Aa jaa tujh ko pukaaray...ansh FF (last part updated )on 15/10 pg 18 - Page 9

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Posted: 11 years ago
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radhika...where is the update?update soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: kanika_S

radhika...where is the update?update soon..


i was really busy..give me..1 hr.i will update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: radhika_k2


i was really busy..give me..1 hr.i will update...


ok...but do update...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Liked your story @Radhika.

It is coming up nice.

Waiting for next update and Thanks for PM.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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part 7
"woh..i have no idea inspector..."anandi told."apki koi dushman?"(do have any enemies?)the inspector asked."no..."she told."mr.shekhar one minute." shiv and the inspector were about to go."vikrant...vikrant singh"anandi shouted .


shiv and the inspector went near anandi."kun vikrnat anandi?"(who vikrant anandi?)shiv asked."woh..shiv theen din pehele ..jab ke kahi se ghar wapas aa rahi thi toh yeh vikrant singh anpne biwi aur bache ko bahoot maar raha tha aur bache apne maa se alag ki thi..so..i had filed a case and usse arrest kar vaya tha...toh isliye..shaayad.."(shiv three days back when i was returning back home ..that time vikrant singh was hitting his wife and children.and he also tried to separate the children from their mother so i had filed a case and arrested him..so thats why...maybe...)anandi told."toh anandi why din't you tell me all this?"shiv asked."shiv..woh.."before anandi could complete"vikrant singh...mr shekhar..i want to talk to you in private."the inspector told.


they came out of the room."yes inspector..""woh humne vikrant ko arrest ki thi lekin he escaped two days back..."(we had arrest vikrant but he escaped two days back.)"what do you mean by he escaped..how could you be so irresponsible?if something had happened to anandi...""relax mr.shekhar we understand..we are trying to find him...""i don't know anything..but i want him arrested in 24 hours."shiv told angrily."yes sir..."the inspector told and left.


shiv went back to the room."kya hua shiv?"(what happened shiv ) anandi asked.he cupped her face."kuch bhi nahi...aap bilkul chinta maat ki jiye." (nothing...you don't worry at all.)she just smiled.just then jagdeesh came."how are you anandi?"he asked.she just smiled.he checked her."good..tum theek ho rahi ho.dhoo din mein tum ghar ja sakti.(good... you are getting well.you can go home in two days .) he told."thanx jagya.."she told. " thanx...?yeh toh meri kaam hai."(thanx..?this is my work.)jagya was about to go."jagdeesh"shiv called out.he turned back."jagdeesh i am sorry...""nahi shiv..tumhari koi galti nahi..agar koi tumhare staan mein hota toh kahi karta..shayaad mein bhi."(no shiv..its not your fault ...anyone in your place would have done the same..maybe evevn me.)he told and he went.

in the night.(BH)sumitra was walking from one side to another in anger. bharion came and asked her what happened?app ne kyu roka mhuje... anandi ke saath rahne se?"(why did you stop me from staying with anandi?)"lekin sumitra ..woh hospital hain aur waha sirf ek anandi ke saath raha sakta hai..."(but sumitra..thats hospital and only one person can stay with anandi.)"wahi toh..mein mere lado ke saath rahti."(thats it..i would have stayed with my lado.)"sumitra..ab usse tumse zayada shiv ki zaroorat hai.."(sumitra..now she needs shiv more than you.)"shiv..shiv..shiv
..itni salo se woh nahi tha na..tab miene hi uski bekbal ki hai na... meri lado ki halta ki wajah wahi hai"( shiv...shiv..shiv...was he there years back...that time i have only taken care of anandi ...and he his the reason for my lado's situation..)bhairon was shocked,

"sumitra..tumhe kya ho gaya hai?ab uski zindagi shiv ke saath hi hai..aur woh shiv se bahoot pyaar karyi hai...manta hoon ki unke bech mein galatfami ho gayi thi...par woh shiv ke bina nahi rahe sakyi.."(sumitra...what has happened to you?now her life is with shiv...and she loves shiv alot...i agree that there was some misunderstanding between them ...but she cannot live without shiv.)"app kuch bhi kahe...ab meri baachi uss ke saath aur us ghar mein kabhi nahi jayegi..bas bahut saheliya usne..."(what ever you tell..now my child wont won't go with him nor stay in that house...enough she has tolarated a lot.)telling this sumitra went.bhairon was shocked.

to be continued

hope all of you like it..

Edited by radhika_k2 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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yeh me first..
loved it...
please continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i have a small request ..please don't just like..please comment and tell me if i was wrong somewhere...so i can improve it...
both good and bad comments are most welcome...a comment means a lot to me..
thanks..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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vikrant singh...a new character...
nice to see ur story line..

and sumi...😲

continue soon...waiting for hte next...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: kanika_S

yeh me first..

loved it...
please continue soon


congo and thanx..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: HemaG

vikrant singh...a new character...

nice to see ur story line..

and sumi...😲

continue soon...waiting for hte next...


thanx...will update soon..😊

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