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rpmenon

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Posted: 15 years ago

#221

This story made me laugh and blush,both Sanju.Because,its a whole new SanRaj..Santu checking mails,and DM asking her out to the pizza hut.Wow,its so different.Liked the new touch..

Terrace romance was sooo 😳 Good job,dear.

So,when are you writing again? 😉

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Posted: 15 years ago

#222

Aaaaw glad you liked it Di..🤗 SanRaj in the 21st Century something id love to see...Santu and her nakra's and being more assertive with DM..😳

I need to see a bit more SanRaj on-screen before i get back to writing as my previous FF is incomplete😆

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Posted: 15 years ago

#223

Time People and Circumstances may change but my love will never..

Its been some time since I updated my ff but im back with some more parts and hope you all enjoy them..😊

Quick Recap: Santu has been released from jail and is now living with a friend that she met in jail and her son Aman. Maulik meets with an accident after drink driving and Kanji leaves a letter which reveals that Arjan was in fact Kanji and Taru's son and Maulik is SubDhar's son..😉instead of Maulik, Hiten reads the letter
Maulik returns home and tells Taru that she is only his phuii not mother as her main priority is money not her son, and calls Santu Maa..
Santu gets a job and Aman realises slowly he is falling in love with Santu..😲 .. The last epi ended with Maulik seeing Santu in the restaurant with Gayu and shocked and confused as she is looking totally different..

Episode 12

Maulik confused as to what he's seen.. He ponders over the image of the woman whom he's just seen.. How could it be Santu?? She wore sarees and if she had been released she would have come to the M-Mansion for sure..
Maulik looked over every split second to look at the woman's face and each time recognised her as Santu..

Gayu and Santu talked away about Gayu's family and marriage.. Gayu had been arrested and convicted for the murder of her husband but later it was proven that his death was caused by some other causes and Gayu was released on the same day as Santu..

Santu picks up the glass but the glass falls on her and soaks her suit with water, seeing Santu get up Maulik finds the perfect opportunity to find out exactly who she is..

Maulik follows Santu to the washroom and calls out to her.. 'Maa'...

Santu stands frozen in her footsteps, shocked and tearful she turns around and sees Maulik standing..

Maulik: Maa?? Is it really you??

Santu unsure whether to believe what she is seeing turns around and begins to walk away... Maulik calls after and asks her again.. knowing that this would be the best thing she looks Maulik coldly and stares into his face...

Santu: Maa?? Are you crazy?? I'm almost the same age as you.. I think you've got the wrong person..
Maulik: Santu Maa.. I know its you..

Santu once again shocked that Maulik calling her maa, but stays strong and tells Maulik to go as she does not know who he is..

Maulik: Please Maa, don't say that!! I know I did wrong in the past and somewhere i was to fault that Arjanbhai died but please don't turn away now.. Please Maa..
Santu: Look, I think you have me mixed up with someone else..
Maulik: Please Maa..

Santu turns to walk out of the restaurant as she begins to feel her eyes fill up and doesn't want to weaken in front of Maulik..

Maulik: Please Maa.. You don't know what's happened.. You don't know how much things have changed.. You don't know what its like.. You don't know what's wrong with Papa??

Santu without looking back ran out of the restaurant and phoned Gayu to tell her to come and meet her in the car..

The drive home, Santu sat silently hearing Maulik's words echoing in her ears.. She looked out the window and watched as the fast paced life seemed so unnatural, she felt suffocated and was glad when the car jolted to a halt outside Gayu's house, without conversation she went into her room and remembered Maulik's tearful face, the words as he had put them..

She wondered what had happened to DM?? What changes was it that Maulik was speaking of.. How did Maulik change so much..

She looked at her phone and dialed the M-Mansion number twice and cut it off twice, she didn't have the courage to speak to anyone, she felt weak but wanted answers.. She rang and let the phone go through..

The phone rang and someone answered...she listened to the voice and heard a heavy voice.. She knew who it was..

Moti: Hellooo

Santu lost her voice and couldn't speak.

Moti: Helloo

Santu couldn't muster the courage to speak..

Moti: Don't you have tongue?? Idiots phone and don't even speak...
She slammed the phone down and Santu looked at her phone screen and knew she had to be strong just to hear DM's voice once..

She rang again... This time Khemi answered and Santu although scared and worried knew what she had to do..

Khemi: Hello
Santu changing her voice slightly; Hello, Can I speak with Mr Dharamraj Mayavanshi??
Khemi: Sorry, noone of that name lives here..
Santu: Can i ask who is speaking??
Khemi: I am Mrs Khemi Arjan Mayavanshi..
Santu: Yes, Im asking if I can speak to Mr Dharamraj Mayavanshi
Khemi: And I told you, he doesn't live here.. He's dead!!

Santu dropped her phone in disbelief, she had only seen him a couple of days back, it was him.. She had clearly seen his face and he was alive.. So how could he be dead??

Precap: Aman tells him mum he loves Santu and wants to marry her...😲 😲Gayu tells Aman to forget about it.. Aman confronts Santu and wants to know the truth..

Enjoy...x

Edited by SanRajDeewani - 15 years ago