FF: Pyaar Hua! pt 24 pg72 6/23+NOTE pg 68 - Page 4

U started a FF i didnt know,anyways i jus finish reading the updates and i must say its really good,continue soon.

Hiii Radika!! Srry for being late! Loved the update! Uh-oh...what did Vidya see?? Update soon hun!

Originally posted by: sexy_sharad

That was an amazing update dear,continue soon.

Originally posted by: divz_fan

U started a FF i didnt know,anyways i jus finish reading the updates and i must say its really good,continue soon.

Originally posted by: sharad+divz4evr

Hiii Radika!! Srry for being late! Loved the update! Uh-oh...what did Vidya see?? Update soon hun!

Amazing start to the FF Radhika..........please update soon......what is Vidya so shocked about.....Plzzzzzzzzzz

Originally posted by: lexie

Amazing start to the FF Radhika..........please update soon......what is Vidya so shocked about.....Plzzzzzzzzzz

hi Radika!! Sorry for reading your ff soooo late!! it is really, really good so far!!! and btw, it is way better than mine(the intro on pg. 1). continue when you can, it is trully amazing. Yaar, why did ya have to leave a t such a cliif hanger!!!! sur, leave me and others in total suspense+curiousity

Originally posted by: bmtdluver

hi Radika!! Sorry for reading your ff soooo late!! it is really, really good so far!!! and btw, it is way better than mine(the intro on pg. 1). continue when you can, it is trully amazing. Yaar, why did ya have to leave a t such a cliif hanger!!!! sur, leave me and others in total suspense+curiousity

Thank you for all your support! This is in third person!

Vidya came home and trembled with fear as she saw Riya looking at her in a very angry way and Shalu crying!

-V: "Darn it" Vidya said in a low voice. My sweetus! I am sooooooooo sorry! Whooow kya hua na---

Riya cut Vidya off--- Di, how could you be so irresponsible? Did you know how scared we were? Riya kept on scolding Vidya when Shalu said'.

Sh: RIYA, at least let Vidya di explain!

Ri: Whatever! She should understand these things! She's older than us na!

Then, Riya noticed that Vidya had become teary.

Vidya ran away to her room and closed it!

Sh: See what you did now! You're impossible! Don't you dare forget that if it weren't for Di, you would have still been in your parents' house of hell! (Sorry for the bad word) Can't you control your mouth? You know what happened on the day of Di's ---gets cut off by Riya. (You see, Shalu loves her sister a lot and never wants to see her in tears.)

Riya realizes her mistake----Opps! I guess I messed up!

Sh: Hun, you don't "mess up" in these kinds of things and if you do, you need a brain, which I don't think you have!

Ri: Okay, Okayyy! Let's go to Di and apologize!

Sh: Okay!

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Shalu and Riya go to Vidya's room.

Vidya was lying on her stomach and sobbing when she heard a low knock on her door. She said, "Under aao".

Riya slowly peered into the room. As soon as she saw Vidya's eyes look at her, she looked down. Shalu and Riya came into the room. Riya sat next to Vidya on one side while Shalu sat on the other side. Vidya turned her head to face Shalu.

Ri:Di!

Vidya didn't respond.

Ri: DI! Please listen to me! I am really sorry for the things I said downstairs! I was just really worried for you! Diiiiiiiiiii!

Shalu gently patted Vidya's head and said, "Di, please forgive Riya! She loves you, that's why she scolded you!"

Riya started to cry as she said, " Please forgive me Di! If you don't, then I'll run away from home again!

Suddenly, Vidya got up and lightly, yet firmly hit Riya's head!

V: Ayyyyyyyyye! Tumhari yeh jurrat ke tum mujhe dhamki doow! I can't live without you guys and you're saying that you'll run away from home!-----She started to cry again!

Ri: I am soooooooooo sorry I said that di! I'll never leave you or Shalu! I am so sorry that I made you cry! I am so sorry that I said that you're irresponsible! I am so sorry that----gets cut off by Vidya

V: Okay, Okay! Are you planning on making us stay up all night?----she smiled and wiped her and her sisters' tears away.

Sh: So di, why were you so late?

Vidya looks at her sisters cutely and tells them what happened.

Ri and Sh: Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!

Ri: Well di! Were the guys cute? Huh? Please tell me!

Sh: There she goes again! Here, 2 men have gotten injured and this girl is asking if they're cute! Haaaaaaiiiiii Ram!

Ri: Whatttttt! I was just kidding! Anyways, I hope that they get better!

V: Fine! Let's freshen up and have dinner! Mere pait mein chui (rats) dhor (running) rahehai!

They laughed and got ready for dinner!

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Downstairs.

Sh: Well something smells good! Kya aloo ke parathes banaya hai?

V: Ha! Aur Riya ke liye, gobi ke parathes!

Ri: Yay!

V: What about me? I don't get anything!----Vidya pretended that she was angry.

Sh: Well, you have to close your eyes first! Vidya did as she was told!

Ri: You can open them now! Vidya opened her eyes and saw Kheer in front of her!

V: Awwwwwwwww! Thank you my little darlings!

Ri: You're welcome! It was a piece of cake!

Sh: Yeah, except for the time that you didn't watch the milk and it boiled so much that it came out of the pot!-----Shalu starts to laugh as Vidya starts to crack up.

Ri: Whatever!----Riya said as her cheeks turned red.

V: Well, let's get some sleep! I have to go and meet Mr.Sagar and Mr.Chinu! Inside Vidya's head, she kept on thinking about Sagar because that name was really familiar to her! But she thought that it doesn't really matter, so she starts getting ready for sleep.

Soon, the girls drift away to sleep!

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The next day!

The girls woke up, and got ready. Vidya left for the hospital while Shalu and Riya had some other errands to do!

At the hospital:

V: Hello doctor! How are they feeling?

Doc: Well, Mr. Chinu and Mr. Sagar are getting better! BUT, Mr. Sagar still doesn't remember anything! The doc then tells Vidya more about the situation and what she can do.

V: Oh! Well, can I meet them?

Doc: Sure! There's their room! I need to go now! Bye!

V: Thank you!

Vidya headed towards the room when she heard Chinu trying to help Sagar remember his past.

In the room:

C: Come on Dada! Don't you remember the time that we played in the haveli when we were little? Or the time we played with Dad's best friend Mr. Sharma's (Vidya's dad) daughters?---unfortunately, Vidya didn't hear the Mr. Sharma part.

S: I still don't remember! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! My head really hurts!------Just then, Vidya rushes in.

V: Chinu-ji, don't try to put pressure on your brother! He needs to be calm and relaxed! It will take a while before we can try to make him remember anything!

C: Fine.

Vidya then goes to Sagar and smiles at him as she says'.

V: Sagar-ji, it's all right! Please don't stress your mind! Right now, you need to rest! Okay!----She smiles in such a way that relaxes Sagar.

S: Okay!----says Sagar as he smiles warmly.

Vidya gets happy with his smile and says that she will be right back and goes to Chinu!

V: Chinu-ji, I am going to go now and I will visit you both again in the afternoon! Then, you both are coming with me to my house!

C: But how can we come with you?

V: Please, nothing's going to happen! Plus, Sagar-ji will feel better! Please don't say no!----Isn't Vidya nice?

C: Okay!-----He smiles.

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I think I got carried away with the scolding and stuff! Don't you think so? I tried guys! Please criticize! I need it to improve moi's writing! Bye! Luv you all!