FF:Priya ka Prem- part 30, page 65, 27th sept!!!!

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@ekdoteenchar

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Posted: 16 years ago

#251

Originally posted by: _Monu_
HIIII GINA!!!!

YAAR KYA UPDT THA!!!

I THINK THIS IS 1 OF UR BEST UPDTS!!!.....FANTABOULOS!!!!

MEIN SMILE PE SMILE KARTI RAHI!!!

THE FEELINGS ARE WRITTED SO WELL!!!

ALWAYS LOVE IT!!!

NICE END!!!

"TUMNE PYAAR KYA" IM WONDERING WHO SAY THIS!!!

AND THE SONG IS PERFECT!!!!!

MAAZA AGAYYA!!! U KNOW KI MEIN NEXT UPDT KE LYE HAMESHA SE HI EXITED HOON!!!!

ANIWAY CONT SOON WHEN AS POSSILBLE!!!

SEEEE YAAAA

ALWAYS LOVE U MORE!!!!

UR PYAARI SI MONI!!!

Hi Moni !
Awwwwww thanks Moni jee ! Aap kitni sweet comments mujhe deete hai ! 😃
Aww keep smiling hun ! 😊
Haiii thank you, thank you, thank you jee !
I will continue tomorrow ( friday )
I am soooo glad you liked it hun !
And no, I love u more 😆

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challo

@ekdoteenchar

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Posted: 16 years ago

#252

Originally posted by: kirancanada1
this friday

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
gina
this friday hear me?
THIS FRIDAY!!!!!

Oh really, this friday ? Hmmm but like I said, it's all upto Radika now. So she's in charge. Try to convince her instead of me, either update tomorrow or next friday 😆

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Radika

@svforever

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Posted: 16 years ago

#253

Originally posted by: theflyingdonkey

Next friday? hehe I thought this friday = in two days ... But if you want next friday, then it's perfectly fine by me ! 😆😃 .. So this friday or next friday ? The decision is interly up to you !

Oppsie...hehehehehehehe......I meant this friday! I want the update this friday or even sooner! 😉

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Radika

@svforever

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Posted: 16 years ago

#254

Originally posted by: theflyingdonkey

Oh really, this friday ? Hmmm but like I said, it's all upto Radika now. So she's in charge. Try to convince her instead of me, either update tomorrow or next friday 😆

Areh wah....I'm in charge! Okay then, I command you to update today and tomorrow!

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challo

@ekdoteenchar

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Posted: 16 years ago

#255

Originally posted by: svforever

Areh wah....I'm in charge! Okay then, I command you to update today and tomorrow!

Heyy I said either tomorrow or next friday 😆 Ok jee, you said tomorrow, then tomorrow I will update 😊 Hehe everyone is eagerly waiting to know who said: Tumne pyaar kiya ... Ahhh who can it be? Prem? Priyas dad? Madhu? Mohit? Or maybe daadi or prems mom? Hmmm ... Interesting 😆

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Kiran

@KiranSD1

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Posted: 16 years ago

#256

Originally posted by: theflyingdonkey

Heyy I said either tomorrow or next friday 😆 Ok jee, you said tomorrow, then tomorrow I will update 😊 Hehe everyone is eagerly waiting to know who said: Tumne pyaar kiya ... Ahhh who can it be? Prem? Priyas dad? Madhu? Mohit? Or maybe daadi or prems mom? Hmmm ... Interesting 😆

oh please be prem but i think it's one of the moms or prems grandmother

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challo

@ekdoteenchar

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Posted: 16 years ago

#257

Originally posted by: kirancanada1

oh please be prem but i think it's one of the moms or prems grandmother

I also hope it's prem ! Wouldn't that just be soooo sweet 😃 Liken ... We have to be realistic,,, Hmm we'll see !

