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Okie guys here is my short story. That most of you have been waiting for. Sorry if you dont like it, I tried. Also, in it, BA didnt get married yet. So there is a little surprise for Sejal because she is the one that wanted this to happen. Ahem..she know what it is..😉😳 loool..hope you all like it.😃 Btw I hope my hindi makes sense, sorry Im not hindu, loool..so I dont know how to write it. Im Guju loool..but I tried. I put english subs there too just incase. 😛 ( Everything in pruple is the story and then blue is the english translation of it the hindi bits.)

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Aditi was in her room, folding clothes when Sagar's mom came into the room to talk to her.
"Aditi beta, woh mujhe tumse kuch baat karni thi. Darasal beta mein Kashi Vishwanat Mandir ja rahi hoon, Shivji ki darshan karne. Aur, mein chahti hoon ke tum bhi mere saat chalo, kyunki tum abhi Bharat se shaadi karne jaa rahi ho aur mein chahti hoon ke tum bhi Shivji ke darshan kar ke mandap par bheto. Taki tumhari aur Bharat ki shaadi shudha zindagi ache se shuru ho." ("Aditi, I wanted to talk to you. Actually Im going to Kashi Vishwanat Mandir to pray to Shivji. And I wanted for you to come with me because you and Bharat are going to get married and I want you to take Shviji's blessings and then sit at the altar. So that your and Bharats wedding starts off well.")
Aditi thought about it for a minute and then said to SM that she will be more than willing to go. It is means starting her married life on a good note, then she will defnitly go to seek blessings from Shivji. SM leaves and Aditi finishes folding the clothes. She stops for a minute and thinks about how Bharat would react to her leaving for a few days.
Just as Aditi was about to leave the room CM walks in. She gives Aditi a cold stare and then starts her bad mouthing.
"Tum Maaji ke saath Kashi Vishwanath jaa rahi ho?" Aditi nods yes and CM continues. " Tho tumne the kar liya hain ke tum mere bete se shaadi kar rahi ho? Hain na? Dekho, main phirse tumhe ke rahi hoon. Mere bete se dhoor raho. Main tumhara saya bhi apne Bharat ki zindagi pe nahi parna chahti. Tum he kuch samaj mein nahi ata kya? Manhoos ke sivay bewaqoof bhi hoon kya? Dhoor raho Bharat se!" ("Are you going to Kashi Vishwanath with SM?" Aditi says nods yes. " So you have decided then that you are going to marry my son? Isn't it? Look, Im going to tell you again to stay away from my son. I don't want for your shadow to be upon my Bharat's life. Do you not understand? Are you stupid along with unlucky? STAY WAY from my Bharat!")
"CM, aap chahe lak koshishe kare, main Bharat se dhoor nahi hongi. Aap kyun humhe alag kar rahi hain. Kya aap apne beta se pyaar nahi karti? Iske jawab maat dho. Kyunki agar aap Bharat se pyaar karti, tho aap uske pyaar se alag karne ki himat bhi na karti." ("CM, no matter how many efforts you make, I will not leave Bharat. Why are bent on seperating us? Do you not love your son? Don't answer that. Because, if you did love him, then you wouldnt even try to separate him from his love")
"Tumhari itni himat, ke mujhe is tara se baat karo. Besharam. Tumhare maa baap ne tumhe tamiz nahi sikhayi?" ("You have that much audacity to talk to me like this? Shameless. Havent your parents taught you any manners?")

"Mujhe tamiz hain. Mujhe pata hain ke mein kya bol rahi hoon. Lekin shayad apko apke mummy papa ne kuch nahi sikhaya. Is liya aap kisi ki kushi use cheen rahe hain." ("I have manners. I know what I am saying. But maybe your mom and dad havent taught you anything. That's why you are stealing away someone happiness from them.")

Aditi shrinks back in fear, but before CM's hand made contact with Aditi's cheek, Bharat had grabbed hold of it. He yells at his mom for trying to slap Aditi. CM tries to speak but Bharat says he doesnt want to hear anything. He asks her to please leave. CM makes a sad face and leaves.

