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Posted: 17 years ago
Recap: Sorry read the past update..kinda not much to summarize..and I had fun writing this..have fun reading it..
Chinu burst out laughing and Vidya turned so she fell off the bed. She yelped a bit. Sagar was still sleeping. Vidya got up and fixed herself. Then she looked at Chinu with a mad face. (Note that Chinu and Vidya are acting less of devar-bhabhi and more of brother-sister to each other)
Vidya: Owww!!! Aur kyun has rahe ho?
Chinu: TUm logo ko uthane. And the way u were sleeping bhabhi...ah hai all over dadda!!
Vidya: Chup karo! Varna main maroogi!
Chinu comes in and closes the door. He plops down on the chair. Vidya looks at him and then she looks at Sagar whose sleeping peacefully. She gets mad, so she takes a pillow and throws it at him really hard.
Sagar: OWW!!!!
Vidya: HMPH!!!
She stroms off to the bathroom and slams the door shut.
Sagar takes the pillow of his face and he looks at Chinu whose trying not to laugh.
Sagar: Was that u?
Chinu: No..that was ur lovely wife...
Sagar: What happened to her?
Chinu: She fell of the bed.
Sagar's jaw dropped.
Sagar: What???????????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Chinu: Well yea..
Sagar: And u didnt help her?
Chinu: Well u cant really help someone when they're falling!
Sagar: Ok well why is she mad at me?
Chinu: Becuse u didnt get up...
Sagar: What? How does she expect me---
Chinu: That's girls for u.
Sagar: Stop smiling so much, ur gonna have to go throught this soon enough.
Chinu: (smiles) Yea not for another 2 years.
Sagar: Hate u ur so lucky?
Vidya opens the door and sticks her head out.
Vidya: WHAT did u just say?
Sagar: Yea u heard me!
Then he looks over at the door to see who it was and his eyes widen.
Sagar: Vidya tum?
Vidya closes the door shut without replying. Sagar looks at Chinu who looks like he's about to fall outa his seat coz he's laughing.
Chinu: U two should go into some comedy show! (laughs)
Sagar: Shut up Chinu this is all ur fault.
Chinu: No its not ur the one who didnt get up.
Sagar: Now what do I do?
Chinu: Maybe its not really her, she's just getting moody.
Sagar: I never thought of that.
Chinu: Get her some chocolate..or something.. I dont know! But u dont want her to be mad.
Sagar: Are u kidding me what do u think I'm trying to do? Make her fat?
Vidya yells from inside, " U mite wanna shut ur big mouth before u say something stupider!"
Sagar looks at Chinu who's raising his eyebrows.
Chinu: Ooooo....!!!
Sagar throws the pilow at Chinu and he gets up outa bed and leaves the room to go to the other bathroom.
Chinu: Gosh husband wife are both the same..so moody!
Then he gets up to go to his room.
***(Half an hour later)
Vidya comes out of the bathroom wearing a hot pink salwar kameez. She towards the bed and sees Sagar sleeping. Shes mad at him so she goes over and snatches the blanket off of him.
Vidya: Get up sleepyhead! And go take a shower!
Sagar doesnt move so Vidya yells in his ear.
Sagar: What???!!
Vidya: GET UP!!!
Sagar: Fine fine gosh...girls are so moody!
Vidya: Shut up..and get lost!
Sagar: U shut up!
Vidya leaves to go downstairs. She's gonna eat, since everybody else already did.
Sagar heads to the shower.
***(Sagar comes downstairs, and Vidya is eating breakfast)
Sagar: Where is everbody?
Vidya: Papa's at the office, and Maa went to some puja and she's gonna be there all day. Oh and Chinu's watching TV. (Sagar glances over at Chinu, then back at Vidya. He sees that shes eating ice cream right out of the little bucket thing that they come in.)
Sagar: Ur eating ice cream...for breakfast?
Vidya looks over at him.
Vidya: Yea, do u have a problem with that?
Chinu yells from the couch, "Comedy Show!! Take my suggestion!!"
Vidya: SHUT UP!!!
Chinu: Stop having an additude!
Vidya: Well u know what? I'm not gonna!
Chinu: Oh u better!
Vidya: What if I dont?
Sagar: Both of u shut up! God! Ur acting like brother and sister or something.
Chinu: Technically,---
Sagar: I don't need that right now!
Chinu and Vidya: Yea yea..
Sagar: U two are impossible. (and he takes a seat at the table, opposite form Vidya)
Hearing that, Vidya smiles to herself and Chinu just changes the channel.
Sagar: Vidya, whats there to eat?
Vidya: Maa left food in the fridge.
Sagar: Arent u gonna get it for me?
Vidya: I dont feel like it.
Sagar: Fine!
He comes back with his food, and Chinu is getting up to go somewhere.
Vidya: Where are u going?
Chinu: To ur house?
Vidya: No ur not.
Chinu: Yes I am.
Vidya: Ok but no one is going to be there coz Shalu said her, bhaiyaa, and Maa are going out to lunch.
Chinu: Well plans are cancelled because Shalu told me that ur brother had to go somewhere and ur mom had to too.
Vidya: So Shalu's alone?
Chinu: Yea, I'm going to keep her company.
Vidya: Whoa there buddy, I dont think u wanna go there and then Bhaiyaa shows up. He'll kill u.
