Ek pyaar Bhari dastan (FF) updated pg 35 - Page 19

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@ crystal............glad you liked it................i will be posting it soon

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awesome yaar nice 1 just waiting for ur next 1
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aayushi

this is called DHARAMPUR KI MALKIN.

loved it aayushi waiting for the next one post it soon yaaar

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damn gud writing yaar kp gng............
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Hawww..

Do post the next part soon :D
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Ayushi_01

@ Tunisian...............i am glad that you liked it very much...........🤗



Ayushi u can call me manel 😉🤗
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PLEASE POST SOON BEAUTIFUL FF HOPE MOTI IS GIVING A HARSH DAND
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Posted: 15 years ago
EPISODE 16

Next scene 6

Santu enters her room and sits beside Dm and noticed a wound on Dm's finger. Santu gets the first aid kit from the drawer and starts cleaning it. Just then DM also wakes up and asks her what is she doing and why his head feel so light now? Santu says I will answer your question, but before that you have to tell me what happened to your finger? Dm says that I was making dinner for you last night and got a cut. Santu becomes even more sad and says I am sorry maalik and she cleans the wound and applies ointment on it. Santu then ask Champakali to get the food for DM. Now because DM has bandage on his fingers Santu is feeding him now. Both are looking at each-other lovingly. Then Santu wipes DM's face with her pallu and gives him good night kiss and ask him to go to sleep. He says he cannot go to sleep and want her presence there.

Dm: eh Santudi mera ek kaam to kar!!!

Santu: What do you want maalik?

DM: Jara yaha ek machar hai use to hata de ( there is a mosquito near my neck can you please remove it?)

Santu was about to go close to him and he grabs her from her waist and both have an eye lock and Santu's mouth comes closer to DM's. Santu is taking a long breath and her heart is beating really fast and hot misty breath of Santu smelled like fresh ocean breeze. He comes even closer and places a soft kiss on her lips. Santu for a minute is lost in her dreams. She cannot believe what has just happened. But feels really shy and says maalik its late now and I think you should go to sleep.

Santu: Aap ko yaad hai ki kal kya din hai?

DM: tuhje ka lagta hai, mu dufford hu tara jeve (do you think I am dufford like you?). I know that your movie is releasing tomorrow.

Santu: Maalik aap chalo gaye mere saath? ( will you go with me maalik tomorrow)

DM: No I won't go????what kind of question is this? Ofcourse I will come with you. Afterall I am your Husband na.

NEXT SCENE 7

Both Santudi and DM are getting ready in the morning and DM presents Santu with a nice gown and ask her to wear it. On the other hand Santu gifts DM a nice party outfit. Both are looking very nice.

Then we see both of them walking down the staircase and baa bless them and puts kala tika on santu and says bless you beta. Looking at them both moti and khemi are jelouse and so does birwa. Till now on one has able to figure out where they are going and why are they wearing the cloths they are wearing.

So at the premier of their movie Mr. Bajaj is standing at the gate and receives Santu and DM and asks them to enter the hall as he has one more guest to reviece. So both santu and Dm are sitting on VIP chairs and then we see Bajaj and one of the chief guest also sitting with them. Mr. bajaj then goes on the stage and says this is a very special movie and the main lead of this movie is Santu mahiwanshi and Male lead is Myself Bajaj. Hope you will enjoy this movie.

And the movie starts.

The movie starts with a big entry and this guy comes out of her car. He is very rich and very stubborn. He is exact copy of How DM was before santu came to his life and changed him completely. His name is Dhananjay Mittal. He is a business man and has several companies of him around the globe. He has a sister in his house, his mom and dad and 5 children. Looking at the story Dm is shocked as he can related this guy to himself. Back to the scene, One day Dhananjay is sitting in his office and some workers came to him and invite him to a village wedding. Dhananjay agreees and says that he will only come for a while and saying that he asks the worker to leave.

He thinks how can I go to a small wedding? But if I don't know then my consignment wont be finished in time. So in the evening he goes to the wedding and finds that the guy who was suppose to marry this girl named Samara has not come. He finds out about it and gets to know that the guy has refused to marry her . Dhananjay then calls one of his secetary to find out where this guy is. So he finds out the his rivival Singhania has bought this guy and now playing cheap tricks to Dhananjay.

All villagers are sad and they decides that they wont be able to come to work till this matter is resolved. Dhananjay then decides if they don't get back to work then his multi-billion dollar consignment will go to his rivival. So he says that he will marry Samara only to a condition that they will be back in the factory to finish the consignment. Everyone agrees and we see Samara getting married to Dhananjay.

Flash back????DM is lost in thought and remembring the time when he married Santu?.

Then we see Samara back to Dhananajay mansion and is being treated like a doormat. The scene progressed with Dhananjay's sister taking Samara's cloths off thinking that she has stollen precious earings. Then we see this benbaa treating santu really badly. The scene now shifts when one of Dhananjay's friends visits him and when they leave samara also leaves the house. How Benbaa takes all the gifts that Dhananjay's friends has given her and gives her cloths that no one would wear it. Then the scene shifts to how Dhananjay and samara came closer and their second marriage. The Arjan death track was also shown and in a different way. But this story had a happy ending with Both Samara and Dhanajay blessed with twins.

Basically, each and every incident which happened in Santu's life is shown in this movie. Seeing this whole movie not only the audience was upset but So does DM. DM is becoming emotional throught the movie.

So once the movie is completed Mr. Bajaj calls Santu on stage and Presents her with the DVD of the move. After the ceremony there was a party for the press and promotes of this movie named " Bandini". Then we see DM and Santudi walking down the red carpit and all the photographers taking their pictures. DM is sad and trying to put pieces together and says to himself that my santudi has suffered a lot and now its time for the culprits to face punishment.

One of the reporter ask her if this story is related to her real life story. She looks at DM and DM has fade smile and looks at santudi. Then santudi says no, this is not related to my real life story. In fact My husband loves me a lot and besides the storys are for people to enjoy and I don't see myself in this situation. If I would have been in this situation then I wouldn't have been where I am now.

So at the party a bottle of Champian is opened and Mr. bajaj gives one glass to santudi and one to DM. But both of them refuses as none of them drink and Mr bajaj says that its tradition. So hesitantly, both DM and Santu takes this toast.

So once the party is over we see DM and Santu in the car and finally they reach their home. Both Santu and DM goes back to their room as they are very tired. Santu changes and goes to bed as she is feeling very tired. DM on the other hand changes and sit on the bed and is in thinking mode. So after a while he also goes to bed.

PRECAP: DM Punishes moti...........Khemi and moti joins hand..................sweet time between sanraj and they are going for a surprised honeymoon..

Please leave your comments and I appoloize for any spelling errors.......

Ayushi

Edited by Ayushi_01 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Wov Ayushi,
I loved it. I am happy to know that Now DM knows everthing what ever happened to his sweet santudi.
finally SANRAJ had been to pavaghad, so its party time for us
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Posted: 15 years ago

@ VIdya di🤗..........Glad you liked it........I know our DM knows everything and how moti treated his priyea santudi............Dont worry most twists and turns coming in this ff..........

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