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Posted: 15 years ago
Once again fab Ayushi.. I hope DM is okay, Bacteria and Airhead will pay big time for hurting him..
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Posted: 15 years ago
thanks fuzzyface and sanrajdeewani for liking my ff..........dont worry both mr and mrs airhead bacteria will be gone for good......just how that you have to watch out for..............so stay tuned.......
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Posted: 15 years ago
OMG Ayushi.. dont make DM suffer.. write sume nice scenes that we all want to see😭😭
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Ayushi_01

Thanks leena for liking this ff........now only God can save DM........sorry yaar i had to introduced this twist............hopefully u will enjoy it...........



no need to say thanks u know i will never accept that in friendship.
i enjoying it but plzzzz little bit think about my request.
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Posted: 15 years ago
hi guys here you go this weeks update................on viewers choice DM is back.........

Dm is struggling for his life, he is trying hard to remove the rope from his neck…….but unable to do so………..DM is sweating very badly…………before leaving the place goons try to set DM in fire……….the factory is burning and we see these baddy laughing at Dm and his very existence………then we see Khemi coming there and enjoying the scene and says well done guys, you are superb…………and then she says lets go from here………….DM face is turning red…………

Next scene

Santu who is sitting in her room is getting restless and says baa, I don't feel good……..to which baa says that in this condition it is quite normal, don't worry beta………..everything will be alright ……just say all is well………..but santu is touching her tummy and says please god don't let anything happened to my DM……she gets out of her bed and goes towards the mandir…………she says Khoidyar maa please save my husband, as I can feel that something is not right……….please maa and she tries to pick diya in her hand is singing aarti and says maa I won't be leaving this diya, until you bring back my DM………..

ON the other hand we see DM struggling and on the other hand we see gods face…….suddenly, we see khemi entering the house and laugh at santu and says in her head that " pray santu, but no point, as you wont be getting your husband back"………..and she goes from there……….

Next scene…….

Kanji who is walking towards the field sees smoke coming from the old factory……he goes towards the factory and see DM and rope around his throat……….kanji then fires a shot and DM fell on the ground and then Kanji tries to pick him up and get him outside the factory…………he takes DM to his house and calls vaidji……….vaidji comes there and examine DM……..he says these burns will go away, but thank god that you have saved him on time other wise he would'nt have survived………….Vaidji says that you give him this medicine and he will be ok……………Kanji says that I wont spare anyone who did this to my malik……….then we see Dm gaining consciousness again……………he says how did I get here………..then in flashback kanji says everything to DM……………..DM says thank you Kanji and I own you my life…………….Kanji says do you know who these people were and why did they wanted to harm you………….DM says it is none other than Khemi and Arjan…………they have become so greedy for money that they wanted to kill me…………….i mean my own son……………..Kanji says I wont spare him……….DM then tries to stop him

DM says that he is my enemy and I wont spare him…………DM says tell every villager to meet me in the mandir and I will do the nyay today………..kanji goes and call DM's family member to the village and even santu is happy to hear that DM has called everyone in Mandir which means that he is fine………..she thanks khoidyar maa……………….everyone is in mandir and waiting for malik to appear………..then we see khemi , arjan, baa, bapuji, santu, birwa, kaddu, meghna, rasik, champakali and suraj standing in the mandir………….then we see DM entering the mandir and goes to sit on his nyay chair……………khemi and arjan is shocked to see him and gets worried……………..

The end

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Posted: 15 years ago
Wow, Ayushi, another great addition👏👏 Kanji the rescuer, I miss seeing him now. DM and Kanji always respected and liked each other.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Amazing Ayushi,

it is great to see DM back in action and ready to punish cruella and bacteria...
Kanji rocked in our imagination even though he is missing in action in Bandini
Edited by anna44 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Malli di i am glad that you liked it.................only two more episodes before the final climax day..............stay tuned.........
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Posted: 15 years ago
Keep it up Ayushi😃 Looking forward to your next chapter.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Great Work Ayushi,

Khanji Saving DM and DM him self is going to give dhand to Bacteria Couple. Gud yaar.
Just remembering DM giving Punishment to jagmohan

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