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Posted: 16 years ago
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Singh's house:-
Mahua says to Chandra..God knows wats happening in Banaras? Chandra..even we dont have any news of Di's..
Suddenly they hear the voice..kya khabar aayegi uski?..it is Aniket..he comes there and says nothing to worry about...whatever will happen, will happen for good..
Mahua says..you dont care about Di.?dont you feel if the result...?
Aniket..if the outcome is worst than im prepared for it, as i had waited for so many years...aakhir yeh ant (end) aa hi gaya..jo hona tha, so ho chuka hai..
Chandra and Mahua looks at him...
Banaras:-
Police squad is looking into Ganga river for SIndoora's body..Amar and Bharat are standing there....AMar comes to Bharat seeing him in thoughts.. A police officer ask from someone about thesearch..but he says no sir we havnt found the body yet...we are still looking into it.. (waise it is not Ganga..but an pond..cos ganga river flows..where as this water is shown stable..)
Bharatis tense hearing this..suddenly he goes to Inspector and says,''arrest me Inspector, i have shot Sindoora...Inspector is surprised and looks at him..Amar is also shocked..he goes towards Bharat and take him away from Inspector and ask him..Bharat wat ur doing this?..
Bharat..''Nahi Amar bhaiyya, what i have done..i should get the punishment for it....and he goes to inspector again and tells tht he ha shot Sindoora.. Inspector replies..that we havent found the dead body of Sindoora yet...and she was a fugitive..she escaped from law..police was after her..if we had seen her, we wudhv also shot her....yeh toh kismat ki baat hai..ki she died from ur hands....and you have shot her to save Amar and Divya..and why should i arrest you Mr.Bharat..i dont want your life to be wasted..to kill someone is a crime..but Sindoora is a fugitive..she is an enemy of society..and her murder is not a murder...ek samaj seva hai..you wont be arrested..but we will show this as an Police encounter..(acha jab bhootni bhaag rahi thi tab kyun nahi shoot kiya usko?..lambi lambi phenk rahe ho..shooting mein nishana hamesha galat lagaate hoge...Abhinav se training leo....aur bhaasan bhi dene lage..Bhootni ki aatma to nah guss gayi hai tumhare ander....šŸ˜†)
A policeman brings something and shows to the inspector..Bharat and Amar sees the ring and earrings of Sindoora's in his hands..and a piece of saree..
A sub-inspector to his officer,'sir there are crocodiles here and it is very difficult for a person to survive...and seeing this piece of saree proves tht they have eaten up body of Sindoora..he gives the piece of saree and ring to Bharat..
Iam sorry Mr.bharat this is all we got of Sindoora singh's..Bharat is in tears..
(Arre Jamoore tum sub-inspector nahi, circus ke retired bandar ho..Crocodiles aur Ganga mein?...Creatives ne sharab peekar script likhi hai..becharon ki bhootni jo mar gayi....isliye dimaag ne strike kar di hai..)
Singh's house:-
Aniket, Mahua, chandra and Aditi are in the hall..waiting for the phone call from bharat or Amar..Suddenly phone rings..Mahua ask Aditi to anser the call..Aditi is shock hearing from other side and phone slips from her hand..Mahua and Chandra asks from her wat happen?..Aditi sas tht bharat called and said tht SIndoora is no more..Mahua and chandra are in shock..Aniket closes his eyes and Aditi says further..tht Divya didi is returning today and Bharat and Amar will come back later..Mahua collapse on sofa..Chandra and Aditi hold her..she is crying..(Mahua aunty ko chakkar aate dekhkar mujhe bhi chakkar aane lage...wah kya acting ki hai...Anil Kumble ki Googly ki tarah ghoom kar sofa per ghir padi.😃..sofa bechaara.šŸ˜›)
Chandra and Diya and all others are waiting for Aar and Bharat...They enter in..Divya rushes towards Amar and ask him..whathappen?..any news?..he nods his head negatively..Mahua goes towards them and tells Bhagwaan ka lakh lak shukra hai ki you both are safe...Amar says...we couldnt save her...please forgive us...
Chandra to Amar..''Dont say like that...whatever happened..it was destined..mayb that's the wish of God..and there was no other way also...you both are safe..we dont want anything else...''
Aniket goes to Bharat and hugs him tightly...they both are in tears....
