SanRaj Moments We wish For (Updated pg 49)

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leena

@leena04

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Posted: 15 years ago

#31

Hay RAKHIE I know I am became very naughty & more Besharm but plz CAN U MAKE SOME LOVELY NIGHT MOMENT FOR R SUNRAJ.

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PLZ ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️

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farhana

@Rakhie_08

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Posted: 15 years ago

#32

Thank you dishum04 and leena04.

OMG, I never expected you all to like it so much. I'm really touched by your praises. Thanks.

As for becoming besharam leena, you know what they say. Birds of a feather flock together! 🤣

I can and have written quite naughty stuff before (All within the boundaries of decency..but racy nontheless). But if I start writing to my full potential than I fear I may just be banned from IF!! 🤣

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rpmenon

@rpmenon

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Posted: 15 years ago

#33

Rakhie updated! Goodieee!!

Another realistic scene,Rakhie.I can totally see this happening.You know,why dont you change the title to "Possible SanRaj Moments" or "Scenes we would like to see" ..You know better wordings,so that CVs,if they lurk on,will catch this thread,and read it.Also,another suggestion is to update everything together somewhere on the first page so that all moments stays intact,together on the first page..

Just a suggestion..You can decide how you want it later...I just want those CVs to read this for sure,and not miss it.

Also,all the kisses go on her cheek or forehead,because Aasiya is a young girl.I am ok with it,and I also cant see DM in steamy scenes,just dont go well with me.As such,the hay business still has some disapproval from me. :) Not what they did :)) But the place.Well,if i say more,khalrika will come and scold me more :(

Write more,pretty please?

I am your #1 fan! 😳

Edited by rpmenon - 15 years ago

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farhana

@Rakhie_08

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Posted: 15 years ago

#34

Radhika thank you. And agreed I can't see DM doing steamy scenes either. I like the tenderness more than the full-on passion.

And I'd prefer kisses on the cheeks and forehead to a lip synch anyday. Once that is shown the magic is lost. What could be is almost always more alluring that what is.

I will definitely take your ideas on board. I spent this morning thinking about possible titles, but couldn't think of anything that would really grab CV's attention.

AS to updating all the scenes on the first page, I will run out of space eventually no? What I might do is put up the links to all the updated scenes instead. Would that work?

Edited by Rakhie_08 - 15 years ago

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Megha

@MeghaSRKLover

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Posted: 15 years ago

#35

aww both of them are really sweet and touchng

very creative Rakhie! 👏

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rpmenon

@rpmenon

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Posted: 15 years ago

#36

Sure..That would do too! So that they dont loose patience in skipping pages to see the next one..

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Just saw the title..Brilliant! Now,we have to watch out! 😆

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farhana

@Rakhie_08

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Posted: 15 years ago

#37

I've reposted this here so that all scenes are in one place. The link to is also in the first post on page 1.

To Have And To Hold

Santo suddenly sits up in bed breathing erratically and feeling scared. The sudden jerk also shocks DM out of his sleep.

He sees her in such a state and puts an arm around her. 'Aye Santuri...it's Ok...did you see a bad dream? Don't fear....come...shhh....be calm...come here...I'm here....you have nothing to fear'

All the while he is gently trying to lay her back on the bed. Santu somewhat calmed by his words lays down in the crook of his arm and places a hand on his chest, to reassure herself that DM is there.

DM softly tells her to sleep, then lays his head on the pillow too and watches her as she slowly closes her lids again.

The first rays of the sun hit his face the following morning and his eyes flicker open. He looks around and is about to stretch his arm when he realises that Santu is still sleeping on it. He turns and looks at her for a moment whilst she is sleeping.

He brushes away some hair from her face and traces her cheeks across the jawline. Santu stirs from her sleep and opens her eyes to find her husband looking back at her with a small sweet smile on his face.

'Malik you are awake already?' He merely hmms. She lifts herself up. Her hair has come loose during the night, and DM is enchanted by how lovely she looks. She says 'You freshen up and I'll get you your tea'

DM says 'Actually today I don't feel like tea'

She looks at him quizically. 'Why?

DM - 'Just. don't feel like it'.

Santu - 'To phir aapko kiya chaye?'

DM leans over her and putting an arm around her back lowers her back on the bed before Santu has a chance to realise what he's doing.

He uses his other hand to stroke her hair and says in his ever so sexy, deep voice 'Tujhe chaye'. He places a small kiss on her forehead......and fade to the next scene!!!!