New SS: Imperfectly Perfect Chapter 13 updated on pg 27 - Page 4

Seher's POV

Allah!! How can sumone be so handsome...?!

She saw him as soon as he entered the venue along with CEO... he was looking dangerously handsome in that white shirt and black trousers paired with a blazer.

She couldn't take her eyes off until she saw that he was too looking for her... she won't be able to meet his melting gaze!

Zahir's POV

He was thanking everyone as politely as he could... But now it was getting on his nerves... he really needed to talk to her!

He finally managed to shoo everyone away... and started approaching her.

Seher's POV

Kya woh meri taraf he aa rahe hai?

She asked herself as she saw him approaching her. Her heart began beating faster and faster and faster...

She could never realize when he had stated to affect her so much...

Tauba.. yeh kya ho raha mujhe?

Zahir's POV

He could sense her nervousness as she played with the corner of her dupatta...

I love it!!!

He finally reached near her... but he didn't want to spill the beans...

The proposal would be a surprise...!

And definitely not now!!

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Precap: Proposal!!!

Res!!😉😛/Unres..!!! Yes Me first! 🥳 Awsum start Nandu. Loved Saher and Her cuteness.😳 The banner is beautiful! ❤️ Loved how she handled everything.❤️ And Zahir, he seems the perfect hero of every story. and he is proposing her, all the best dude! 👍🏼 Thanx fr pm, Continue Soon.

The story is really good and interesting but i got confused regarding few things:

Unresd My Spot Above! 😊

good work dear..

Hey sorry for replying late...

Awesome update...I'm really liking the story and the way ur showing both of their POVs Zahir is and the banner is very beautiful😳

Originally posted by: libsrocks

The story is really good and interesting but i got confused regarding few things:

1) Try to differentiate between thoughts and dialogues! Make the thoughts or any dialogue characters says to himself/herself in italics!

2) Please do mention who spoke the dialogue to whom. Either use:-

"dialogue", he/she said

or use this format

Seher: her dialogues

Zahir: his dialogues

I'm sorry if i offended you! I just thought to make your beautiful fanfic look more comfortable to read! I have no intention to demotivate you because i love your fanfic and it's storyline!