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Posted: 15 years ago
#41
sorry guys for late update.........actually, i was gone out to my friends wedding and didnt get a chance to update this ff..........so here you go

knock…………..knock knock……………

Its baa and bapuji……….

Santu goes and open the door………….baa and bapuji enter their room and looking at DM baa smiles a bit…………and says DM here is your birthday gift………….but I think Santu ne tume tofa phale he de diya………

DM: how do you know baa?

Baa: bas pata chal gaya………….and smiles

After giving them their presents they both leave………………

Then both Santu and Dm was about to get close……..knock knock…………….knock knock…………….

Its kadu, shashank, toral, hitten, birwa, and Maulik……….( khemi and arjan are out of town for some work)

Kadu and shashank : Dad lagta hai mom ne aap ko phaley he gift de diya………( it seems like mom already gave you your birthday gift)

DM: hmmm……..how do you know?...........

Kadu: nothing dad , here is your birthday gift………….

Both toral and Hitten also present him with a gift………

Now Maulik

Maulik: papa, I will give you your gift this evening……….its a surprise………..

DM: chal koi baat nai………….i will wait for your gift

They all say bye and leave……….

DM to santu: kya baat hai santudi, sab kyua has kar chale gayee( why everyone left with a smile)

Santu: she realizes that there is a lipstick marks on his lips…………( Dm woh…..woh……and she smiles)

DM: what happened to you? Why are you laughing?

Santu: DM woh………….i mean there is a lipstick marks on your lips………..

DM: blushes and says ………malik of dharmpur is wearing a lipstick now……..what a life………..

Santu says there is a way to clean this lipstick……...........and Dm ask her how are you going to clean it……..

Santu say by kissing again it will come back on my lips again………….

DM: tu bahut dafur che( you are dumb)……….but santu gets all sad and dm goes to her and kiss her on her lips and then another knock knock…………This time its champakali……..she says malik I am being from choti jaati, I cant give you anything but I have got this thread from the temple……..and this will protect you from all the evil…………I will pray that you and malkin stays together for ever……….saying this DM tells her that I have always considered you as a family member and says I will wear this after taking bath……….and listening to this champakali leaves……….

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Posted: 15 years ago
#42
nice one 😳, lipstick marks for DM, that was good inspite of too many knock knocks 😆
good that arjan and khemi are out of town, they are not even required
is there anything more to come ? 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#43
Ayushi you have very wonderful,fast pace, fun and lovely ff. Keep up the good job 👏👏👏
hmm I wonder what Santu is indicating by eating raw mangos
I hope Maulik is not succesful in his plans. I hope Baa and kids tease DM regarding the lipstick mark.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#44
lip stick on DM lips. Can't imagine him in that position
🤣
Ayushi It's really gud
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Posted: 15 years ago
#45

sorry guys for late update.........actually, i was gone out to my friends wedding and didnt get a chance to update this ff..........so here you go

It's ok Ayushi. U can take ur own time. we can wait for you and it's worth for waiting also.
Till u provide this type of very cute scences we can wait for days also.
Really gud work. Thx a lot to u for providing such nice scences
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Posted: 15 years ago
#46
Thank you guys for motivating me...............I really appreciate that you guys take time to read my ff............there will be a roller coster rides in this ff......thats all for today..................i will update my ff tomorrow.................bye
Ayushi
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Posted: 15 years ago
#47
nice works ayushi very funny and animated :D
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Posted: 15 years ago
#48
Knock!! knock!!." Now who's left to give me my birthday gift" said DM as he got up to open the door."Malik let me open the door while you wipe the remaining lipstick mark" said Santu but it was too late.DM had already opened the door.Surprise Surprise it was all the Gopikas of the forum at the door."Aye Santurdi save me!!" DM yelled.Santu ran towards her Malik.DM turned towards Santu.His face was bright red with countless lipstick marks!!!😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#49
umm1234 it's tooooooooooooo gud.
Hey who all are went to dharampur. plz put some sence in Santu brain.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#50
gr8 work, cant wait to read the next part... DM is getting very saucy these day...

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