FF- Pehali Nazaar Kaafi Thi! Part 39, Page 48

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Pehali Nazaar Kaafi Thi!

Characters-

Singh's

Sagar- just like our Sagar in Dulhaan, age 23, third year college.

Chinu- Sagar's Bro, age 20, first year college.

Maya- Sagar's mom

Jai- Sagar's dad.

Sindoora- Sagar's sis. Age 26. Married to Aniket.

Kapoor's

Vidya- just like Divya in Dulhaan. Age 22. Second year college.

Shalu- Vidya's sis. Age 19. Starting college next year.

Pooja- Vidya's mom.

Aditya- Vidya's dad.

Additional characters will be introduced as needed!

Please leave your comments and tell me if I should continue! 😳

Index
Part 1, Page 1
Part 2, Page 1
Part 3, Page 2
Part 4, Page 2
Part 5, Page 4
Part 6, Page 6
Part 7, Page 7
Part 8, Page 9
Part 9, Page 12
Part 10, Page 14
Part 11, Page 15
Part 12. Page 16
Part 13, Page 17
Part 14, Page 18
Part 15, Page 19
Part 16, Page 20
Part 17, Page 21
Part 18, Page 21
Part 19, Page 22
Part 20, Page 22
Part 21, Page 24
Part 22, Page 24
Part 23, Page 25
Part 24, Page 26
Part 25, Page 27
Part 26, Page 28
Part 27, Page 29
Part 28, Page 30
Part 29, Page 31
Part 30, Page 32
Part 31, Page 33
Part 32, Page 33
Part 33, Page 33
Part 34, Page 34
Part 35, Page 35
Part 36, Page 35
NOTE, Page 37
Part 37, Page 38
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Part 39, Page 48
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 1-
Sagars' House
Sagar(S)- No mom, I am not goint to marry anyone! Look at me! I'm only 23!
Maya(M)- yes you are! We have already told the Kapoor's that you will marry their daughter!
S- But mom! I'm in college! College boys don't get married! Besides, I don't even know this "Shalu" girl you are talking about! So jsut forget it!
M- First of all, I married your father in high school, so you are old enough. And second of all, you'll like Shalu when you \'ll get to know her bettter! She's a very sweet girl!
Maya seemd to inssist, so Sagar finally gave in. After all, Sagar was a mamma's boy. He couldn't say no to her at all.
S- Fine! But if I don't like her, I'm not marrying any other girl, let alone "Shalu", for another five years!
He said "Shalu" in a wierd tone, and left, leaving Maya all alone, laughing at his son's childness.
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Sagar is in his room, muttering about how he doesn't want to marry anyone.
Chinu, his little borther, comes in and starts to make fun of him.
Chinu(C)- Haha! Dada's getting married! Dada's getting married!
S- oh just shut up, you little twerp! You don't know how bad it is, jsut wait for your turn!
C- Haha! MY turn?! You're the one who's getting married to a nineteen-year-old!! Ha! She's even younger than me!
Sagar looked up shocked. No one had told him she was 19!
S- NINETEEN!!!?? Who told you!?
C- I heard mom talking to dad. She said we're going to see her in two days. Errrr. where does she live? (he treid to recall the naem of the place) Oh! I rememeber! Benaras!!
With that, Chinu got up and left, leaving poor Sagar alone.
Please tell me if you liekd it, and if I should continue! If I don't recieve comments, I won't continue! Thanks!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome start hun =)
sounds interesting.....
continue soon =)
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Posted: 17 years ago
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that was GREAT, its really good, please continuee😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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yah nice yar it's good keep on writing.Mind blowing.Thanks!⭐️
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Posted: 17 years ago
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okay, thanks guys! next update will be tommarrow!! i'm glad u like it!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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I just changed the name...but I still don't liek it/ any ideas of a better name for this FF?
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome ff.
omg sagar is getting married! i love his reaction to this😆
can't wait to read ur next update😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Oh what the heck! I'll do the next update right now!
Part 2-
Recap: Sagar is being forced by his mother to go see Shalu for marriage.
Sagar's House-
Everyoen was at the dinner table, eating. Everyone except Sagar. Maya notices and asks Chinu where Sagar is. Just then Sagar shows up and says that he is not hungry in a cold voice.
Jai(Sagar's Dad)(J)- Fine, but if you don't eat now, you won't get food for the rest of the day. You know the rules!
S(yells)- I DON'T CARE!! Just leave me alone!
Sagar leaves and Jai get mad!
Jai- What has gotten into this kid! Whenever he used to brign his girlfriends home, we never objected! And now, when it's time to get married, he's acting as cold as a beast!!
Maya- Calm down! (Maya couldn't tolerate any ill speakings of his son, even if he was at fault). Just let him be!
Chinu- Yes dad, calm down. Dada's jsut mad because you didn't ask him if he wanted to get married or not. I would be mad too!
Scene ends there.
Shalu's House(In Benaras)-
Shalu's mom, Pooja, was getting ready for the 'ladke walay' to come see her daughter. Shalu was very excited, and was running all around the place ever since Pooja told her that they were coming.
Shalu(Sha)- Mom! When is Sagar coming? She blushes as she says Saar's name.
Pooja- Don't worry, beta. Sagar wil lcome. Ever since I've talked about Sagar, All you can think of is him! Go inside and relax. There is still another week until he comes! By the looks of it , you seem that you want to get away from me!
Sha- OMG!! Another week! How long must I wait! Wasn't 3 hours and 42 minutes enough? And ofcourse I'm excited. I'M GOIGN TO GET MARRIED! What girl wouldn't be excited!
Pooja laughed. Her dauther was acting liek a little child by counting the hours and minutes. She was glad that Shalu was happy! Suddenly, the phone rang.
Sha- I'll get it! (picks up the phone) Hello?
Voice- Today is your last day to live! You are going to die!
Shalu gets scared.
Sha- Who are you? What do you want?
Voice- I am your secret admirer! I have loved you ever since ninth standard. But I know taht you do not love me, so I must kill you!
Sha- Who are you?
Pooja asks Shalu who it is, and Shalu says it's some guy she doesn't know. She gives the phoen to Pooja.
Pooja- Hello? Who are you?
Vidya(she stopped faking the boy voice)- Hi Ma! How are you!
Pooja tells Shalu taht it was Vidya and Shalu grabs the phone from her!
Sha- VIDYA DI!! You scared! me!!
V(laughing)- Oh really, that was the point, dummy! What's up?
Sha- Di!! I'm getting married!!
V(still laughing)- Oh come on! Really, waht's up?
Sha- seriously, I'm getting married! Here talk to Mom.
Pooja takes the phone from Shalu.
P- Hi Vidya beta, hwo are you?
V- I'm fine, Ma! Is Shalu really getting married?
P- Ha, ladke walay dekhnay aray hain!
V- Oh really? When?
P- Next week! So tell me, when are you coming home? It feels so lonely without you?
V- OMG!! NEXT WEEK!! I'm coming home next week!!
P- Wow, that's great!! So see you next week!!
V- Bye! Take care!
Pooja tells Shalu taht Vidya is comign home just in time to see Sagar. Shalu gets excited and runs upstairs.
Precap- Sagar yells at Chinu.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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yay!! update!!
that was awesome! ahaha vidya's so funny. pretending to be a guy and scaring shalu😆
plz continue soon

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