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challo

@ekdoteenchar

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Posted: 16 years ago

#258

Hello ji !
Wow I know, I ended the last part in a great suspense moment. So I won't keep you all up now, here it is, part 21, by the way it's all described in Priyas point of view:

Tears fell from my eyes. Yeh kya ho raha hai? Kyun Prem mera peecha kar raha hai? I started to cry heavily. Why, oh why? Yeh mujhe kya hua, kyun hua? Maine kya kiya? I said to myself.
- Tumne pyaar kiya ... someone said from behind
I turned around and there I saw ... Prem!!!
Prem stood there, in his black suit and was looking absolutely ... My heart started to pound. He looked at me and smiled. Ufff he and his smiles ! He was looking at me deeply, and was looking into my eyes. It was as if I could feel him. I could feel him. I started to shiver. Tears fell from my eyes. I closed my eyes and said: Prem ...
Then I felt a warm touch. A hand on my shoulder. It felt nice but terrifing at the same moment. I wanted to keep my eyes closed, but knew I couldn't continue like this. So I slowly opened my eyes. To my surprise, Prem wasn't there.
-No ..., I said.
I closed my eyes again and then slowly opened them again. But there was still no Prem.
-Priya...
I turned around and saw Madhu was there. Madhu. Not Prem. I got disappointed and relieved at the same time. But what was this?
-Madhu, I said and started to cry.
She hugged me and I cried on her shoulder. This was the first time I actually cried infront of her.
-It's okay, she said
-No it's not. This is not okay. How can I..., I said but she interrupted me by saying:
-...fall in love? It's normal di, everyone falls in love. That's life, she said.
I couldn't stop my tears, so I put my head on Madhus shoulder. She stroked my hair. It felt nice and reminded me of when mom used to do that.
I closed my eyes and slowly went to sleep, it felt like I was a kid again and slept in my moms arms. That safeness that every kid has when they are in their mothers arms. Now I had it in my sisters arms. My sister, whom I loved and had taken care of since she was born, was taking care of me now. It felt nice.

The next day, Priyas point of view:

I woke up and saw that I was laying on my bed & had a blanket on me. How did I get here? I had a memory lost for a moment there. But then I heard voices outside of my room. It was dad and Madhu.
-What happened yesterday? When I came home, she was asleep in your arms and now today she didn't wake
up early as she does, dad said
I looked at my alarm clock. Wow it was 12.30 in the afternoon. I had never woken up so late. Oh no, who made breakfast then? Poor dad and Madhu! I continued to listen to their conversation.
-Nothing happened yesterday, I promise. I just think Priya is confused right now, Madhu said
-Go and wake her up now, and go bring her food. It's nearly lunchtime. I have to go now, dad said
-Ok bye papa, I will. Have a good day at work, Madhu said.