Sagar: U better trust her, her brother does look tough. I mean did u see the way he looked at me, even though he know we're married?
Vidya nods her head.
Vidya: I am not gonna let u go there and be all alone in the house with my sister.
Chinu: What??? U dont trust me?
Vidya: No I dont, and Bhaiyaa definetly won't.
Chinu's jaw drops.
Chinu: All u from this family..(mumbles)
He is walking to the stairs and he says to Sagar, " Tell ur wife that I am a better gut then u are!"
Sagar: What's that supposed to mean?
Chinu: I'm not a flirt!
Sagar: What? I'm not either!
Chinu: Yea right..
Vidya: But u can all her over if u want to..." (still very focused on her ice cream)
Chinu runs up the stairs hearing that.
Vidya smiles.
Sagar: Are u in a good mood now?
Vidya: Maybe...
Sagar: Oh really?
Vidya looked at him.
Vidya: Yea!!!!! Here I'm gonna do the dishes.
Vidya got up and was bout to grab his plate, but Sagar grabbed her hand. He put his arms around her waist and his head on shoulder.
Vidya: What r u doing this isnt out bedroom!
Sagar: So what no one is home!
Chinu: (yells from upstairs) I am and if u wanna be romantic go into ur room!
Sagar: Shut up and go call ur girlfriend!!
Chinu: She's not my girlfriend, she's my fiance!!
Sagar: WHATEVER!!!!
Vidya: Chodo na!
Sagar: Ok then..if u say so!
Vidya: (smiles and sways side to side, and so Sagar kinda moves with her)
Sagar: SO...we can let Chinu go to ur house...
Vidya: In your dreams we can..
Sagar: Vidya...ur sucha spoilsport.
Vidya turned around in his arms. She tapped his nose.
Vidya: Yes...I am!!
She gets outa his grip and goes to the kitchen. Sagar follows her and grabs her again.
Vidya: Aare! Tum phirse aagaye?
Sagar: Kyun? Nahi aoun? (come)
Vidya: Nahi..aisee koi baath nahi hai...
Sagar: Toh phir chalo!
Sagar picked Vidya up in his arms and walks to the stairs.
Vidya: Aah! Kya kar rahe ho??!!! Chinu is home u know!
Sagar: It's just Chinu! It's not like Maa and Dad are home.
Chinu: (yells from his room) U two better not be doing something that u wouldn't want me to see!!!
Sagar: It's nothing lke that!!
Vidya smacked his shoulder.
Vidya: Yes it is!
Chinu: SEE!! Eww dadda!!!
Sagar: Its not lke htat!! Ur bhabhi just happens to be the shy type!!
Chinu: Haha..r u kidding me!!??
Sagar: Do u want me to come there and hurt u?
No reply from Chinu and Sagar said, "scaredy cat!"
Vidya: Umm hello??!! Are we gonna stand here all day woth u holding me like this??
Sagar: If u want to..
Vidya: No!!!
Sagar: Well then..
Vidya: No.
Sagar: I didint even fin---
Vidya: No means no.
Sagar: Fine...
He puts Vidya down and Shalu walks in to the house.
Shalu: Hi Di!! Hi Jiju!! Where's---
Vidya: He's in his room.
Shalu: Ok thanks bye!!
Shalu runs upstairs to Chinu's bedroom. Vidya turns around looking at Sagar..who is staring at her.
Vidya: Ok well I have alot of work to do..so if u would excuse me...
Sagar: Work?
Vidya: Yea! Like the dishes..and the other "kitcheny stuff."
She turns around to leave, but Sagar grans her arm and he pulls it so Vidya falls back on to him, causing him to stumble and go a few steps back. Vidya's hands are both on his chest, and she's about to smack him wen Sagar grabs her hand.
Sagar: Don't even think about it.
Just then they heard Shalu whistle from upstairs. they both looked up.
Shalu: Aai Hai!!! Kya jodi hai? Hai na Chinu?
Chinu: (groans) (sarcastically says) I know rite!! (non-sarcastic) Tell me about it....
Vidya: Shalu, cna u tell ur boyfriend to kindly shut up?
Shalu hits Chinu on the head with her book.
Shalu: That's right Chinu! U heard Di!
Chinu: Ur on her side? What is it with people these days?
Shalu: U called me "people?" U didn't address me as ur girlfriend?
Chinu: Well I'm sorry!!
Shalu runs after him into Chinu's room, and they close the door.
Vidya laughs.
Vidya: Ur brother is miserable!
Sagar: Yea..I know.
Vidya then goes up the stairs to go to their room. She turns around, and she's all flexible as if shes drunk or something. She turns around and with her finger, tells Sagar to come.
Sagar puts on a "mischeiveous" smile, and follows.
Precap: Ooolala...
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Posted: 17 years ago
woah awesome update....please please can u update agen ?
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Posted: 17 years ago
that was soooooo funnny hahaha..oh lala...vidya is the moddy and ROMANTIC type..continue soon please
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Posted: 17 years ago
fantasticc job... i really lovedd it .. pleaseee updatee veryy soooon
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Posted: 17 years ago
Such a sweet update,keep it up.I love how Viday kinda moody.
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Posted: 17 years ago
Awww soooooooooooo cuuute...i loved it priyaaa! Naughty Divya...CONT SOOOOONNNNNNNNN
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Posted: 17 years ago
Recap: SV and CS are home alone, and S is following V to bedroom

