FF- Hatred, Dosti, Phir Pyar - updated -pt.1/pg.1

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This is my first FF, so plz comment and i hope u like it! (if u don't like it, just say so and i will try to make it better) i am just going to post the characters for now and if i get many comments i will start posting pt. 1 hopefully by tuesday or wednesday (it depends cuz i am moving)

Characters:

Sagar---Age 23, The obnoxious, good looking, popular guy at college who has a modern look. He always likes to look good. He hates studying and doesn't care about his grades. He likes to have a lot of attention. He also hates going to college. His grade averages are C's and D's, and sometimes if he is forced to study he may get a B+. He has a bit of an attitude at some points. He even likes to flirt with girls.

Divya---Age 22, The most beautiful and popular girl at college who also has a modern look. She is sweet, loyal and innocent but sometimes she can really angry if she is bothered. She is a fashion diva who always makes sure she looks pretty and loves to shop (lets just say she is a shopaholic). Unlike Sagar, she cares about her grades, but still hates studying...(she thinks its to boring). She is also interested in sports and is the team captain for the girls basketball team. Her grade averages are A's and B's. Her friends and her family call her divz. She has an attitude most of the time.

Bharat---Age 23, Sagar's cousin. He has a modern look, but he dresses a little different from Sagar. Sagar and him like to tease nerdy people in the college. Everyone thinks that he is almost as obnoxious and rude like Sagar, but he has a sweet and kind heart like Divya. He has a secret crush on Divya because of her beauty and innocent face, and never told anyone. Sagar and Bharat treat each other as good friends. His grade averages are always A's, but he gets B's sometimes.

Kamna---Age 20, Divya's younger sister. She is a cultured girl who has a classic and simple look. She is the nerdy type who cares about her grades and gets straight A's. After school or on her breaks, the first place on her earth she would be found 99.9% of the time is in the library or the book club. She is not interested in boys. Kamna is a bookworm, she likes to read comedy and hates horror. She is a sensitive girl, so in this case when Sagar and Bharat tease her as she is a nerd, she starts to cry, and Divya is unaware that Kamna gets teased by Sagar and Bharat. She doesn't have that many friends because she is obviously boring.

Sameer--Age 21, He is Sagar's younger brother and Bharat's cousin. He is a simple guy who is always innocent. But if he gets troubled and annoyed by Sagar and Bharat he could be a mischievous guy. He is a person who gets normal grades (he gets A's but hardly any B's). He likes to paint and draw, so most of the time he will be in his own world painting. At some point he gets stubborn when he wants everything his own way, but still he is very innocent. Sagar and Bharat always called him Samevil.

Roshni--Age 22, Divya's best friends. She is in the girls basketball team. She is also a shopaholic, but not as much as Divz. She has a modern and simple look, but she doesn't care if she looks perfect or not. Simplicity is the only word she would use for fashion. Roshni likes Bharat but she doesn't tell anybody too.

Maya--Age 22, Divya and Roshni's friend. (She is an antagonist who will be in the FF for some parts).

Simran--Age 20, Kamna's best friend and childhood friend. Simran is a bookworm too. (She is also an antagonist who will be in the FF for some parts).

Sachin--Age 23, Sagar and Bharat's best friends. He has a modern look to. (He is an antagonist who will be in the FF for some parts).

Ajay--Age 21, Sameer's best friends, has a modern look and like to have a lot of attention just like Sagar. (He is an antagonist who will be in the FF for some parts).

*Sagar and Sameer's mom will be referred as SSM, and their dad will be referred as SSD
*Vidya and Kamna's mom will be referred as VKM, and their dad will be referred as VKD

anyways i hope u like!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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i am excited to read this!!! cont. soon plz=D sounds very interesting
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sounds interesting. cant wait to read it😊
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this sounds really intersting!! i cant wait to read it!!
please update soon!!
im priya btw
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plz update soon
cant wait
i luv it
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seems really interesting
awesome description of the characters =)
now i just cant wait to read the updates..
soo continue soon =)
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Sounds really nice
Please continue soon. Can wait to read your updates
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Posted: 17 years ago
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i'll cont. soon... like i said before, i will hopefully post pt.1 by tuesday or wednesday (it depends cuz i am moving)!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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I am just going write a small update because ppl want me to start and anyways i might not be able to write a update for a few days so here it is. hope u like it

Note: there maybe some english slang cuz anywhere besides my school work/homework i write slang most of the time, so srry if i write slang! :D

~Part 1~ [this first part is dedicated 2 mushtari]

It's 7 in the morning and Divz is on her way to college with her younger sis...Kamna. It was the first day of college and everybody couldn't wait to see there old friends after the holidays. Sagar and Divya knew each other since they were in gr.3. They hated each other at a extent that they couldn't stand each other. On the other hand, Kamna and Sameer were classmates since elementary school but they didn't talk to each other. Divya and Kamna came of the car and entered the college. As usual Kamna went straight to the library and started to read because there was still time till the classes started. Divya was going to go and talk to her best friends Roshni went she bumped into Sagar....

Divya: Hey r u blind? can't u see... (she fell and she didn't see sagar yet) when she looked up, she saw sagar and got up.

Sagar: I am not the blind one, ur the one who is blind u idiot.

Sagar and Divya started arguing. They were burning and serving each other. Roshni and Bharat noticed that and when to go and stop their daily arguments. Roshni grabbed Divya to the side and said: stop ur big talks with that dweeb and lets go to class before we r late. Bharat just slapped Sagar on the head and said: ur mad, lets go to class..

Sagar: ok, u go and i'll catch-up with Sachin!

Instead of going to their classes, Sagar and Sachin both went to the movies as usual. Sagar and Sachin would take any chance just to miss class. When classes had started Bharat was looking for Sagar and Sachin, but they didnt reach the class. Bharat already knew they wouldn't make it. He always knew wut the 2 were upto. When it was lunch break, Sagar and Sachin came back and were assigned detention because they missed their classes.

When both of them went to detention, they apparently saw Divya in their too because when Divya was having her basketball practice she accidentally hit a girl with a basketball giving her a injury. So the coach assigned her detention cuz the coach thought divya did it "intentionally." However, when Sagar saw Divya in detention he started laughing at her. Divya just stared and him once and then went back to her homework. Sagar was teasing her even more. Divya had enough so she just threw her pencil at Sagar. They they started to fight. The fight caused so much commotion, so a teacher and the principal came and announced their decision about SD.

Principal: Sagar annd Divya, when you both have classes, you both have to sit together and share the same textbooks cuz you both never get along

Precap: SD irritate each other.

Here is my boring and lame update!! I really suck at writing stuff. the only thing i like about my FF so far are the character...lol 😆
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Edited by 1000february - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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very cute!!! I LOVE IT...lol they hate each other lmao!!! thats soo wicked! cont. soon

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