FF-Chup Chup Ke Pyar Hogya(3)Last Update pg 54 - Page 51

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*Snif…Snif…Snif…* This is my… last… update… Hold on a second. I'm going to go cry. *One hour later* *Wipes tears* *Stiffens up* Ok guys! Let's here it for my last update. I hope you all enjoy it. Btw It's contuining from the picnic. Well actually from the night.

Later that night: Divya was cleaning in the kitchen and Amar was doing something in his room. Divya finished up her cleaning and took her medicine. She closed the kichten windows and checked every window and door in the house to make sure it was closed. At last she headed for her room. She opened the door and closed it locking all the kundis and what not. She entered her room through the little hallway and she was stunned. The room was decorated with drapes, flowers, candles, and it had this soothing aroma. She noticed a box on her bed. She walked over and picked it up. It was beautifully wrapped so she sat down and with the uttermost care unwrapped it. Inside she found a red colored saree along with some jewelry. She was surprised. She picked up the saree and underneath it was a note. She picked up the note and it read:

"Ye saree pan kar tum aik aur dafa meri dulhan banjao. Mein apni dulhan ka intazar karoonga. Tumhara Amar."

She closed the note and put it back in the box. She looked around the room and Amar as nowhere to be found. So she decided to do as the note said. She put the box away and placed her jewelry on her vanity. She then went to the bathroom and came out changed into the saree. She put her other clothes away. She went back to the vanity and sat down putting her jewelry on. Once she was done she let her hair down and brushed it. After she was done she looked herself in the mirror and sighed. Here she was dressed as a dulhan but her dulha was no where to be found. Then all of a sudden the lights turned off. However the room wasn't dark because of the candles that were lit. She stood up and walked to her bed. She sat down on the edge and closed her eyes. Out of nowhere she felt cold hands on her back. She quickly opened her eyes but couldn't see anything as something no wait someone was blocking her view. Her face felt this body before and it could only be one person. Amar. And as predicted it was him. He moved back and looked at her. She realized he was standing close to her as he was wrapping her pallu on her head. She stood up and walked forward to him. She opened her mouth to say something but he put is hand on her mouth shushing her. He took both her hands and wrapped them in his hands.

Amar: Divya… Tum janti ho ke mein tumse kitna pyar karta hoon. Ye pyar humari shaadi se pehle ka pyaar hai leken shaadi ke bad ye pyar aur bi gara hogya. Hum dono aik dosre ke itne kareeb hoge ke aaj hum dono ki karebi ki waja se aik bacha is duniye mein janam lega. Isle aaj mein tumse aik vaada karta hoon aur aik vaada chata hoon. Mein tumse vaada karta hoon ke humesha mein tumhara saat rahoonga. Humesha tumhare kadam se kadam mila kar chaloonga. Humesha tumhari baat par yakeen karoonga. Humesha tume apne se upar mokam par rakoonga. Humesha tume kush rakoonga. Humesha tumhare kareeba rahoonga. Humesha tume jab bi zaroorat pare toh tumhare saat milkar apne baache ki parvarish karoonga. Aur humesha humesha tumse bohut bohut bohut bohut bohut bohut bohut bohut bohut bohut bohut bohut bohut bohut bohut bohut bohut pyaar karoonga. Shaid is se zyaada bi. Aur aaj mein tumse aik aur vaada karta hoon. Mein vaada karta hoon ke tumhare saat jeeonga aur tumhare saat maroonga. Divya's eyes were tearing up. She blinked and the tears fell down. Amar didn't see this as his head was down.

Amar: Divya ab mein tumse aik vaada chata hoon ke tum mere saat doogi in vaadon ko nibhane mein. Dogi na saat. Vaada?

Divya: Vaada. Amar noticed a change in her tone so he looked up. He saw she was crying. He quickly let go her hands and moved up to wipe her tears but before he could she embraced him tight. She digged her face in his chest and cried away. Amar knew she was crying because she was touched by his words so he wrapped his arms around her. Her pallu fell off her head.

Amar: I love you Divya. I love you with all my heart. Mein ab tumhare behagar jee nahi sakta.

