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Kimberly [ nickname = gg~ ]

@fire_woman

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#21

Roshni! It is just Fab-u-lous-ly Delicious! 👏 How could you think otherwise?!?

I love how you made it so romantic; and with some "masala" too! <grin>

Oh man, how romantic is that Bharat - candles, music (Pehli Nazar Mein - one of my absolute very favorite songs), flowers, dancing. **sigh** Then taking Aditi out so he can make sure no one bothers them, as they find out all about each other. And finally, even shy Aditi cannot deny her feelings, and expresses her love for wonderful Bharat! 😳

Bharat is a grown man, and he is still unnerved by his CM! Too Funny! 😆

[[ PS Shame on that creep Ajay! 🤢 Hope Diya dumps his a$$! 😆 ]]

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Kimberly [ nickname = gg~ ]

@fire_woman

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#22

Oh and Roshni -- keep writing! Please! We need more B❤️A SS & FF's!! 😊👍🏼😊

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mariyum

@lazy_mariyum

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#23

i loved it so much yaar i wish they can show that to us in the serial but that is impossible i can imagine them doing that i loved it

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sarwat

@saruu251

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#24

Awwwww its sooo cute! i really like it😊

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Priya

@priyav

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#25

that was so good dear,loved it..i know we all wanted BA to cross maryada in the serial and u beautifully made it into SS

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karpagam

@hotchocolate08

Navigator

Posted: 16 years ago

#26

that was really good roshini😊 please continue soon dear

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xxMATSxx

@RosyRosh

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#27

Yay!!! Im soo glad you guys liked it!!!!!! Thanks soo much for the response..I really thought no one would like it...but I got such positive feedback! LOVE YOU ALL!! thanks a ton!