Ek pyaar Bhari dastan (FF) updated pg 35 - Page 21

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Posted: 15 years ago
wah ayushi kamaal kardiya - amzaing - and its about time moti got punsihment
down with moti!!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Fabulous Ayushi....

I hope DM will understand that his santuri is a great woman who only knows to share her unconditional love to others despite of their ill treatment..
I am glad that DM saw the otherside of Moti and hope he will torture her to death...
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Posted: 15 years ago
Wow Ayushi DM finally realised what his Bandini went through for keeping his family united ... Moti should be counting her days at M- Mansion ... looking forward to the surprise honeymoon where will it be Pawagadh or Antwerp😊 wait forgot to mention she can have her sari finally fixed after 10 yrs😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi Aayushi I was reading ur episodes before I joined this forum. I liked each and every episode but did not post a comment. Now I am sure dt I will post my comment regularly. I liked the episodes so much I can't tell u. I have read till episode 15 and will read the rest soon. Your story line is very interesting. Good work. Keep it up.
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Posted: 15 years ago
wowwwwwwwww wat a scene yaar ............ i m hpy tat nw dm is gonna punish moti........
watng fr ur nxt scen
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Posted: 15 years ago
good stuff. looking forward to read more
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: cuckoo_chand

Hi Aayushi I was reading ur episodes before I joined this forum. I liked each and every episode but did not post a comment. Now I am sure dt I will post my comment regularly. I liked the episodes so much I can't tell u. I have read till episode 15 and will read the rest soon. Your story line is very interesting. Good work. Keep it up.



Thanks for reading my ff's............I am glad that you liked it and hopefully you wont be disappointed in pyaar bhari dastan world................😃................this is for you 🤗...............stay tuned for some more drama, emotions and action.....


@ Thanks everyone for enjoying my current track ........this is for you all🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
EPISODE 17
In the morning he calls everyone in the main hall. Everyone is puzzled and asked him about this gathering. He replies that whatever happened in this house is not right and he is here to punish the real culprit. He explains how Arjan's murder took place and how santu took the blame. So he Say I am punishing Birwa because of her attitude towards Santu. So My punishment is that Birwa will go to boarding school and then straight to Anterwerp.She can only come back to this house when she servers 10 years of her punishment the same way how santu did.

Now coming down to Moti ben. Who says nananka mai, kaisay…DM says STOP…….you are her biggest enemy in this house. You have not only commited one crime but many. First you treated Santu like a doormat and then you took off her cloths……..hearing this Moti is stunned and doesn't know what to say and he continues to say that because of you we have lost our prem ki nishani………Therefore, your punishment is that you will also suffer like Santu………Therefore from now on You will live in storeroom and you will eat what you used to feed Santu.

Santu tried to interfair but DM stops her and says you will also get punishment for not telling me about this whole incident. Your punishment is that you will now take the responisbility of this house and he asks Moti to Hand Santu the house keys. DM says that your will have to fulfill this responsibility and take care of my Parents. Baa is happy and so does DM.

Moti is now shifting her cloths to storeroom and ask champakali to clean the storeroom. But DM refuses and says you do not have any connection with this house. SO, you want to get something done you have to do it by yourself.

Its night time and Khemi comes to storeroom and meets moti….She says I have brought you this food and you don't have to eat that stale food. She says I am with you and we should teach this santudi a lesson. Both of them joins their hand. There is a evil smile.

Back in DM's room Santu is setting on her bed and in thinking mode. Just then DM comes there with a glass of juice and ask santudi if she has taken her medicine. Santu says she forgot about it. The we see DM gettting mad at Santudi for being careless towards her health. He gives her medicine and juice. He says I am very proud to have you as a wife.

He asks her to close her eyes as he has got a surprise for her………. .she hesistently does and then DM shows her two tickets…………she is surprised and ask what is this maalik?

DM: aareee Dufford this is our honeymoon ticket…….we are going to pavagard tomorrow morning……..

Santu: Par maalik………..ghar me sab ko kaisay chord kar ja sakte hai ( how can we leave family members behind)

DM: To tu kya chati hai, we should take them to our honeymoon ………..tu kitni becharam hai…..( you want to take them in your honeymoon you are such a naughty)……….

Santu smiles and says fine maalik………I will go with you.........She holds DM's hand in her hands and move closer to him and says Maalik I love you a lot………..I can bear anything in life but I cannot bear someone else with you………DM then says so you think I will find someone at this age? Both of them laugh at it and then DM is shown packing bags………Santu offered help but DM says you just sit here and watch how I do packing………….

DM then ask santu which saree does she want to take to pavagard……She says green and red maalik……..DM says…….areee dufford change your colour style………I think Pink will look good on you so after the packing DM gives her a good night kiss on her forehead and turns off the light and goes to sleep.

NEXT SCENE…..

Santu wakes up early and looks at DM and his cute face. She says how much I have bothered you and yet you are still in love with me. I love you more then my life and I will always be with you. She place a kiss on his cheeks and says maalik……..subha ho gayee pavagard nai jana hai?

DM then wakes up and says yes and asks her to get ready and in a mean time he will sleep for 5 more minutes……..so santu goes to the washroom and after a while comes out of it and finds that DM is not on his bed……..she searched the room but he is not there………she becomes puzzled and was about to open the door when DM comes from behind and grabs her from waist……santu is all shocked and shy………..

DM then gifts her red roses and says this is for you and I want you to always smile like these flowers and spead fragnence of your love in my life……..Santu then hugs him and says I love you maalik but I think it would be better if you get ready and do these kinds of romantic talk when we are in pavagard………..

PRECAP: Santu and Dm are enjoying the whole natural areas of pavagard ............there is some romantic talk between two.......So finally much awaited suhaagraat is there....................BUT WHO IS THIS MYSTRIOUS ENTRY.......HMMM😲

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Posted: 15 years ago
Very nice one Aysushi...
Sanraj declaring their love so cute..
arre ayushi do not torture us like DV yeh Kabbab mein Hadi kaun Hai
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Posted: 15 years ago
Yaar anna......Pyaaar me twist be to hote hai..........thora gum thori khusi..................i am sure you guys will llike this track............trust me..............thanks for being royal reader of my ff...........this is for you🤗

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