Aniket..''I knew it , that you will take right decision..''
Bharat..''are you sure Papa?.that i have taken right decision?..Amar is looking at him..and Bharat goes into his room...one can see pain in is eyes...of killing his own mother..
(Chandra ko sharam aa rahi hogi..sharamke maare paani ke glass mein suicide karne ki sochti hogi..Jab Aniket usko dekhta hai..)
Part 2 coming up..
Bharat's Room:-
Bharat is thinking about banaras incident...Divya comes into his room..
She says to him..why we are running away from the fact..and we all know wats going on in ur mind...and you have done this for us...to save us and ur not done anything wrong..why ur quiet?..say something..open up Bharat..we all know that what badi Maa did was wrong..we are all yours...
Bharat is going out..when Aniket comes with Aditi and tells him that nothing will calm his disturb mind..no sweet words can work now..but son, i just want to say that we are all with you...Bharat goes aways from there..Divya comes to Aditi and tells her to go and talk with him, as you are close to him..
and you have been away from this revenge thing..maybe he will listen to you and understand the situation..please go and talk with him..he needs a support..he is feeling guilty..Aditi goes to him..(Haan confused aatma tum jaao jaldi se..abhi mauka hai..creatives are giving you a chance..to start a new love story...Paneer ka pakode lekaar jaana..)šŸ˜†
Amar is in Sindoora's room..Divya comes there.. she asks him wat ur looking into it?..Amar...the story which was incomplete from last 22 years..is completed today atlast...she wont return ever again..she is gone now..she ruled so many years here..in this house..and we....now she wont be seen again..
Divya..''I am also sure..but im scare if i turn around, she might be standing there..i feel as if she is close to us.here..she can be seen even after going from here..i feel as if she is in this room..and they have shown sindoora sitting on rock chair..looking at Divya..she was dictator..even after her death..im still scared..(arre Divya aunty kyun bachon ko daraa rahi ho..mera dil dhak dhak kar raha hai..woh rocking chair abhi dance karna shuru kar degi..chhup raho..mujhe yaar updates likhni hain..please.waise hootni naam sahi diya hai usse..aaj prove ho gayašŸ˜†)
Amar says..''Divya i thought that we will have peace, once she is dead..but now im feeling lonely without her..wish we had not did all those things..Kaash woh badal jaati...unke paap ka ant to hona hi tha..
Divya..''kal unka chautha hai..''
(Arre Maamoo kutte ki dhum badalti hai kabhi, jo bhootni badlegi?..woh wapas aayegi..safed saree mein..)
Bharat's room:-
Bharat is standing in his room, Aditi enters..she ask him..wat ur thinking?...
Bharat..listen im not sad..or i have any pain..he started crying like a baby and says i killed my mother with these hands..i have killed my mom...and Aditi holds him..( Rote nahi mere bache, mere laal, dekho Aditi aayi hai na..woh bechari khud confused hai..tumhein bhi confused karegi abh..šŸ˜†)
Precap:-
All are sitting in hall in white dresses..Aniket says..Koi havan, koi shradh nahi hoga Sindoora singh ka....
Sorry for the delay..as no one post the updates.so i had to rush....if any error or mistakes in typing😊..im sorry for it..Waiting for ur comments and complains....thanks.
God Bless You All..
Set_raj...😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Closed this topic Mods..if it is already poste..
thanks
Raj.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thxx... first!!
but bharats lil comment at the end... wut if he helped her escape šŸ˜•.. it could have been a fake gun
iunno creatives can do anythin
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Well it is possible that Bharat might have shoot her with fake bullet and allow her to escape...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanks for the great update!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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great update
i like to read your comments
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi Set_raj...
I love your updates and special comments. Specially this comment cracked me up!!
Haan confused aatma tum jaao jaldi se..abhi mauka hai..creatives are giving you a chance..to start a new love story...Paneer ka pakode lekaar jaana..)
šŸ˜†
Thanks for the updates.
Purvi.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Great job. I loved your comments. I'm at work reading your comment and could not stop laughing. My co-worker asked me what is that I'm reading that makes me laugh. I made them read and they (american) started laughig after I explained what it means.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanks for the wonderful update
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Posted: 16 years ago
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I cannot belive that Sin is dead even if its for a little while. I hope barat does not become evil like his mom.
Thanks for the update

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