Divya: Mein bi nahi jee sakti. I love you too Amar… With that she let go of him and he wiped her tears. He pulled her closer and kissed her forehead holding her face. He moved down to kiss her lips but Divya shly turned around. That still didn't stop Amar. He turned her around again and pecked her cheek. That melted her but not enough to let him kiss her. So he pecked the other cheek. That definitely melted her and Amar could see it in her eyes. So he pecked her lips lightly which then turned into a passionate kiss. Divya was so relaxed with Amar close to her that she placed her hands on his shoulder and gripped them tighter every time she felt him moving away. Amar was surprised to see her like this as every time Divya would be the one to release from the kiss but this time she was the one asking for more. He couldn't help but fulfill her wish. And with that kiss ten months pass by. And you definitely know what has happened.

Ten months later: Divya and Amar now have a beautifully baby girl whom they named Sanvi. Sanvi has turned exactly one month old so Amar decided to come home early from work today. Chinu scolded him for going to work after the baby was born but Amar couldn't help it as he became more busy. It wasn't his fault he made the list of the top ten best business men him being number 4. When Divya had received the news of him making the list she threw him a surprise party and at the party Amar gave a speech giving all the credit to Divya as he only did this for her. His life had become perfect. He had a beautiful wife whom he loved more than his own life, he was the father of a cute little baby girl, he owned one the world's largest leading industries, and the only girl he lived for loved him back with all her heart. So Amar was in a meeting waiting patiently for it to be over. His baby girl had turned exactly one month old and at home everyone was waiting for him so they could celebrate. Last time he missed half of Divya's baby shower and she was so upset. He didn't want to repeat that same mistake so every now and then he was texting Divya. At last the meeting was over and he quickly ran out of the office and into his car. He received a text message from Divya that she can't get ready unless he comes home since he has to decide what she should wear. Amar smiled and quickly started his car and drove as fast as he could of course obeying the speed limit. At last he reached home and parked his car. He ran inside only to hear his daughter crying in his maasi's arms.

Amar: Kya huwa shalu maasi? Sanvi ro kyun rai hai? Aur Divya kidar hai?

Shalu: Divya beta shower le ri hai. Woh to tumhara intazar kari ri ti leken mene use kaha ke kamas kam shower le lo. Woh Sanvi ko sola kar bathroom mein gai ti leken phir achanak Sanvi ki ankehen koli aur woh rone lagi toh isle mein use idar le aye.

Amar: Oh acha. Toh laye mein Sanvi ko upar le jata hoon. Ye mere paas hogi toh shaid Divya muhje na dante. Shalu laughed and gave Sanvi to Amar which automatically made her stop crying.

Shalu: Wow. Baap ki ghod mein akar chup hojati hai. Amar smiled and tickled her forcing her to laugh.

Shalu: Vaise aaj Divya ka mood acha hai.

Amar: Really? Shukar hai. He smiled and carried Sanvi upstairs. When he went inside his room Divya was still taking a shower. He smiled and sat down on the bed. Sanvi had fallen asleep so he placed her in the middle of the bed surrounding her with pillows to guard her. He then took off his blazer and through it on the sofa. He also took off his shirt as he was hot. He grabbed a glass of water but it down. It was Divya's routine to give him water every day when he came home from work so he didn't want to ruin it. He just sat down on the sofa but then relazied Divya had laid out sarees on the bed because most likely she didn't know which one to choose. So he went by the sarees and chose one. He put the rest away. Divya came out of the shower in her bathrobe unknown of the fact that Amar was there. Amar smiled looking at her. When she noticed he was there through the reflection in her mirror she quickly turned around and smiled huge. She ran into his arms hugging him. (Ok so I'll break down the usual routine for Divya when Amar comes home: First a hug, then a kiss, then I missed you, and then a glass of water.) So she hugged him and then released. Then she kissed him.

Divya: I missed you! But she quickly realized Sanvi was sleeping so she lowered her tone.

Divya: I missed you.

Amar: So did I. But I missed your kisses more than you. She hit him on his chest.

Divya: Besharam.

Amar: Woh toh hoon. Divya then walked over to the water and handed the glass to Amar actually making him drink. Once she was done with that she noticed Amar had already placed out he clothes for her. So she picked them up, thanked him, and went inside the bath to change. She came back and put her jewelry on. She looked back at Amar and noticed he was topless. He was siting on the bed besides Sani with his eyes closed and his head resting on the headboard. She walked over and then noticed that Sanvi had gripped Amar's finger in her little hand. She smiled. But she knew they had to get ready. Sanvi was already awake and looking cute. So to wake Amar up she sat in his lap and gave him a long kiss. Of course that woke him up. He fixed himself up and noticed his wife in his lap. He smiled as Divya got up and took Sanvi away. Amar went to ger ready while Divya dressed Sanvi. Amar came out dressed to see the two most beautiful women in his life dressed and waiting for him.