Aditi is shown crying and Bharat consoles her. Aditi says it was her fault. She said somethings to CM that she shouldnt have said. Bharat says, he heard everything. He doesnt think she is wrong. Yes she shouldnt have been so harsh, but CM was wrong in what she was trying to tell her. He supports her. He wipes her tears and they hug. 😳 But then he lets go of her and walks away from her. Aditi wonders what happened. She comes up behind him and hugs him. She asks whats happened.
"Tum saach mein mujhe pooch rahi ho ke kya hua? Tum mujhe chor kar jaa rahi ho, purre theen din ke liye aur mujhe se pooch rahi hon ke kya hua? Tumhare janna sach mein zaroori hain kya?" ("You are asking me what happened? You are leaving me for 3 full days and your asking me what happened? Is your leaving that important?")
"Ha Bharat. Janna zaroori hain. Agar aap chaathe hain ke humari shaadi shudha zindagi ache se shuroo ho tho mujhe janne hoga. Bus theen din ke baat hain. Theen din jaldhi guzar jayega. Dek na" ("Yes Bharat. I have to go. If you want for our married life to start well, then I have to go. Its only a matter of three days. Three days will pass quickly. Just watch")
"Kab ja rahi ho?" ("When are you leaving?")
"Kal subha" ("Tomorrow morning")
Later that night, Bharat was in his room pacing. He couldnt just let Aditi leave. He wanted to spend some time with her before morning. Bharat waits until 12 midnight. He opens his room door, and looks outside to the hall way. He notices all the lights are off. He wanted to make sure everyone was asleep before he put his plan into action. he leaves his room, and walks past CM's bedroom. He opens the door and sees her alseep. He realized that his main hurdle was fast asleep and he wont have any problem in what he was about to do. But just to make sure he stopped by his dads, SM, AD's, Chandra, and even Gauri's room to make sure everyone was in bed and in deep slumber. After making sure, he walked to Aditi's room. He knocked on the door. She was still awake. Aditi walked to the door as well and opened it, to see Bharat. Bharat pushed he inside, and shut the door behind him. Now no one can stop him. 😉
"Bharat aap yahan. Iss waqt? Dekho, aap please yahan se jaye..phir se agar CM agayi tho?" ("Bharat, your are here at this time? Look, please go from here. What if CM comes again?")
"Woh nahi ayegi. Maine saab ke kamre achi thara se dek liya. Saab apne apne kamre mein so rahe hain. CM bhi. Aure waise bhi, maine darvasa undher se lock kar diya hain. Agar koi aya tho usko knock karna hoga. Thab mein us kirki se chala ja onga. 😆 ("She wont come. I checked everyones rooms. Everyone is sleeping in their rooms. Even CM. Also, I locked the door. So if anyone comes, they have to knock. Thats when I leave from the window." 😆)
"Woh saab tik hain Bharat, lekin aap yahan aaye kyon?" ("Thats all fine Bharat, but why have you come here?")
"Aditi..CM tumse saach hi ke rahi thi. Tum saach mein bewaqoof hi ho! Main yahan kyon aaya hoon..iska jawab mein abhi tumhe de tha hoon. Ek minute." ( "Aditi, CM was saying the right thing. You really are stupid. Why am I here? I will answer that question now. One minute.")
Bharat walks over to dresser, he gets matches. He walks over to the bowl of water, rose petals, and candles that were put in the corner of the room. He takes the bowl and slowly places it on the middle of the coffee table. He lights the candles. He walks over to the stereo, and puts on soft music in the background. He then walks over to the lights and dims them. Bharat goes to Aditi, takes her hand and escorts her to the middle of the room.
"Aab pata chala ke main yahan kyon aaya hoon? Aaj ki raat, hum donno saat mein guzarenge. Aaj ki raat, humare bheech koi nahi aayega. Mein tumse vaada karta hoon, ke hum apni hade par nahi karengi. Lekin mein ye nahi vaada kar sakta ke mein tumhe choonga bhi nahi." ("Now you see what im doing here? Tonight, we will spend the night with eachother. Tonight, no one can come between us. I promise you, that we will not cross our limits. But I cant promise you, that I wont touch you.")😳😳😳
