(BA) FF 2shot: unspoken words pg3 pt2..complete - Page 2

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi ,Jiya

How r u doing?
iu write fanfic is very good😊😆
tumne bahuet acchi fan fic likhi hain
great job........................👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
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i totally loved it..please continue and add more romance
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey Jiya - loved your BA one shot! 👍🏼
Always thrilled to find a BA story! You can make it a two-shot you say ... well heck yeah girl ... two shot it all the way! The more BA the better! Whooo!
BTW ... would you post a link to your other FF(s) ... please? Thanks!
Edited by fire_woman - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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so u goin to continue or wut...........😕
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Posted: 16 years ago
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1st, thz for sending me the link
2nd, very great FF, r u eva gonna cont.
man u r good, luved the way u described it, though I cud tell dat towards the end, u started slacking off a bit but its k since it was long and u must b tired afta typing so much
nayways plz cont. this and ur Mayur FF aswell and fast
thx
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Good one!! keep it up..Please add more updates to your FF when you have time..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Unspoken Words

Final part:

Aditi could not believe that this was happening to her. She was finally getting married to her beloved. She was very happy yet a pang of sadness overcame her all of a sudden. She remembered her days with her family. How she played around with the neighbor's kids. How fun it was to be free from any responsibility. She sighed. Today is the day I waited for, after being with Karan, I had lost all hopes but now I can finally be happy. She smiled unknowingly at the thought of Bharat proposing to her when she got into an accident. It was unexpected but she was very embarrased at her sudden outburst of her liking him in front of Bharat but she was glad that she did because if it weren't for that day, today wouldn't be her mehendi ki rasam.

The walls of Singh household were well furnished. The walls were decorated from the rose ornaments and adornments. Rose petals of several colors were neatly placed on top of the water in a big glass bowl giving it a tinge of unique colors as if showing how happy they are to be present at the ceremony. Rose garland neatly hung in unique shapes and designs on the walls of the beautiful house adorning the glowing paint that looked fresh as if it were done right at that moment. The chandeliers were brightly lit. The house smelled richly of the food being freshly prepared at the moment. The living room was in high spirits as all the servants were preparing for the upcoming cermemony. Overall, the house smelled of cheerfulness.

Divya was preparing the prasad for the ceremony which was only several hours away. She prepared a big thali consisting of different types of indian cuisine. As she placed it infront of the idol of Lord Shiva, She looked up and whispered, "agar amar hote to kitna achcha hota. Bhagwaan wo jaha bhi ho, theek ho" (it would have been nice if Amar would have been here. God, please protect him, may he be safe wherever he is). She smiled sadly remembering all the moments she spent with her beloved. Then just as soon as she realized what she was doing, she shook herself and whispered again in somewhat scheerful tone, "No, he promised that he will be here at the wedding so why should I be worried. Besides if Bharat sees me like this, then he will stop the ceremony until Amar comes". She smiled at the thought of having Aditi as her bhabhi. Yes, finally Bharat was taking a step forward to a new beginning.

Bharat, who was restless because he didn't see Aditi for 2 days, was sitting quietly in his room thinking of a way to get out of the guest house and enter the house. He had a lot to take care of after that. He looked outside and saw 4 well-build guards standing there. Divya had told them not to let Bharat out as he might interfere with the ceremony. He looked down sadly. Whay couldn't they let him see her? Oh why only in India is there a ceremony like this. Then, there he decided I will go to the ceremony and I will be the one to put the mehndi on Aditi's hand. He smiled happily at his decision them moved forward and opened the door and there began his plan to escape the Guest house.

