(BA) FF 2shot: unspoken words pg3 pt2..complete

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Posted: 16 years ago
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okies guyz, well i was free cuz these are weekends, and my sis keep on talkin about this couple so i decided to rite a lil short ff, itz jus a one shot so hope u like it😳. and yh any criticizing is fine woth me cuz i m not that gud at riting anywayz...😉guyz i will cont. from when bharat proposed to aditi, so here it is.
Unspoken Words

As she heard those words, her legs gave up yet she stood high and strong. She was confused, very confused. Why was Bharat saying this to her? Why all of a sudden? Why was this happening to her? yes, Bharat was a nice man. he protected her, sheltered her when the whole world turned its back on her. He sheltered her from everyone who wanted to hurt her. he protected her when Karan was out to kill her. she was very grateful to him, but this was too sudden. Too unexpected. Eventhough the thought was confusing, she smiled faintly remembering all the sweet and short moments between them. It pained her when he told her not to interfere in his life or when he told her that wherever he goes or whatever he does is none of her business. Hearing those words that came out of her mouth. Looking at him, how his lips curl in a smile and the way he is looking at her. So intense, so full of life, so honest, so sincere, so beautiful and yet so expressive.
She was enjoying the moment, when suddenly it hit her that she is already married. what am I doing? Its a sin to even think about some other man when you already have a husband. She started backing up. She looked at him horrified, shocked with tears of anguish and pain clearly shown. She was disgusted with her self. She was so disgusted that she just continued on crying. For others it might have looked like she wanted to reject Bharat, yet for her, she was actually very happy to hear those unspoken words out of his mouth, that confession. She was happy and that's what scared her the most. She was married for god's sake but she felt so happy, so wanted, so important when he confessed to her. Right now, Aditi was broken, she was fighting, fighting the urge to hug him and say yes to his confession.
Bharat was scared, scared of getting rejected. He regretted confessing to her. why did he do that? Couldn't he wait until she felt something for him aswell. It pained him more to see the tears in her bright, chocolate color eyes. They were so expressive, too expressive. The tears clearly showed that she never expected that from him. It showed that she didn't want him like he wanted her. He was always neglected by everyone except his Divya bhabhi. Everyone always hurt him without thinking twice. They always betrayed him so he was used to it. But the only person who he wanted to be accepted from right now was Aditi yet she rejected him. She was the only person that he didn't wanted to get rejected from. He was broken. He never felt this way before for anyone, not even when he found out that his mom killey sagar and vidya. He clearly hated her and decided never to trust any women again and yet Aditi came into his life. She brought the rain of happiness. She brought change in his life. She completed him.
Bharat held back the tears that he so wanted to take out. he painfully sighed and looked at her. "I am sorry, yeh mujhe tumpe practice nahi karna chahiye tha" (I shouldn't have practiced this on you). Aditi looked confused. She lifted her gaze from the floor onto him. He was smiling sadly. "Ji! me kuch samjhi nahi" (huh? What do you mean?). He looked her. completely shielding his feeling from her. "wo actually, tum chali jaogi to tumhe miss karoonga, wo kya he na ke tumhari adat si ho gayi hai na, isiliye. (actually, i will miss you when you leave because I m used to you now so yeah). He paused in between to say the words in more ease "mera matlab tumhe hurt karna nahi tha, bas me to....I am so sorry" (I didn't mean to hurt you, I was just.....I am so sorry). He gave her his hand, and she took it. She got back up again with his help. Then they both smiled, and Bharat excused himself as he had some "business" to take care of.
As soon as Bharat left, Aditi's knees gave up. she couldn't stand up. She didn't have any strength left. Why was this happening to her? What had she done to deserve this? She should be happy that Bharat didn't have that kind of feelings for her but she was feeling restless with a broken heart. Bharat was just used to her as a friend yet she already started liking him in "that" way. she didn't know what to do, so she decided to just hide her feeling for now, and as soon as Karan goes to jail, she will move out of the house. As soon as Aditi wiped her tears, she heard a knock. When she lifted her head up and stood next to her cupboard pretending to work, she saw Bharat walking in. She stiffened a bit. He moved towards her and her heart skipped a beat. The closer he was coming, the louder her heart thumped. He stopped just some inches away from her. His expression clearly showing that he was happy. He had a huge smile on his face "guess what Aditi" he said. "ji?" (what?). "ohho, guess karne ko keh raha hoon" (god, I told you to guess). Aditi wandered what could be something that made a usual serious Bharat into a totally playful guy. "kya Amar bhaiya ghar a gaye?"(Is Amar bhaiya home?) He sighed giving up "ok chalo me hi tumhe bata detaa hoon" (OK fine i will just tell you). "Karan jail me gaya, wo mene kuch sabooth uske khilaaf ikhatta kiye the aur court me pesh kiya to use umar qed ho gayi" (Karan is in jail, i got some proves against him and presented in the court and so he got life imprisonment). She was shocked to hear this. Bharat looked at her, finding her expression rather shockingly. "aren't you happy, afterall this was our motive, to free you from him, wasn't it?" She looked up at him and nodded a smile, then she walked out of the room leaving a confused Bharat behind.
Nothing in this world, noone in this world could explain what Aditi was feeling right now. She was broken. Why, of all times, why now? why did Karan have to go to the jail right now? She wanted to live these last few days in happiness with Bharat but now when Karan is in jail, there's no point in living in that house anymore and besides Bharat will tell divya bhabhi the truth today anyways, then she will have no choice but to pack her bags and leave as they weren't going to allow her to stay in there house. She closed her eyes and let out a tear of lonliness. She knew this was going to happen then why? She knew that she should be happy that she is free from Karan but she couldn't help feeling sad.
