FF SV Ishq-E-Dil Part16/Pg29 September 1 - Page 18

Soooo sorry jee for being so late with my comment and for missing the last 2 updates. I read them both and must say, I am on the erge of wanting to punch Neira and just URRRRGGHHH ... hehehehe

And Sagar, what's up with him.. Am getting annoyed by him too.. I hope Vidya doesn't see him getting "on" with Neira. Awww..

btw .. hehehehe the song .. is HILARIOUS!!! I would have LOVED to see Sharad/Sagar dancing to dekha jab tuhje yaar, dil mein baje guitar.. LOL

Great update, continue very very very soon.

Missing u lots, take care, luv uuuuuuuuuu

Ishq-E-Dil
(Part 14)
At Neira's house
Neira: Sagar, are you awake??
Sagar: hmmmmmmmmmmmm
Neira: Oh god, I wanted Vidya to see us!
Sagar: Zzzzzzzzz
Neira: Got to wake him up
Neira gets up and and walks by the window
She wonders about what to do when the two arrive; she gets some water and pricks a few drops on Sagar's face with her hand. He moans, but gets up after a while of Neira splashing Water on him. She gets a idea and puts a robe on Sagar, but leaves it a bit open, Sagar is still wearing his boxers but Neira makes it look like he isn't from the door Vidya will come through. She already has a robe on and keeps it open. Now she puts Sagar on the bed and herself on top and flips them over. Sagar who is still not in his senses follows her tunes
Meanwhile in the car
The car loses its fuel while Vidya and Kamya are talking, they have to get it towed so they start walking toward the direction Neira had given Kamya
Vidya: Kamya, how long will it take?
Kamya: We just to go about 5 more blocks
Vidya: Tell me the time
Kamya: Half an hour
Vidya: Omg that will be 1:30 am by then!
Kamya: What can we do, you can run if you want…or we can ask to borrow something
Kamya went to a nearby house and asked if they can borrow some means of transportation? All she got was a two seater bike. The two girls had no choice but to use it to get to Neira's house
They finally reached the house
In Neira's bedroom
Sagar was all over Neira, Neira's plan could work and Sagar can become hers…forever!
Kamya gets out a key and jabs it in the lock, and turns it quiety
Kamya: *whispers* Be as quiet as you can be so we catch them
The two pass through the dirty living room, suddenly Vidya sits on a nearby sofa
Kamya: What happened *kneeling next to her*
Vidya: I just don't want to believe this
Kamya: Be strong!
Vidya: But how??
Kamya: Just remember this can be a trick
Vidya: OK *stands up holding Kamya's Hand*
The two start making their way upstairs, and stop midway when they hear some noise
Vidya: *whispers* Do you think that's moaning?
Kamya: Sounds like it
They continue checking each room quietly and thoroughly. They finally get to Neira's bedroom door, and hears some more louder sounds. Vidya looks at Kamya weird, but Kamya gives a straight face back. Neira hears breathing outside the door, and finds the two are outside, and smiles. Kamya starts opening the door, and Vidya closes her eyes. The door is now fully open, Neira says "Sagar" in a mischievous voice. Vidya immediately opens her eyes shocked. She moves forward slowly, and see's Sharad on top of Neira, with several love bites on Neira.
Vidya: Sa-g-ga-r???? *studdering*
Sagar looks at Vidya, with a weird face
Sagar: Vi-d-ya? How did you get here???
Vidya breaks down crying without saying a word, Kamya goes up to her and holds her shoulder
Kamya: Neira! You cheated on your own best friend's love?? And got me into this, so you can get him!!! And you Sagar how dare you, insult Vidya like this, You insulted her pure love for you, she gave herself to you and this is what she gets?????
Neira: *gets up*Are you done your speech yet??
Kamya: Neira, you can have him, but maybe he won't want you
Neira: Acha if that's true, then why did he spend countless nights with me?? *smirking*
Vidya cried harder, and Kamya just fumed even more
Kamya's Thoughts: Should I take Vidya out of here or let her hear the truth
Sagar get's up
Sagar: Vidya, this is… *comes closer with a hand outreached to touch her cheek*
Vidya: Don't come near me, I hate you, you cheater, get lost, I don't want to see your face again
Vidya grabs Kamya's hand and runs from there, while walking on the street, some boys starts following them, but as soon as they were 1 foot away, a boy named Amrit appeared and beat the hell out of them
Vidya: Who are you??
Amrit: I'm Amrit
Vidya gasps…..
----Done----
Hope you guys like it, to see what happens tune in for the next update!
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~Kiran~