Aditi was looking at herself in the mirror. Today was her mehndi rasm and also tonight was going to be Bhrat's haldi ki rasm. She was very nervous. Yes, she had been engaged in this ceremony before but that time was out of sheer nervousness of getting married to a stranger. She didn't know how Karan was. But this time however, she knew Bharat was a person she wanted to spend the rest of her life with. That thought alone made her nervous. What if something wrong occurs during the ceremony? What if Bharat decides that he doesn't love her anymore? The thought alone scared her . No, she was going to marry him so she will have to learn to trust him aswell. She closed her eyes. The thought of Bharat made her calm. She hadnt seen him for 2 days straight and she was missing him. She looked up in the mirror while combing her wet hairs. There she saw something very shocking poping out of the window, a hand. She was scared. What if it is Karan? What if he had ran away from jail? What if he came back for revenge? These thoughts haunted her so she closed her eyes and hid behind her bed.

Bharat jumped in the well-lit room. He looked around confused. Only 1 question in his mind: Where is Aditi? He could have sworn she was here a minute ago then what happened? He called out her name to see if she was in the bathroom but no answer. He looked towards the door which was locked from the inside so he looked around confused.

Aditi heard Bharat's voice. She closed her eyes again thinking that her ears are playing tricks on her. She peaked from the opening in the bed and saw Bharat looking around confused. She sighed in relief and got up. She called out to him and he turned aroung surprised. His expression changed to a happy one. Alas, it has been a long time indeed. She looked at him, tears of joy filling at the corner of her eye. They ran upto him and Bharat took her into a warm embrace. They both stood there for what seemed like eternity to them and then Aditi started sobbing quietly

Bharat looked at Aditi. He was shocked to see tears in her eyes. He looked at her confused, "Aditi, kisine kuch kaha?" she nodded negatively. Then he asked again, "phir kyun ro rahi ho? Arent u happy that we are getting married?" he asked worried. She looked at him shocked at a sudden wrong assumption from him. Then she said looking down, "I m very happy that we are getting married. I missed you so much in these 2 days that I almost came to visit you. I m just scred that something or someone might ruin this beautiful moment between us". He looked at her, joy clearly shown from his eyes, "I missed u too aur isiliye me yaha hoon. Don't worry, jab tak me hoon tumhare saath, tumhe kuch nahi hoga. And god is with us aswell. Don't worry." He finished off. She hugged him even tightly, "bharat, I m so happy that u r here". Bharat smiled, "aata kese nahi, I was missing u and u have no idea that the guards were very strong to fight to". Hearing this Aditi broke the hug and started searching Bharat's body for traces of any injuries. Bharat completely understanding her action, looked at her romanticly. "ohho, to itna sabr nahi hai. Hmm, bas thora intezar karlo. Bas kal aur, phir hum log dil khol kar pyaar karenge."he finished off teasingly. She looked up at him shocked and realizes what she is doing. She moved a step back embarrassed and tries to escape when suddenly Bharat holds her hand, "kaha jaa rahi ho? Abhi to bahut saari batein karni hai" he said dreamingly. Aditi whispered, "wo Divya bhabhi keh rahi thi ke unhe koi kaam tha mujhse. Abhi yaad aaya." She couldn't meet his eyes. "ek baar haath pakad liya hai to chorunga nahi chahe koi bhi bulae". He started moving closer to her and started moving back. All of a sudden, there was no place to move back as ther was a wall behind her.

She was nervous. Her heart drumming wildly against her chest. She closed her eyes. Bhrat looked at her innocent face, noticing each and every feature of his sweet angel. He leaned closer. She could feel his breath on her. He moved closer and closer, until their lips were just inches away. He smiled at her innocence where she was interpretting his next move with her eyes shut and her cheeks giving her fair complexion a light pink color. He moved his lips closer and kissed her forehead softly. His gentle touch giving her shivers down her spine. He moved down and kissed her right cheek. Again Aditi shivered. Then suddenly a loud knock interrupted them.

