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Posted: 17 years ago
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This is the first time i have ever written a fan fiction, so hope u guys enjoy. im not very good at Hindi so im wrtting in English

INTRODUCTION

Vidya - (23) in third yr of college . She is into music and Art. Sagar's best friend.

Sagar - (23) in third yr of college. He's into Art . Vidya's best friend

Tussar - (23) in second yr of college . Sagar's cousin brother.

Tara - (23) in second yr of college. Vidya's sister
.Vidya's parents adopted her.



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Posted: 17 years ago
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sounds great, cant wait till you update...i also happy you're writing it in english, lol because i don't know that much hindi ..teehee ☺️
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when will you update..i cant wait lol
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Posted: 17 years ago
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interesting start....i like it=D cont soon plz:D
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Posted: 17 years ago
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i will update tommorow....the internet connection is very low..😭
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awwwwwwww..i was really looking forward to it...😒....ok then make it a LONG update teehee😛
Edited by mushtari - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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gr8 intro!!! i cant wait to read ur ff!!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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great intro =D
cant wait to read more
continue ssoon =D
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 1

A guy is sleeping on his back. Suddenly swings open. His cousin brother Tussar walked in with a glass of water . He pours the glass of water on the person who is sleeping. He opens one eye.
Tussar - My dear bro , do you have any idea how late it is? SAGAR wake up..
Sagar - Of course I know what time it is . It's 5:08. I don't want to go to college.
His phone rang. A girls voice came.
Girl - Sagar, would you mind getting up a little soon ? We are not going to college today...
Sagar - Vidya , that's what i was saying. umn but why are not going?
Vidya - No more questions . get ready and come up to my house, its a suprise ..... She was giggling so hard that she dropped her mobile
Sagar quickly got ready and got his car out and went to Vidya's house.

In Vidya's house

The doorbell rang
Vidya - Thats Sagar...I will go and get it
She goes over to the door . She got a suprise.
It wasn't Sagar . It was her dad. He was holding a baby.(I LOVE BABIES😆)
Vd - Come on Vidya , hold him. Hes not that heavy
Vidya - By the way who's son is this and why are you holding him?
Vd - Please keep the question for later. I am very tired . Oh and vidya some people will be coming over.
Vidya - But dad , Sagar is coming over . How can I take care of him when mom and Tara are not home
Just as Vidya's dad closed the door the doorbell rang.
Vidya - I will get it . Dad you go up ....
Vidya opened the door. It was sagar ... and he had big smile on his face. Sagar got a shock by seeing the baby
Sagar - Vidya , when did you get pregnant and have a baby , this baby looks about 6 months...So this is the suprise
Vidya - No, this is not the suprise .. and this not my baby .. Dad just brought him and him to me to take care of him.
Sagar - Your dad is pretty funny , By the way what was the suprise?
Vidya - I was gonna take you out to a treat since today is Tara's birthday. But the suprise is ruined now that dad came and I'm all alone to look after the baby
Sagar - I dunno....When I came he was with his friend .....Maybe they went out .....So what are you supposed to do to the baby??
Vidya - What do you mean by you , arnt you going to help me....I'm not so good with babies
Suddenly the baby started to cry. Vidya and Sagar had no idea what to do.
Vidya - Sagar can you go and buy some diapers , feeding bottle , baby food , cloths for him.
Sagar - Yeah , what does the baby eat?? He doesn't look like as if he has teeth
Sagar left without waiting for a reply. Vidya started to panic....She didnt know how to change the diaper.....
Vidya - Why did you come with dad , oh else I won't be stuck with you here
In half an hour Sagar came through the door with his both hands full
Vidya - Oh my god , who told you to buy this many things?
Sagar - I just thought of buying all this for him. After all he is my son.....



Edited by krishna-531 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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I am so sorry if the update was not long enough or if it was boring ...... It may have been because my hand is bleeding terribly

Edited by krishna-531 - 17 years ago

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