Vidya fell down on the bed, and all of a sudden she was kinda hyper..like drunk basically..with out drinking. Sagar walked into the room, and closed the door. He sat down next to Vidya.
Sagar: Vidya what happened?
Vidya opened her eyes, and then she got up and put herself in his arms.
Vidya: Mmmmm...nothing...
Sagar: Vidya are u ok?
Vidya jumped up onto the bed. (standing)
Vidya: Of course I'm ok!! (laughs)
Sagar is ooking up at her confused.
Vidya: I'm in a dancing mood...
Sagar: Dancing?
Vidya: Yea! Come on join me!
Sagar: Vidya u can't dance!
Vidya: What???!!!
Sagar: I mean...in this condition..do u really think its a good idea?
Vidya: What condition? I don't know what ur talking about!
Sagar's jaw dropped. Vidya burst out laughing.
Vidya: Of course I know...(giggles)
Sagar walks over to his desk and picks up some files. Still looking through it, he says, "Honestly Vidya I dont know whats gotten into you."
Vidya grabs the file out of his hand and runs downstairs.
Sagar: Vidya stop! That's an important file!!
Vidya ran downstairs and she found a note on the counter. It was from Chinu.
Hey bhabhi and dadda,
We're going to the mall because Shalu needs to get some stuff.
Then we're gonna hang out..chill..u know. I'll drop Shalu off and then
I'll be home before Maa and Dad come come.