On the other hand Bharat was sitting with his Divya bhabhi and the rest of the family, explaining whatever happened in Aditi's past and trying to convince them. At the end all agreed for her to stay in the house, not the same room but the same house. Soon after every one left for bed, but divya and Bharat stayed behind in the living room. Bharat sighed with relief. Divya sa w this and asked him "but what if she wants to leave this house?" Bharat tensed up on the question. He looked up at her horrified. Divya could tell that he hadn't thought of that possibility. she sighed, "did you even discuss this with her?" he nodded negatively. She smiled at him, " you love her very much, don't you?" he didn't even try to deny it. he was shocked but not enough to lie and so he asked, "Is it that obvious?". She chuckled at his question. Seeing her Bharat bhaiya in this state was very amusing for her. She replied, "daro mat, sab log jante huwe bhi kuch nahi kehenge tumse" (fear not, even knowing about this, no one have enough guts to say anything to you). He sighed again painfully, "I love her Divya bhabhi and so I proposed to her but she rejected me". Divya came forward and put her hand on his shoulder "Don't worry about that, I saw the love in her eyes, for you and only you. It might have felt like she rejected you but I think she was just hesitant because she is married to Karan. I think you should propose to her again after her divorce". He smiled at her and said, "abhi Aditi ka divorce ho jae to me bhi apni shaadi ke baare me sochoon. I will propose to that girl after the divorce is done" (Let this divorce be over, so I can think about my wedding as well).
Aditi was coming in the house when she heard bharat's last words "abhi Aditi ka divorce ho jae to me bhi apni shaadi ke baare me sochoon. I will propose to that girl after the divorce is done". She was shocked after hearing this. so he was just waiting for her divorce huh? so he wanted to get rid of her so he could marry some other chick. She was pissed, but what right did she have to be pissed? He didn't even consider her a friend enough to tell her about his plans? She was tired, tired from everything. she was going upstairs, completely indulge in her thoughts, when she felt a gaze piercing through her. A familiar gaze. She turned around to meet Bharat's and Divya's gaze. She smiled at them. "wo mein tori der ke liye bahar walk pe gai thi" (i just went out for a walk). They both looked at her and chickled at her nervousness. Bharat came forward, "Aditi don't worry about that but anyways tomorrow we have to go to the court for your divorce". He had that smile on his face. She turned around, "Thanks, I am very tired so I am going to bed, Good night". She zoomed on the stairs, not even waiting for their reply. She came in the bedroom and fell on her bed.So they are that happy to get rid of me? Even Divya bhabhi. Just because they found out that she is not his wife. So it is over huh? so finally tomorrow is my last day in this house. SHE closed her eyes and let out a tear of her misery.
Aditi woke up with a heavy head. All the crying from last night was giving her a headache. She quickly took some pills. She went and packed her bags, and then came downstairs where everyone was gathered for breakfast. Everyone looked at her questionably. Before anyone could ask anything, she said, "Thank you all for letting me stay in this house. you guys helped me when even my relatives couldn't or wouldn't. But i cant burden you anymore as you guys already have supported me enough, and plzz dont try to make me stay because i wont. Ihave already booked a room in a hotel nearby and will be shifting my stuff today. After i go to the court for my divorce, i will not come back, that's all i have to say". Everyone was shoked to hear this but they all ate in silent.
The time came for the court and Aditi got her divorce filed officially and was divorced from Karan. A feeling of relaxation overcame her. She looked at Bharat for the last time and walked out of the court room. Divya came forward, "So that's it? you are just going to let her walk off your life. The girl you dreamed about, the only girl you ever really cared about is leaving and you are just going to let that happen? You know Bharat, my brother is not that weak that he is going to let a girl rum his life for him, then why don't you show us what you really feel for the first time Bharat? Bharat she is leaving you, she will never come back again in your life. Bharat she walked in your life when the whole world walked out on you. Won't you go stop the only hope in your life?" As Bharat heard these words, he rushed to the door. As soon as he got out, he saw a crowd on the side walk. When he went there to see what was going on, he saw a girl in the same saaree as Aditi. His heart stopped working when a sudden realization hit him, it was Aditi. She had fainted. He went beside her. He touched her and was shocked to see that she was burning up, and then he did what any prince charming would do, he carried her (bridal style) to his car and took her to his house.
Aditi heard someone calling her name. She didn't wanted to wake up in the world without Bharat. She didn't want to face the world without him. She opened her eyes as soon as she realized whose voice is that. Yes, it was Bharat. She smiled weakly at him. he was holding her hand and calling her name with concern clearly shown in her eyes. As soon as she woke up, Bharat totally went off, "what the heck, Aditi. I just took my eyes off you for 5 minutes and you go get yourself in trouble again. Trouble is like your best friend. You know what! i don't care what you think anymore. You have to stay with us no matter what. I am just sick of this. you just told your decision even without consulting me, and now i ask, WHY????? I cant lose you Aditi, Not you too. you are too precious". Aditi never knew Bharat could get so mad. She was tired already, so she just admitted it, " you know you are the reason i want to leave." bharat was shocked, "why?is this related to the incident in the room? you know i dont mean that?" She looked at him hurt. "that's why. I just wish you would love me but when i came in the house yesterday, I heard u saying that you are just waiting for my divorce so u can marry this girl." he smiled at her, "O MY GOD, thats it, you wanted to leave because of that, oh god, I was talking about you with Divya bhabhi" she looked up at him with teary eyes "really?". he nodded "yes, it was you. when I confessed to you the first time, you were crying so I said that i was joking but Divya bhabhi told me that you were hesitant because of Karan and so I had hope again. I even bought you a ring to propose to you after you get divorced". he took out the link, "eventhough it is not exactly how I planned but, Aditi I LOVE YOU and I want to spend rest of my life with you. you showed me the meaning of life and so iwant to know more about life from you. WILL YOU MARRY ME?" Aditi smiled at him. she was overwhelmed with the emotions she was feeling right now. All she could do was nod a yes.
😃Okies guyz, that's it. well i hope u like it i just thought of it so i wrote it but anywayz do tell any concerns and don forget to review....and well if u guyz want i could make it two shot but it only depends on the amout of comments i get.😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
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😲you r too great. such great wordings. u no this is not fair,😭 u say u don't have time yet u update this one but anyways, if u are willing too write a two shot. u r good so u betta cont. or else m gonna haunt u in ur dreams😆