I got up from bed and went to the bathroom and freshened up. When I came out I saw Madhu there with a brick full with food. I smiled.
-Good morning sleepy-head, she said to me
-Good morning meri pyaari si choti behen, I said to her.
-Here I made you breakfast, or should I say lunch, she said
I started to eat the delicious food. I was really hungry. There was a long awkard silence between me and Madhu.
-I'm sorry for last night, I didn't mean to..., I said
-Don't mention it! But I'm worried about you though, she said
I felt bad. I had always make sure that neither dad or Madhu had to worry about anything. I didn't want them to get worried or sad. So I tried my best to keep them happy and make sure they got everything. And now, they were worried about me.
-I'm okay, you know me, I said and smiled.
-You're right, I do know you, and that's what scares me, she said
-Kya? I said confused.
-Just kidding ! She said and laughed.
There was another awkard silence but this time Madhu broke it by singing.
-Jab pyaar kiya, to darna kya ..
I looked at her. She looked at me. I knew what she meant.
-It will go over, it will take sometime, but it will go over though, I said to her.
-What will go over?
-My feelings for Prem.
-Priya, tumne pyaar kiya, koi paap nahi kiya hai ! Now stop, love is something great, so just go and confess your love and then...
-And then what? There is no then Madhu! This was not supposed to happen, neither of this. And I can't handle this either, I don't have time, I have responsibilities.
-What kind of responsibilities?
-Well firstly I must finish my college...
-Which ends in 2 months ..
-Yes but afterwards I have to get a job and earn money..
-Why?
-Because I want to help out with the economy with papa and because I want to !
-Fine okay, and then what?
-Then I have to first make sure that you finish your college...
-I also end in 2 months, remember since my line is a year short than yours?
-Yes and after that I have to find you a good, decent guy so that you can get married...
-No need to, I already found one.
-WHAT? I said and was shocked.
-Yes, tumhari Premi ka baayi
Mohit? Priya remembered the night before and how she and Mohit "clicked" instantly.
-Look Priya I'm not like you, obviously, I know Mohit is the one for me. I have never felt like this for anyone. We clicked instantly. Yesterday we started talking and dancing, and it's like we have known each other forever. We have so much in common and he's just ... He's the one Priya, I know it !
I couldn't believe this. My little sister is in love! She is saying she has found the love of her life. Madhu, little baby Madhu is all grown up.
I got tears in my eyes. She came to me and wiped them off.
-Mujhe aashirwad deedo di, I want you to meet Mohit and spend some time with him and get to know him. Then you can decide whether he's
worthy or not. Will you do that for me?
I looked into her innocent brown eyes. I got all teared up and hugged her.
-It's okay, two sisters are in love with two brothers, she said and giggled.
-No..., I said.
-Prem is the one di, everyone can see it. And you know it's true.
I was quiet. I didn't want to say anything.
-Anyways now go and get ready, Mohit jee is coming soon to meet you. We all are going out for ice-cream.
-What? And when were you going to tell me this?
-I just did, she said
-Very smart! Haiii and you call him Mohit jee.
Madhu blushed. I smiled and went to my room and got dressed. I decided to wear my white salwar kameez.
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After 20 minutes the doorbell rang. Madhu got stressed up because she hadn't worn her earrings and bangles yet. So I went and opened the door. There I saw Mohit. He was looking quite handsome.
-Hello, he said and smiled.
Hmm, he and Madhu both have a vicious but still very innocent smile I thought to myself.
-Hi, come in I said and smiled.
He came in and I was about to close the door but then I saw someone else was with Mohit. It was... Prem !!!!!!!!

Tan tan tan 😆 Hehe just kidding !
Anyways phewww that was long ! But I've made the update extra long because I will only update once a week now. Ehumm now please don't bug me for updates this week, I have my exams & tests and they won't end until Thursday next week. So this update counts as 2 😆
I hope you liked it ! Sorry if it was too long !
Have a great weekend 😊

Oh yeah, P.S. sorry for messing with you all in the beginning 😉

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Vidya

@Vidyaa

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Posted: 16 years ago

#259

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Wonderfullu Done My Dear DON!👏👏👏

Superb update yet again !👏

Mohit is too impatient I guess....😛😛😛

Loveeedddddddd the update Gina !!!😊

😲12:30 baje tak bhala koi sota hai????

Perhaps ,this is in Prem's POV , <singing> , Nasha ye pyaar ka nasha hai , ye meri baaton yaaron maano...

Nashe me yaar doob jao , raho na hosh mein diwaanon...

Ke maine jabhse tumko dil ye de diya , meetha meetha sa dard le lia , suno o PRIYA , Maine tumko dil diya.....👏👏👏

Superb update !!👏

I loveeeeed it!!

And meri DON , what's tan tan tan , mandir ki ghanti baja rahi hain aap kya?? Ya school ki ???😛

Wonderful update !

Thanks a lot !!

Aapki Angel Rani 😊🤗

Edited by Vidyaa - 16 years ago

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Pooja

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Posted: 16 years ago

#260

Yaar Gina...phir se tumne subse interesting jagah par rok di......lagta hai creatives ke endings ka asar tum pe sar chad ke bol raha hai...😆
Wonderful update dear...one d beat....
All d best for ur exams...sab ki chuti karke aana....😛
I know u'll do well....
Take care....

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