Bharat takes the remote for the stereo and turns it up a bit. Pehli Nazar Mein from Race plays in the background. Bharat and Aditi share a passionate dance. Aditi rests her head on Bharats chest. He then lifts it, and says that there is more to his little surprise. He goes to the cabinet, and gets a shawl. He first blows out the candles in the room. (Fire safety 😊 lool) He then jumps out of the window. He holds out his hand for Aditi to take, so she too can leave the room through the window. Aditi stares in confusion for a bit. But then she puts her hand in Bharat's and climbs out too. Bharat and Aditi sneak into the car, and slowly pull out of the driveway of Singh Mansion. 😳 Bharat takes Aditi on a long drive.
In the car, Bharat pays less attention to the road, and more at Aditi's shimmering face.
"Koi itna khoobsurat kaise ho sakta hai? Saach Aditi, tum bohoth khoobsurat hoon. Main tumhare iis haseen chehre se nazaar hi nahi hata sakta. Aur, main is baat se khush hoon ke tumne mere saath aane se mana nahi kiya." ("How can anyone be so beautiful? Really Aditi, you are so beautiful. I can take my eyes of of your face. And, Im happy about the fact that you didnt say no to coming with me."
"Bharat main aapko aapne aap se sayada barosa kar thi hoon. Main janti hoon ke aap kuch galat nahi karengi. Aur is liya main aapke saath aayi. Main bhi yein chahti hoon ke hum kuch waqt saath mein guzare. Agar is ke liya humhe ghar se baar ana parege tho ye hi sahi." ("Bharat I trust you more than I trust myself. I know that you cannot do anything wrong. Thats why i came with you. I also want for us to spend time together. If we have to leave the house for it, then so be it.")
Bharat takes his hand and grabs Aditis hand. He puts tight grip on it, and smiles at her.
He and Aditi drive on for a few hours. They talk..they tell eachother everything about their life, that they dont know already. In that one hour, Bharat and Aditi both felt as if they knew eachother better than they knew themselves. 😳
Bharat sees a dabba on the road thats still open. He pulls the car up and stops. He gets out, opens the door for Aditi and both walk over and order food. After ordering they find a table and benches and sit down.
After having their meal, Bharat decided to order two sodas before leaving. A few seats away, there was another couple. Ajay and Diya. Ajay sat Diya down while he went to go and order their food. While he was there he ordered two soda's also. The man that was running the dhaba, took four glasses out poured sodas in all four of them. 2 of them were Aditi and Bharat's. Ajay took a pill out that had an intoxication affect. He planned on giving Diya the drink so she would spend the night with him. He broke open the pill and poured it in the soda. Diya called out to him, and Ajay turned around and started talking to her, when Bharat came to the counter and grabbed his and Aditi's soda. Bharat accidently takes the glass that had the pill emptied in it instead. Ajay takes the other two glasses thinking he has his and Aditi's sodas and walks away.
Bharat comes to his table, and gives Aditi her soda, and he drinks the soda with the pill. After Bharat and Aditi finished, they drive back home.
Along the way Bharat felt dizzy and almost drunk. They were almost home as it was, he could drive all the way back. It wouldnt be a problem. Aditi notices Bharat.
"Bharat aap teek tho hain na? Kya hua?" ("Bharat are you okie? What happened?")
"Nahi, Aditi kuch nahi. Bus thoda sa chakar a raha hai, lekin mein teek hoon. Waise bhi ghar ponchne hi wale hain. Im fine" (No Aditi, nothing. I am just feeling a bit dizzy, but Im okay. We are about to reach home anyways. Im fine.)
Bharat pulls up to Singh Mansion. It was 3-30 a.m. He and Aditi sneek back into Aditi's room quietly. Bharat still felt a bit dizzy and this time the "nasha" (intoxication) was reaching its hieght. 😉
Aditi says to Bharat that he should leave now, considering its very late, and she has to wake up early tomorrow for her train.
Bharat comes up slowly behind her. He had a blurred vision. Although he couldnt make out any figure, there was only one person he was thinking about. There was only one person in his heart and mind, and that was Aditi. He moved closer and closer. Aditi turned around and noticed Bharat standing infront of her, face to face. her heart stopped as he put his hand on her face.