---Chinu & Shalu

Vidya put the note and file down on the counter. Then she sat down on the sofa. She felt really strange. She held her head. She laid down and closed her eyes. Sagar came down and he read the note. Then he saw Vidya sleeping on the sofa. He was confused as hell. She was acting so WEIRD. He walked over to the sofa and he shook her.
Sagar: Vidya??
Vidya didnt reply. Sagar turned her and saw her face. It was pale. She opened her eyes, and started coughing. She put her hand on her head again. She was feeling really dizzy. All of a sudden her eyes closed. Sagar's eyes widened.
Sagar: Vidya!!
He shook her a couple of times, but she didnt wake up. He called the doctor and scheduled an appointment saying that it was an emergency.
He picked Vidya up and took her to the car. He drove as fast as ever to the hospital.

**(Sagar is pacing in front of the room which Vidya is in)
Just then, the doctor comes out.
Sagar: How is she??!!
Doctor: It's very strange..I mean she's ok..but...
Sagar: But what?
Doctor: U said she was acting weird..
Sagar: Yea?
Doctor: Something was mixed in her food, that's why she was acting so strange. And beware, this can harm the baby.
Sagar: What?!?!?!
Doctor: What did she eat?
Sagar: All she had today was ice cream...Oh! But we went to her mom's yesterday for dinner.
Doctor: Well I dont think u can mix things in ice cream...but the food yesterday might have been something.
Sagar: (forgetting that) Can I take her home?
Doctor: Yes.

Sagar walks in to the room and sees Vidya sleeping.e goes and sits next to her bed. He holds her hand and kisses it. He runs his hand over her hair and then he looks out the window. He wonders who could have mixed something in her food. Then he looks out side the window. Vidya oens her eyes and looks at Sagar.
Vidya: Kya hua?
Sagar snaps out of his thoughts and looks at Vidya. He is about to tell her, but then he decides not to, thinking that it might cause stress on her and thats not good for the baby.
Sagar: Kuch nahi. Aab hum chalen?
Vidya: Han chalo.

**(Sagar and Vidya are in their bedroom, and its only 1:00 PM, so they are home alone)
Vidya is sleeping on the bed and Sagar is sitting next to her, ruffling her hair, and thinking about what the doctor had said..."mixed food....someone...mixed food...The words echo in his head."Someone mixed something in her food.." He gets mad and bangs his fist on his leg. Vidya opens her eyes and looks up at Sagar. He looks as if he's in dee thought. Vidya get up and ut her head on his shoulder. Sagar looks at her.
Sagar: Tum uth gai?
Vidya: Han..
Sagar leans his head on her head and puts his arm around her.
Vidya: Main dekh rahi hoon. Tum kuch soch rahe ho..hospital main bhi tum kuch soch rahe the..kya baat hai?
Sagar: Kuch nahi Vidya...buss woh office ka kaam..thoda stressful..
Vidya: Office? Office main toh papa zyada kaam sumbhalte hain.
Sagar: Yea Vidya lekin...
Vidya: Batou naa..please??
Sagar: Doctor ne kaha..ke tumare khane main kisine kuch milaya hai.
Vidya: Kya? Mera khane main? Nahi..shayad unko koi ghalat fami hai...
Sagar: No Vidya she was pretty sure.
Vidya: Aap parishaan mat hoi ye. (dont take too much stress)
Sagar: Aap? Itni formal kyun ho rahi ho?
Vidya: Han woh..ma ne kaha tha..une kaha ke aab main ladki nahi hoon..aurut hoon..I'm gonna be a mother..so I should address u formally...
Sagar: Haha.....mujhe nahi lagta that u can do that.
Vidya: Tum haso maat!!
Sagar: See? It hasnt even been 5 minutes and already u cant...
Vidya: Well woh to sub ke saamne..humare kumbre main...main formal nahi hone wali...
Sagar: Theek hai..as u wish..Vidya, mujhe bohut bada headache hai...
Vidya: Main duba de tee hoon sar.
Sagar: That would be great.
Sagar put his head in Vidya's lap and Vidya pressed his head...and Sagar kept wondering who could have mixed something in Vidya's food...

Precap: Heehee..im evil😈..keep thinking who mixed something in her food...

Hey guys sorry for the short boring update...I decided to add a twist.. hope ya like it
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Posted: 17 years ago
Wow! This suspense is killing me! And guess what! I'm going to be an annoying little kid and bother you for an update! So please please please please please update! Nahi toh mein naraz hojaongi! Please!
Now... about the update! It was fantastic as usual! I love the way Sagar is worried..hehehe..Continue now!
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Posted: 17 years ago
loved it..oh no who could have mixed something in her food?? continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
So much suspense yaar.Who could it be.

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