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey............u r back with this ff😲😆...hmmmm.......r u planning to ditch us again........😡........j/k😆😆...jiya di I m so happy to see u ...yaaaaaaar...🤗

Coming back to ff this is FANTABULOUS......yaar..ur ffs are magical......u have told the story in a very simple yet impressive manner.....Jiya...u r too good....I wish something magical happens in the show too....I hope creatives read this ff soon😉....You took us on a magical journey yaar.it was so cute to see B proposing A.....and yea..atleats in ur ff Aditi got rid of Karan and yea make it two shot we want some romance happening between BA ...I know that part would be as beautiful as this one.....so cont soon....haan! 😊
Edited by Seebz - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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@act13-I completely agree yaar...I myself have been waiting for her other ff. 2 b updates....but no clue........but here we see her....happy yaar......and this one is so cute..she should cont...hopefully she does....otherwise I'll join you for haunting her in her dreams....ok......😆
@act12-Jiya di I'm just kidding hopefully u wud be back to update other ffs as well as this one.....so good luck...waiting for our another treat!!.....so cont. sooooooon😉😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey great work... very well written.. keep up the good work.
Khakshan
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Posted: 16 years ago
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@act13-I completely agree yaar...I myself have been waiting for her other ff. 2 b updates....but no clue........but here we see her....happy yaar......and this one is so cute..she should cont...hopefully she does....otherwise I'll join you for haunting her in her dreams....ok......

@act12-Jiya di I'm just kidding hopefully u wud be back to update other ffs as well as this one.....so good luck...waiting for our another treat!!.....so cont. sooooooon

😆LOL😆
you r funny..........don worry, if she doesn't update then we both will dress up as lonely spirits and haunt her in her sweet/sour dreams. i m even planning to go to her house and torture her till she continues. J/K
Lastly, welcum to ANTI-JIYA club.😃.. didn't know that i will have a supporter. SO welcum aboard and dont forget your costume😛
Edited by act13 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Really nice...I really loved it
Geat work
Keep it upwith your wonderful work
Reena
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Posted: 16 years ago
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That was amazing!!! I wish it was continued...please do another soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Wow...that was soooo amazing...please, please, please continue!!!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Amazing.so many beautiful writers we have here.The stupid creatives needs to see these posts.ARGHHHHHHHHHHHH

Please continue dear.I love ot read more.

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