDYA
HATE NEIRA..HATE NEIRA HATE NEIRA...!!
AND SAGAR.....?...RASCAL!!...
AND NOW WHO IS THIS AMRIT?
I HOPE HE IS NOT A NEW VILLAIN OR WHATEVER!!
OK...NICE PART!!
CONTINUE WHEN U WANT!!
SEE YAA
LOVE UUU!!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: _Monu_

HII KIRAN

I FEEL BAD 4 VIDYA
HATE NEIRA..HATE NEIRA HATE NEIRA...!!
AND SAGAR.....?...RASCAL!!...
AND NOW WHO IS THIS AMRIT?
I HOPE HE IS NOT A NEW VILLAIN OR WHATEVER!!
OK...NICE PART!!
CONTINUE WHEN U WANT!!
SEE YAA
LOVE UUU!!

omg everyone thinks the same

and are pissed off at amrit for some reason😕

but he is a good friend, and not a bad character!

thanks

will continue soon!

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Posted: 16 years ago
Ishq-E-Dil
(Part 15)
Vidya gasps, as the man looks like Sagar
Vidya: Sagar??? Why are you here???
Amrit: I'm not Sagar, I'm Amrit
Vidya: I don't believe you
Amrit: I'm here to help you, not to prove you something, but here is my license
Amrit hands it to her and Vidya looks at it closely
Vidya: I can't believe it
Amrit: You have no choice
Vidya: Yeah'
Kamya: We better get going
Vidya: Ok, bye Amrit
Amrit: Ok, but if you guys need any help please come to my house *write something on a piece of paper* Here is my address, by the way what is your name?
Vidya: Vidya, and she is Kamya *pointing to Kamya*
Amrit: Ok
Vidya: Bye!
Amrit: Bye'
They leave and start looking for a place to stay
The first thing Kamya notices after entering a hotel, that her money is gone
Kamya: Omg Vidya, I think my wallet fell down at Neira's house
Vidya: Then we will have to go all the way back to get it
Kamya: We need to go back, or we can stay at Amrit's
Vidya: I don't think we should trust that guy
Kamya: It's okay, there is something about him that says he is a good guy
Vidya: Okay, but first let's get your wallet
The two start walking, and by the time they get to the house, its 3 am! Kamya uses the key to get into the house again
Vidya: Do you think they are still doing their thing
Kamya: Maybe, but if they are, I really don't want to go in there
Vidya picks up a strange piece of leather
Vidya: Is this your wallet?
Kamya: Yup! Thanks
Kamya opens the wallet to check if everything is there, and finds a little piece of paper in there, she hides it from Vidya
Once they get checked into a room, Kamya goes into a washroom and reads the note
Message: Kamya, Please convince Vidya, this is all a mistake, text me and I'll tell you everything (416)-365-7938
Kamya writes back: What do you want to say???
Kamya rips up the note, and goes into the bedroom to find that Vidya is crying
Kamya: What is all this crying about?
Vidya: You know Kamya
Kamya: Well Vidya, its sad but you can't live like this thinking about him
Vidya: But I can't forget him
Kamya: Meaning?
Vidya: I was pregnant with his child a while back, and I aborted it
Kamya: Why?
Vidya: Because it was too early, but now I need that baby
Vidya: The baby was the only thing I could have lived on, and now I have nothing to live on
Kamya: Come on, Vidya, god will give you something to live on soon, soon'
At Amrit's Place
Amrit's Thoughts: I feel so weird, after meeting her, I feel like she's mine
He smiles and falls asleep
Vidya and Kamya go to meet Amrit
Vidya knocks on the door, and out comes the "look a-like of Sagar." His hair is messed up, and wearing a white tank with baggy sweats. Vidya was about to fall but Kamya's firm grip on her hand held her still
Vidya: Ermm Amrit, Do you have a brother?
Amrit: No, I'm an only child
Vidya: Then why do you look exactly like someone I know?
Amrit: Maybe he is someone else, how can anyone look like me?
Vidya: Here is a photo of the guy who looks like you
She shows him
Amrit: This can't be me
Vidya: Well I don't know
Kamya takes both of them to a lunch, meanwhile Sagar thinks of what to say to Kamya, which would be the truth and make her on his side
Sagar: Maybe I could say, I was drunk that day Neira left us, and something happened, and so Neira was threatening me with that, and made me go with her, and brought me here saying that she might be pregnant and made me spend another night with her!
Sagar thinks that will be good enough to convince Kamya and texts her that, while Neira comes in
Neira: Hey sleepy head
Sagar: What?
Neira: You must be having a headache, take this pill
Sagar: Get lost!
Neira: Not until you take it *smirking*
Sagar: Fine, stay I don't care!
Neira: Sure thing
Sagar leaves the house and calls Shahid
Shahid: Hey bro, when are you coming to my wedding, it's like two days away
Sagar: Sorry, I can't come, because Vidya is angry at me
Shahid: Oh, what happened?
Sagar: First tell me why you didn't tell me that Vidya left your house
Shahid: I tried to, first I called you then when you didn't pick up, I text messaged you
Sagar: Thanks, got to go, bye
--Cuts the phone'
Sagar: I can't believe Neira had this all planned, and I fell into it deeply; I just hope Kamya believes me
Kamya excuses herself from the restaurant to tend to the text message she got from Sagar
She reads it, but thinks carefully before believing it, and rushes out of the restaurant
Meanwhile Sagar goes to the airport to find out the flight details of the plane he's taking back
Kamya runs to Neira's house and the door is answered by Neira
Neira: So you came back
Kamya: I need to ask you something, but please be truthful
Neira: Sure, thing, but please come in
After they were all seated
Kamya: How did Sagar start to have an affair with you?
Neria: Well we were on the beach, and Vidya left, to go to the washroom, and Sagar started making out with me, and ya
Kamya: Was he unconscious?
Neira: Nope, later I dropped him to Vidya's room
Kamya: But why Vidya's room, if you guys made out, and you thought he liked you
Neira: Oh, because Vidya wanted surprise him or something
Kamya: Oh, I'll leave now
Neira: No, please have something and then leave!
Kamya: Sorry, some other time, going out the door
Kamya's Thoughts: I need to put this together
---Done---
Guys if you want me to update faster than just answer this question: Why is everyone so pissed hearing Amrit making a entry?
Please comment and criticize
-Adhoore- thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago

What a lovery story Kiran!!I love the way you did it!!!

Keep it up..i cant wait for the next update !!Do it fast!!!I think it is my seconde time i am reading a FF cuz i hate reading!!!But i like it...ur story is really interessing!!!
xoxo
Maru
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Posted: 16 years ago
That was a great update..i want to marry Shahid😍 whats up wit Amrit..he looks like Sagar😕 i wonder whats goin to happen now..do continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: ..maru..

What a lovery story Kiran!!I love the way you did it!!!

Keep it up..i cant wait for the next update !!Do it fast!!!I think it is my seconde time i am reading a FF cuz i hate reading!!!But i like it...ur story is really interessing!!!
xoxo
Maru

thanks so much, i never knew someone could love my ff!😆 i'll continue soon!

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