FF: Final Episode.. and Note on Page 80.. - Page 17

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Posted: 15 years ago
Then Santu will be in trouble Anna,
Wait for some time, till santu makes DM heart strong then she can go infront of him with that dress
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Posted: 15 years ago
I still prefer the Sari wali Santu-I agree with DM she really looks so pretty in Sari....
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Posted: 15 years ago

Anu, only we (DM & I) have the rights to say like that

U don't have any rights on her OK? understood?
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: vrsharma

Anu, only we (DM & I) have the rights to say like that

U don't have any rights on her OK? understood?

Dm has that but from where did you get the rights?😉😛
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Posted: 15 years ago

Hey anu,

Santu is mine (Of course after DM only)
She is my little kid
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Posted: 15 years ago

Glad you all enjoyed it..🤗

Santu will return to her sarees but i wanted Maulik to be in a bit of pickle trying to solve the hamchakal riddle..
@Anu-i also prefer Santu in sarees.. the chudidaar was for the ff dramatic purposes only..😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
oh that is awsome one ........loved ^_^
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Posted: 15 years ago
Aaaw.. Glad you liked it Sara..

My mind is a bit fizzled as to what to write next.. 😆..
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Posted: 15 years ago

*The Valentine Special*

This is the story of two people madly in love with one another.. They smile, laugh, cry and argue like all ordinary couples but there love is what shines above all.. The story is about DM.. DM as in Dharamraj Mayavanshi😳 He was once a diamond merchent in the town of Dharampur, where he lives alone with his one and only love Santu..
Santu is the sweet innocent girl who feel in love with her maalik.. She faced many struggles and troubles before her love could meet its destination and now she is happy as she has all she needs.. DM.. ❤️
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Chapter 1
Santu woke up and looked around the room.. the first rays of the morning were beginning to appear and she knew it was the sign for her to get her chores down..
She had a quick shower and slipped into her favourite joggers and went down in the mandir that was situated at the front of the house..
She did her pooja and prayed to Mata Tulsi as she had done everyday, she walked in a put the kettle on for tea and whilst the water boiled, she took out the crockery from the dishwasher, placing them away in their kitchen drawers, she vaccumed and put the laundry in the washing machine and put the washed ones out to dry..
She made tea and toast for her and DM.. she ate hers and placed DM's upon a tray with a single red rose as she always did..
Santu carried the tray up and placed it upon the table next to the bed.. She attempted to awake him but he was fussy as a teenager..
Santu: Get up DM... come on.. you have to go to work..
DM:Five more minutes Babe!!
Santu: Like every morning.. You'll be late again..
DM: I won't just five more minutes..
Santu: When i tell you to go to sleep you don't listen, instead you carry on talking..😆
DM: You are such a nag!! You are supposed to be my wife but every morning you act like ny mom!!
Santu:That's because your such a big baby..
Santu frustrated threw her cushion at his face and sat on the rocking chair that DM insisted on having...
DM awoke and walked over to Santu.. He knelt down beside her and began to make jokes but she wasn't in the mood..
DM: Why did the chicken cross the road??
Silence....
DM:Because he wanted to cross the road..
Hahaha.. DM laughed at his own pathetic, silly joke..
DM:I'll see how long you don't talk to me..
Santu ignored him and picked up the newspaper.. which had a post it note attached saying sorry..
She looked at DM angrily but with a small smile forming...
Santu: So you think you are smart huh??
DM: Its habit jaaneman.. I do it everyday and everyay we argue then you pick up the paper and find the note attached..
DM gets up and goes to get ready for work.. Santu takes out her clothes aswell as DM's..
She pulls out a beautiful red kurta for DM and a purple sari for herself... Combing her hair, she sees DM winking naughtily at her with his towel around his waist... 😆😉
She shakes her head and DM annoyed gets ready and walks over to the dresser...
He picks up a small little box and opens it.. He looks at Santu who is smiling at him.. He fills her maang..
DM: This too is a habit now.. but i wouldn't want it any other way..😳
Santu places a kiss on DM's cheek..
Both lost in each other's eyes, don't move..
Tring Tring!!! The alarm clock buzzes..
Santu:We are sooo late..
DM: Oops.. Not again..
Santu: You can stare at me when we get to the office!!😃😉
DM smiles at her and picks up the car keys ready to start his beautiful day with his beautiful wife..😳
Edited by SanRajDeewani - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Sanju!😊Dat was such a wonderful FF!👍🏼Luved da 21st century avatars of DM & Santu.U knw wot?My heart actually skipped a beat wen I read da sentence:He was once a diamnd merchant.😲I thought ur story will b in context 2 da present track,wer v see da 'Sanyasi' DM.....I was relieved 2 read da story!😃Waitin 4 da next 1!😍

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