Aditi suddenly opened her eyes and gently pushed Bharat away. The knock on the other side continued. She asked, "kaun hai?" on the other hand, Divya yelled, "aditi get ready. We will come to take you for the ceremony in an hour". Aditi replied, "ji theek hai". And then there was no sound from outside indicating that Divya bhabhi has gone. She sighed in relief but stiffened again when she realized that Bharat was right behind her. She looked at him shyly. Then turned to give final touchups to her hair when he held her hand again. She looked at him abashed. Then said, "bharat, let me go, Divya bhabhi is waiting for me". He came closer, "do u really want to leave me here and go?" he asked her lifting her chin up so his gaze could meet with hers. She looked down shyly and nodded negatively and closed her eyes to be ready for what may come next. He smiled at her cuteness and took her hand in his and said, "open your eyes Aditi" she opened her eyes to look at him. He led her to her bed and made her sit. Then he pointed to the mehndi bowl and asked, "ye tumhare liye hai?" she nodded and said, "divya bhabhi said that if I want to put something on my hand on my own then I could". He smiled again and moved to get the bowl. She looked at him comfused. He took her hands in his and started applying mehndi on her hand. Soon after, he was finished. She looked at it and smiled. It was a heart in which there were B.A. intials. The heart was oulined with wavy lines followed by a flower. It looked like a professional work. He looked at her, "this is my gift to you". She looked at him, blood rushing to her cheeks. She moved forward and pecked him on his cheeks. Then she moved back shyly. He was surprised but smiled at her. When suddenly there was another knock on the door, "Aditi, come out, the ceremony is going to start". It was her divya bhabhi. She looked at Bharat pleadingly. Bharat stood up and left from the window he came from. She stood up and opened the door from her free hand. Divya looked at her hand and smiled. "bahot payaari hai, bagwaan kare ke tum dono ka rishta is mehndi ki tarah kile". And then she took Aditi to the ceremny that was going to be held downstairs.

Everyone was rushing here and there for the incomplete work to be completed. Aditi looked at her hands. Her hands were glowing in the rich color of her mehndi. The part that was the brightest was the heart that Bharat made for her. She moved to the door. Everyone was waiting for the dulhann to come downstairs at the mandup. She moved forward with everyone else supporting her. Her head down towards the ground. She slowly made her way down the stairs. Then she sat beside husband-to-be. The ceremonies started. Then came kanya daan. Noone from Aditi's family was there. Then came a hand that took her pallu and tied with Bharat's. Aditi turned to find her caretaker frm her childhood there. She looked at Bharat who gave her an assuring smile. She was overwhelmed with tears. Soon all the ceremonies were over. Then both of them stood to take ashirvaad from every one else.

Aditi moved forward to take ashirwaad from her caretaker when her caretaker hugged her tightly instead. "its so good to see you. U r very fortunate that u have a hubby like Bharat." She smiled again understanding what her mother-like figure meant. Then they took everyone's ashirwaad. Suddenly came a loud noise from behind. All of them turned to find Amar there. He looked at them exhausted. "is it already over?" he asked. Divya moved forward to hug him. He hugged her back. She said, "not everything is over, its just starting". He smiled at her.

After everything was over, Aditi was sitting on the bed neatly decorated with rose petals and other flowers. Then came Bharat. He closed the door behind him. He sat on the bed beside her and pulled her ghunghat up. She had her eyes closed. "open ur eyes Aditi" she opened her eyes. Happiness reflecting from her chocolate color eyes. He made her stand up. She did as she was told. He moved closer, "Today is our night, and 1st I want to talk to u" she looked at him lovingly. "thanks" he looked at her confused, "kis liye". She leaned against his shoulder, "aap meri caretaker ko lae isliye". He looked at her, "how did u know?" she looked at him and smiled, "U r my love, I know things about you that u don't know yourself". he cupped her face in his hands. "u r the best thing that has happened to me". She blushed. Then took his hands in hers and kissed it. Traces of light pink creeping at the side of his cheeks. They both looked at eachother. Then Bharat came closer and took her in his arms. He gently placed her on his bed and switched the side-lamp off. Only thing witnessing their union was the wind and the light of the luminous moon which was coming from the open window.
THANKS to all who liked it and commented on it...thx again.....well here is it guys, plzzz be kind and leave comments and concerns. hope u like it
Enjoy
Ciao
Jiya
Edited by act12 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey sweetie..i was going to respond lool...i was just reading it..FABULOUS!!!i loved it!! I especially loved this scene:

Aditi suddenly opened her eyes and gently pushed Bharat away. The knock on the other side continued. She asked, "kaun hai?" on the other hand, Divya yelled, "aditi get ready. We will come to take you for the ceremony in an hour". Aditi replied, "ji theek hai". And then there was no sound from outside indicating that Divya bhabhi has gone. She sighed in relief but stiffened again when she realized that Bharat was right behind her. She looked at him shyly. Then turned to give final touchups to her hair when he held her hand again. She looked at him abashed. Then said, "bharat, let me go, Divya bhabhi is waiting for me". He came closer, "do u really want to leave me here and go?" he asked her lifting her chin up so his gaze could meet with hers. She looked down shyly and nodded negatively and closed her eyes to be ready for what may come next. He smiled at her cuteness and took her hand in his and said, "open your eyes Aditi" she opened her eyes to look at him. He led her to her bed and made her sit. Then he pointed to the mehndi bowl and asked, "ye tumhare liye hai?" she nodded and said, "divya bhabhi said that if I want to put something on my hand on my own then I could". He smiled again and moved to get the bowl. She looked at him comfused. He took her hands in his and started applying mehndi on her hand. Soon after, he was finished. She looked at it and smiled. It was a heart in which there were B.A. intials. The heart was oulined with wavy lines followed by a flower. It looked like a professional work. He looked at her, "this is my gift to you". She looked at him, blood rushing to her cheeks. She moved forward and pecked him on his cheeks. Then she moved back shyly. He was surprised but smiled at her. When suddenly there was another knock on the door, "Aditi, come out, the ceremony is going to start". It was her divya bhabhi. She looked at Bharat pleadingly. Bharat stood up and left from the window he came from. She stood up and opened the door from her free hand. Divya looked at her hand and smiled. "bahot payaari hai, bagwaan kare ke tum dono ka rishta is mehndi ki tarah kile". And then she took Aditi to the ceremny that was going to be held downstairs.

Aww a kiss on the cheek and the cutie gift that Bharat gave!! My fav scene...practical!

Great update!! There is going to be more right!!?
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: act13

😲you r too great. such great wordings. u no this is not fair,😭 u say u don't have time yet u update this one but anyways, if u are willing too write a two shot. u r good so u betta cont. or else m gonna haunt u in ur dreams😆

thx so much jaanu, but why are u so shcked😆....m sorry I cudnt update my otha fics but I will updt for sure so plzz don give up on me yet....thx again for taking ur time and reading it. I hope u like this part aswell
Ciao
Jiya
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Seebz

Hey............u r back with this ff😲😆...hmmmm.......r u planning to ditch us again........😡........j/k😆😆...jiya di I m so happy to see u ...yaaaaaaar...🤗thx....i m happy to have friends like u who are aways here to support me. Sorry i ddint mean to ditch u guys, its jus i don have time.

Coming back to ff this is FANTABULOUS......yaar..ur ffs are magical......thx so much jaanu, u r giving me too much credit......u have told the story in a very simple yet impressive manner.....Jiya...u r too good....I wish something magical happens in the show too fans always wish but there wishes arent answered so eaily but now they are togetha and m happy cuz of that, so I hope them the best....I hope creatives read this ff soon😉....You took us on a magical journey yaar.it was so cute to see B proposing A yh i wanted to wrtie more but it was already too long so I got lazy.....and yea..atleats in ur ff Aditi got rid of Karan and yea make it two shot we want some romance happening between BA I did huns, I hope ur wish is granted ...I know that part would be as beautiful as this one..don b so sure, i don think that it will b dat great as I had to do this in a short amount of time...so cont soon....haan! 😊I did and hope u like it

Ciao
Jiya

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