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Posted: 15 years ago
Ayushi we are ready for that. We all sure that u can't go behind EKTHA & Her Dufford CV's. So no problem for us
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Posted: 15 years ago
Aaaahh..aakhir kisi ne to insaaf kiya na. Thanx Ayushi_01....what else could one ask for?..Motibhen-Toilet cleaner!..Muaahahahaaa..dramaqueen deserves it!..shes only ever given sh*t to others now maybe she might have an idea of how revolting gandigi (filth/ dirt) actually is!....what goes round comes round WOMAN!...u gave sh*t (to everyone...specially Santu) now CLEAN it!!! 🤣
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Posted: 15 years ago
Enjoying this very much Ayushi.. I love reading your updates.. always a cliffhanger though.. but still they are wow..
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Posted: 15 years ago

Kudos for you Ayushi for punishing Airhead, Moti and Maulik.

they deserve ever inch of it.....I don't mind if you punish bacteria too ....BUT LET HIM ROT IN HELL...
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Posted: 15 years ago
Thanks everyone for enjoying my ff...........but i cant help it.........sometime i think if i should make santu suffer and DM to help her but i just dont have to courage to do it...........I love our sanraj so much that i cannot do injustice to them...............
Ayushi
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Ayushi_01

Thanks everyone for enjoying my ff...........but i cant help it.........sometime i think if i should make santu suffer and DM to help her but i just dont have to courage to do it...........I love our sanraj so much that i cannot do injustice to them...............

Ayushi

Awwww.glad to hear it...but "u gotta b cruel to b kind"...life is afterall full of ups n downs..so it would b rather unrealistic if things were always hunky dory for Sanraj...the twists n turns liven things up a bit i guess....
that does not mean i approve of the tracks so far im just stating a general statement.....i think Sanraj have been tortured enough..
Heres some poetry dedicated to our beloved Sanraj....(DM thinking of Santu...)

Suno !!! Suno Tum Lot Aao Na

Jahan tum ho wo dunia kab tumhari hai
K soraj dhal gaya ha Aur Haseen ik sham utri hai
wo dekho chand nikla hai sitary jagmgaey hain
Humari Muntazir Ankhen
Duaian mangti Ankhen
Tumhain hi sochti Ankhen
Tumhain hi Dhondti Ankhen
Tumhain Wapis bulati hain
Tumara Aks phir shaid Meri palkon main utra hai
Koi Ansoo ager aya Baha ker
ab na le jaey Ye Dil jab bhi dharkta hai
tumara nam Leta ha Ye Ansoo jab bhi behty hain
Tumharay dukh main behty hain
K barish jab bi hoti ha tumhay hi yad karti ha
Khushi koi jo aaiea gi tumary bin adhoori ha

Suno Tum Lot Aao Na Suno Tum Lot Aao Na !!!

😭
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Posted: 15 years ago
thanks sanraj lover............what a song.........goes straight into your heart................lagta ha kutch kutch hota hai...............Sanraj have turned me into a complete besharam...............
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Posted: 15 years ago

Next scene…….

Moti comes out of the bathroom all clean and wearing clean saree…..she is about to enter the ground when crow shit falls on her……….she is very much disappointed and says hai raam……and then the jailor says your time is up and you should take this plate and go to lunch room or else the lunch room will be closed……………so she tries to clean the shit with leaves and then go to the room with her plate to eat…………

She has her plate full and is about to sit on the chair, when her fellow jail-inmates tries to remove the chair……..she falls on the ground along with the daal on top of her head……………she is very much irritated and then the jailor comes to inquire about what is happeing……….then another prisoner says that Moti was trying to sit and she fell…………..moti is upset and goes out of that room……………..

In Mahiyawanshi house………..

Santu and DM are in the room together when Santu ask him….DM don't you have to go to work today?

DM: Well not exactly, hitten is there to take care of the stuff and besides you need me…don't you?

Santu: yeh but I think DM you should go to the factory and see the work by yourself and besides everyone is here to take care of me…………

DM: chal theek chee, if you say so I will go…………he touch santu's tummy and says papa is going and you take care of yourself and mummy too………..

DM goes and tell baa to take care of santu…….to which baa says you don't worry you focus on your work………….he goes………..

In a meanwhile khemi thinks what else I could do to destroy santu's happiness…………then she comes up with a plan and tell mr bacteria what to do……………then bacteria makes a call………..

Meanwhile santu is taking tips from baa with regards to taking care of baby……then kaddu comes in with a glass of juice and says maa drink it ………..to which she does……….she says maa don't worry I will take care of you……..i am sure you are missing dad…………….

Suddenly DM's car stops and goons surrounds the car and take out DM from it………..they tie DM's hand and feet and put something in DM's mouth…………..they take him to DM's old diamond factory……you cannot see any worker there…………..this factory is in jamkhambadyea………..these goons says that you have done justice always and now its our turn……they say your saza is fanci…..we will strangle you until your last breath is gone………..the make him stand on this chair and rope around his throat………..they open the cloth from his mouth and ask him about his last wishes………he says who are you? And what have I done to you?........what do you need????.........the guy says you only have one wish so say it quickly as we don't have time for this……….

DM says I want to talk to my wife………..these goons say you call her but you cannot talk to her………then DM says fine……….he got to hear her voice and he is crying and saying that I wont be able to see my child's face………….please khoidyar maa save me……………..but these goon removes that chair from DM's feet and now DM is struggling…………..it is hard for him to take oxygen……….his throat is red and tears are droping from his cheeks/………….goons are happy to see him struggling and they call Mr bacteria and then Mr bacteria gets happy…………and says you will get your money…………now leave before someone see you……………goons leave and Dm trying to struggle for his life…………

THE END

PRECAP: We hear a gun shot…………..

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Ayushi

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Posted: 15 years ago
Ayushi,
What is this yaar...our DM is fighting for life....
DM ko Kya Hoga AAB...😭
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Posted: 15 years ago
yaar aana har time to DM happy nai ho sakta............if i make him and santudi happy then there is not joy to it,.............a bit of suffereing is ok........otherwise the story would look like fairytale story.............you will be happy again...............
Ayushi

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