"Bharat yein kya kar rahe ho, aap hosh mein tho hain.?" ("Bharat what are you doing? Are you in your senses?")
"Aab tak hosh mein tha is liye kuch nahi kiya, aab main apne hosh gawa chuka hoon..."(Till now, I have been in my senses and havent done anything. But now i have lost my senses.)
"Bharat...."
Bharat puts his finger on Aditis lips before she finished. "Shh..kuch maat bolo..." ("Shh..dont say anything.") Bharat then grabs Aditi tightly....😳
Aditi looks at him shocked. But she couldnt stop him. There was something inside of her that wanted to let him do whatever he wanted with her. She was hopelessly in love with him, and couldnt stop him. Aditi gave in. 😳
Bharat slowly walks forward as Aditi walks back. Aditi unknowingly gets to the edge of the bed. Bharat was now hovering about Aditi as Aditi layed down. He started smothering her with kisses....First her forhead, then her right cheek, and her left, then all over her neck, and finally there lips made contact. 😳
The next morning, the sun was shining, and you see the Singh Mansion, and then Aditi's room. Aditi's head was on Bharat chest. Bharat was shirtless, and Aditi was also exposed..😳 What covered their bodies, was Aditi's blanket.
Aditi's eyes opened. She saw herself in an awkward postition, and was at first shocked at what happened. But then smiled. She looked up at Bharat's face. She kissed him on the cheek, and got out of bed with a bed sheet wrapped around her. She got into the bathroom, took a shower, got out, took her suitcase with her clothes, and left the room. She had a train to catch.
When Bharat eyes opened, they were searching for Aditi. She was not there. He was upset. His eyes then fell upon the side table. On it was a note. He took it and read it.
"Kal raat jo bhi hua humare beech, uske liya mujhme koi bachtava nahi hain...." ("Whatever happened last night between us, for it, I have no regrets....")
Bharat smiled. Something beauiful had just happened to him, and he couldnt stop his smiling and he couldnt stop thinking about it. Even though it was all vague to him, he could still remember the feelings that were present between him and Aditi. 😳
"Bharat!"
"Oh Shit! CM!" 😲
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Alright guys! Im done! I hope that was good! I promised I would finish today, and I did! I really hope it was good!😳
Edited by frenzgrl129 - 16 years ago

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Posted: 16 years ago
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OOOH NO!!!! Im soo sorry hun! I knew I thought..i stole your title..didnt I? OMG!!!! Im really sorry..i changed it!! Thanks so much for making me realize my mistake!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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omg that was wonderful!!!!!!!!!!!!1

Luved it Roshni!!!!!!!!!!!!11

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Posted: 16 years ago
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waitin for the rest..........quite interesting😛
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Thank you guys...but see...when I said that not many people will like it i was right. you guys like it and I thank you loads!!! But like last time i dont think im going to get a good response..😔
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Verrrry cute SS, Roshni!! Please continue soon!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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omg continue and plz put romantci parts i loved it thanks alot
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Posted: 16 years ago
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haha^^ sweetie..IM a BA fan remember? Me not putting romantic parts in? Aisa ho sakta hain kya? loooooool...im updating in a bit...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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aw very good roshni ! Really sweet story, can't wait for the rest <3
superb job !

luv Gina <2
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Roshni zabardast yaar its very romantic
wanna see these kind of scenes of BA
plz continue soon

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