Later on: Everybody was enoying themselves. Amar brought out a cake for everyone to cut. Amar and Divya cut the cake holding Sanvi's hand. They each fed each other and then looked into each other's eyes.

Both: The perfect life with the perfect person. And with that they kissed.

Epligoue: Amar and Divya are celebrating their first anniversary. Divya is dressed as a bride and Amar is a dulha. They are standing next to each other when he little baby comes crawling over yelling.

Girl: Papa! Mama! Both look down and see her a little to hyper.

Both: Sanvi! Amar picks her up and holds her.

Amar: How's the most beautiful girl in my life. The one I love the most. He kisses her on the cheek. Divya feels upset and walks away but Amar grabs her hand and pulls her back. Shalu comes and take Sanvi. Amar pulls Divya into his arms.

Amar: Ehh Divya… Tum humesha meri zindagi mein sabse khoobsarat larki rahogi jise mein sabse zydada pyar karta hoon. Divya smiles and places her hands on his shoulder.

Divya: Janti hoon. Isle toh tumse itna pyar karta hoon. I love you.

Amar: I love you too. And they kiss passionately vowing to celebrate many more anniversaries to come.

Ok guys this is it. I am very touched at the moment that this is over. I still can't believe it…Now I would like to thank everyone here. Hmm let's see if I can get the names right: (oh and order doesn't matter) Ayesha, Narmeen, Priya, Ramsha1990, Charri, Sonali, Mushtari, Anikita, Ravjot, Tahmina, ummm I can't seem to remember more as these are the people who read it regularly. I am very sorry If I missed out on anybody. So I would like to say Thank you for reading my FF. It enjoyable writing it and seeing your wonderful comments after. You guys really made my day with your comments and I just don't have words to thank you. So just keep smiling, take care. I'll still be in touch with everyone as this doesn't mean I'm leaving IF. I will stay on IF as I usually do. So thank you So much! And this the end to my FanFic Chup Chup Ke Pyar Hogya.

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Posted: 17 years ago
FIRST

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OMG..moomoo its OVER....

One of the most GREATEST FF's in this section on IF and i have to say you did a FABULOUS job..your writing has surely improved after each and every update..which is obviously a good thing...thank you for a few dedications you have made to me in the past..i will surely miss this FF....

lots of love

Mushtari -- your FFs # 1 FAN!!!!! lol😊
Edited by mushtari - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: mushtari

FIRST

edit---

OMG..moomoo its OVER....

One of the most GREATEST FF's in this section on IF and i have to say you did a FABULOUS job..your writing has surely improved after each and every update..which is obviously a good thing...thank you for a few dedications you have made to me in the past..i will surely miss this FF....

lots of love

Mushtari -- your FFs # 1 FAN!!!!! lol😊

😭 Yes it's over... 😭 I'm so touched. 😳Thank you so much. Curse school for making me end this. 😛 Thanks you so much. Yes you are defintely my number one fan! 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: bmtd11

😭 Yes it's over... 😭 I'm so touched. 😳Thank you so much. Curse school for making me end this. 😛 Thanks you so much. Yes you are defintely my number one fan! 😳



