a new ff ....ye doorian....

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Posted: 14 years ago
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hello everyone....
as many of u know,,,that i have written sum of the ff on rrr as ye dooriyan .....now i was thinking of putting it here also....but i was little confused abt onething that shd i first put the older ones here or directly frm the new ones which i will write soon....
pls tell me ur opinion.....😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I think you should put the ff from the start so people can understand whats happened so far just my point of view
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thnx shabz.....😊
happy to see ur response..
Edited by luvrr - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Happy to its just cause i miss your awesome writing and want to read your FF again
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Posted: 14 years ago
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LOST KEYS!!!!!!
Nowadays dm n santu r too busy in there works,,want to spend some tym with each other but not able to do so'.
Scene start with sanraj room''..

Dm sleeping on bed......Santu in hurry cum out of bathroom,,,looks at clock 8'0clock!!!
Santu::aaj to bahut late ho gai! Taking jewellery frm almirah n simultaneously murmuring'..
Abhi to pooja bhi karni,,baa ki dawaii,,sab ka brkfast,,,maalik ki chaaye n thn '''looks at maalik n shouts '..maalik aap abhi tak so rahe '..its already 8am''.jaldi uthie''..
Dm turns n slowly gets up n sits on bed n does 1st work of his day'.look at santu!
Santi in yellow sari,,,,open wet hairs on 1 side,,,,standing near the dressing n wearing earing'''lookking gorgeous!!!
Suddenly she realises that dm is awake n staring at her'.she turns toward dm n says
Santu::bus bhi kijie,,,,kab tak aise hi dekhte rahege????((stop it'for how long u will keep staring at me???))
Dm:::::jab tak meri aankhe band nahi ho jati!!!!((till my eyes get closed)))
Santu,,,giving annoying expression:::maa'''lik???
Dm smiles,,extend his arm toward her n says:::eye santudii,,,idhaar aa''.((come here))
Santu also gives a cute smile n walk towards him'n thn extends her arm so that there hands (palms)are abt to touch''.
Voice comes:::maalkin,,maalkin'.
Santu get back'...n thn campakali cums
Ck::maalkin aapko baa kabse bula rahi h((baa is asking for u))
Santu::ha,,bus aahi rahi thi ck'.((just cuming ck))
She goes'.at door she turns''' look at dm
Santu::sorry'.have to go(( say..only by expression))
Dm:::::its ok,,I understands((say..only by expression))

Next scene'''
Dm getting ready in hurry'wearing red kurta'(lokkking drooling!!!!)'closing button of kurta'his phone rings'.picks phone'
Dm::haa saumil bhai'.file'no I dnt have'.I have given to u yesterday'..let me check'''.
Searching file''
Santu enters with tray of tea'..
dm :::ha ha saumil bahi,,file to mere paas hi hai'.I m just cuming'will reach in 5 minutes'

Santu::maalik,,tea'
Dm :::santu chaye rehne de,,,I m very late..so I have to leave(wearing his watch,,putting mobile in pocket )
Santu::bt maalik,,if u'l nt have ur tea thn u'l have headache..it will take jst 2 minutes'pls drink'..
Dm takes cup frm santu hand::::::;ok,,give
Santu:::maalik ..u didn't close ur kurta button
Dm::oh,,forgot!!!I will do it..
Santu::maalik,,let me do it'.u drink ur tea
Dm gives a big smile
Santu comes near him n abt to touch his kurta''
Voice comes'papa,,,papa
Santu gets back''n thn hiten enters
Hiten::papa u r nt ready,,,we r getting late!!!make it fast
Dm::ya,,I m ready'lets move((closing his kurta button))
Dm leaves'at door he turns,,look at santu
Dm:::sorry'.have to go((say..only by expression))
Santu::its ok,,I understands((say..only by expression))
PRECAP:::
Santu::maalik,,,actually I m not getting the almirah keys
Dm::what???
Santu::ya,,,jst nw I had them,,I took jewelry frm almirah n thn''..
Dm ::n thn what??????/how can u do that'.come on santu u r maalikn of this home n u doesn't even take care of keys'.
.(((in full anger,,,that's why said santu,,not santuri!!)))
Edited by luvrr - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I think you need to put this in the FF section cause the mods will close the topic other wise not sure but all other sanraj ff have been moved.

Beautiful writing please post soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thnx shabz....
even i was thinking same...
but dont know much rules of here....so..........
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Posted: 14 years ago
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WOW nidhi nice SANRAJ scceen. thanks for ur writing. it will be better if you post on ff....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thnx to everyone for linking it n hitting the like button.....
as of rule,,,i m not going to put the next one here....
putting here the link page ....
pls do read it n hit the like button if u lyk...n post ur comment.....
thnx dears...😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey thnx to everyone for liking my ff.....
posted the third part of lost keys in ff section.....link page is....
pls do read it n hit the like button if u lyk...n post ur comment.....
thnx dears...😊


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