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Posted: 15 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: umm1234

Knock!! knock!!." Now who's left to give me my birthday gift" said DM as he got up to open the door."Malik let me open the door while you wipe the remaining lipstick mark" said Santu but it was too late.DM had already opened the door.Surprise Surprise it was all the Gopikas of the forum at the door."Aye Santurdi save me!!" DM yelled.Santu ran towards her Malik.DM turned towards Santu.His face was bright red with countless lipstick marks!!!😃

😆😆 yes the gopikas seem capable of this I am sure of it.
poor santu she needs a full time bodyguard to shoo away all the gopikas 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#52
Ek dum Jhakas !!!!!!!!!! Keep it up Ayushi
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Posted: 15 years ago
#53
Wonderful ayushi.Keep it up.we like ur ff so much dear.Just imagine lipstick stains on dm's lips.wow amazing
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Posted: 15 years ago
#54

thanks guys..............here you today's ff...........

Next scene……..

Everyone has arrived for the party and DM ask for maulik………….there is a grand entry……..its Maulik with some papers…………and with black coat man…………he says papa this paper is for you………….after reading it he couldn't believe what he has just read….. and tear drops from his eyes……………….everyone ask him what happened and he is not in a position to tell anyone what is written in these papers……..

Maulik: attention please…………I will tell you what it says………..it says that papa has given me POA and all the property is under my name…………..and from now on he will not do any justice but my maa( Tarulata Mahiwanshi) will do it…………everyone in this house will work under me and they cannot leave the house as they have also signed this contract…….. under which if they leave this house they will have to give me 1 crore rupees…………..

DM is about to grab maulik's coller but maulik says……….papa if I die you will be responsibe for it………..and he calls police man and says they will stay outside the house for my protection…………Maulik then says papa you have 10 min to leave this house…………or else you will be thrown out……………

Toral, Kadu and hitten couldn't do anything…………and they had to do what is written in those papers………..so they had no choice but to stay quiet for the sake of his dad………..( actually, their signature was also taken by moti )…………

DM and santu pack their stuff and is about to leave when Maulik ask them to open their suitcase……….he wanted to know if they have some precious stuff in it…………and police officer opens it and says it has nothing but their stuff…………

Dm and Santu leave after taking Baa and Bapuji's blessing……….

Dm says to Baa and Bapuji that he will come back to get his right and Baa says we will wait for you beta and our blessing are with you……………

They are walking towards a bus stand and suddenly a group of people come in car and stops in front of DM…………..Santu gets scared and hides behind DM...........

TO BE CONT'D.......... Precap: DM is injured badly and no help............ Ayushi
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Posted: 15 years ago
#55
What a dhamka treat great job Ayushi👏👏👏
Maulik😡😡😡
Poor DM& Santo😭😭😭 what a horrible present for birthday.
And DM gets injured
Ayushi you better run😆 after giving that precap.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#56
i know piku, if i dont run all those gopikas are going to come after me...........but trust me after every dark night there is a bright sunny day.......or something like that.............but in any case, gopikas wont be disappointed............for sure😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
#57

Gr8 scene Ayushi, its real good to see DM struggle a little but please dont hurt him too much😭. He will now see hard times with Santu making their relationship more stronger,which in the actual serial will probably not happen. Thanks.

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Posted: 15 years ago
#58

Sorry guys, the corrected update is on page 9

Ayushi
Edited by Ayushi_01 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#59

Get well soon DM, you need to kick that Maulik and her mother out of the house very soon 😡 Maulik proves that he is not DM's son in any ways.

Agree with Sanraj Deewani, these hard times will make their relationship more stronger which is a good think for us
I wonder what was Santu doing in school uniform 😕
gr8 job Ayushi 👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
#60
Ayushi dear, great stories👏👏 Loved all of them. Aww, poor DM, so sad, how his own nephew/son turned him out of his own home

What, Santu in school uniform😆 Sounds great!

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