and will always be!! lol..yesh curse school maybe because of it..i wont be able to update daily..plus fasting month 😕
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Posted: 17 years ago
awww dat ws such a touchin update!! n unfortunately das the end of ur ff....bt i rili enjoyed ur ff n hope u cont to write many more ffs........
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Posted: 17 years ago
Ok, I'm goin to write a long comment now.
Make sure that you have something to drink and eat cause this can be very long and boring...😆 Just let me cry finish... *sniff sniff... achoo!!! Sniff sniff* Finish crying and sneazing...😆
Moomoo, I don't know what to say.
You started this FF 10th May 2008. From that day till now I have read every part. This FF will always be in my heart. This FF means a lot for me. I got to know you trough it. I got to know how amazing you are, how beautiful and Fantastic person you are. This FF is different from other. You didn't use Sindoora at all (as I remember). You used other people who you imagined, and we imagined after reading. Like Muddassar, Kareena and so on...
I can't believe this was the end. It have been the most fantastic time of my life. You updatet every day (except when u were busy) and sometimes 4 updates in a day! And that was soooooooooooo good!!!!
If I had a bad day at school or if I were in bad mood, your updates always made me cheer up. Your besharmi.. hehe.. I have to say that I loved the besharmi.😆 It was so fun to read it! But I blushed a loooot...😆 You are the most besharam person I have met (except of my cousin, lolz) and I love your besharmi!!!!
Sagar, Vidya and Amar
Amar, Divya and Sanvi
Fanatastic story!!!!! I loved both of the storys! You had such an unique story!
Hehe, I still remember when Sagar said to Vidya to pull up your shirt...😆 It was so funny! And I remember when Vidya coudn't consentrate on the exam cause she was thinking about Sagar all the time...😆
I have to say you are a very talented person! You are a absoloutely fantastic and awesome person and a very very very very TALENTED and FANTASTIC WRITER!
I loved the last part! Thanks so much for making it extra loooong and thanks for the epilogue! I loooooooooooooooooved it!!!!!
Thanks for writing this FF. Thanks for being my best friend. Thanks for everything. I'm going to miss this FF like crazyyyy! I'm never going to forget this!!
Wish you all good luck on school and in life!
When you will have good time, so please start a new FF.
Love you a loooooooooooooooooooooot!!!!<3333 My Sweeeetuuuu!!<3333333333333
Love Charri<3
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Posted: 17 years ago
^^ Shit man that was a long comment...😆
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: mushtari



and will always be!! lol..yesh curse school maybe because of it..i wont be able to update daily..plus fasting month 😕

😃 Ramadan is ok cuz its only one month but school...ukh... 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: spicy_tikka

awww dat ws such a touchin update!! n unfortunately das the end of ur ff....bt i rili enjoyed ur ff n hope u cont to write many more ffs........

Thanks! 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: charri7878

Ok, I'm goin to write a long comment now.

Make sure that you have something to drink and eat cause this can be very long and boring...😆 Just let me cry finish... *sniff sniff... achoo!!! Sniff sniff* Finish crying and sneazing...😆 It's ok i enjoy long comments. 😳
Moomoo, I don't know what to say.
You started this FF 10th May 2008. From that day till now I have read every part. This FF will always be in my heart. This FF means a lot for me. I got to know you trough it. I got to know how amazing you are, how beautiful and Fantastic person you are. This FF is different from other. You didn't use Sindoora at all (as I remember). You used other people who you imagined, and we imagined after reading. Like Muddassar, Kareena and so on... I would never use Sindoora. Yea all those imagined persons were actually people I watche in other shows. I'm amazing, beautiful and fantastic? Aww I'm touched! Thank you! 😳
I can't believe this was the end. It have been the most fantastic time of my life. You updatet every day (except when u were busy) and sometimes 4 updates in a day! And that was soooooooooooo good!!!! I can't believe that I updated everyday and four updates... Wow...
If I had a bad day at school or if I were in bad mood, your updates always made me cheer up. Your besharmi.. hehe.. I have to say that I loved the besharmi.😆 It was so fun to read it! But I blushed a loooot...😆 You are the most besharam person I have met (except of my cousin, lolz) and I love your besharmi!!!! Aww I'm glad my FF made you feel better. You know I realized how besharam I was through this ff. Otherwise before that I never and I mean never uttered a besharam word out of my mouth. 😳
Sagar, Vidya and Amar
Amar, Divya and Sanvi
Fanatastic story!!!!! I loved both of the storys! You had such an unique story!
Hehe, I still remember when Sagar said to Vidya to pull up your shirt...😆 It was so funny! And I remember when Vidya coudn't consentrate on the exam cause she was thinking about Sagar all the time...😆 Thanks you! Aww I'm glad you remember such old moments. 😳
I have to say you are a very talented person! You are a absoloutely fantastic and awesome person and a very very very very TALENTED and FANTASTIC WRITER! Thank you soooooooooo much! 😳
I loved the last part! Thanks so much for making it extra loooong and thanks for the epilogue! I loooooooooooooooooved it!!!!! You'r e welcome! And thank you!
Thanks for writing this FF. Thanks for being my best friend. Thanks for everything. I'm going to miss this FF like crazyyyy! I'm never going to forget this!! Thank you for reading it and putting up with my boring updates! I'm going to miss your comments like crazy! 😛
Wish you all good luck on school and in life! I also wish you luck in school and life. 😳
When you will have good time, so please start a new FF. I will defintely try...
Love you a loooooooooooooooooooooot!!!!<3333 My Sweeeetuuuu!!<3333333333333 Love you too my Cherry Berry! 😳
Love Charri<3

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